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Wild (A story.)

Postby -Compass- » Tue Feb 21, 2012 5:26 am

This is a story I'm writing in real life, but I thought I'd post some on here to see what people thought. (Exuse my terrible spelling- sorry)

Chapter 1:
Rosie urgered StarDream into a gallop, as the wind whipped through her hair, driving it into her face. Pushing it back, she let out a "Yee hah!" as StarDream's hooves ate up the ground. Eventally, she slowed to a canter, then a trot.She had reached her house. She stared at it. It was red, a two-story. It looked a tiny bit big from the outside,but otherwise it was normal. The only abnormal thing about her house, was the garden. Rosie's parents owned around 1000 acres of land. On the right side, there was a massive, dominating barn. As she jumped off StarDream and started to lead her toward the barn, Sam, Tthe main instroucter passed. "Hi, just takin' these kids out into the school." He said, pointing to the large indoor school. Although Rosie was aout to say she was going to take FireBlaze in there for a pratise at jumping, she sighed and nodded her head. "Why couldn't my parents just keep the stables to themselves?" She thought. "Why did they have to make it a riding school?" Sam studied her for a moment, then called "OK, come on girls!" Five girls then went past Rosie, smiling at her as they went. Rosie reconised Katie on Othello, pulling a grim face as she went, Laura on Magpie, smiling madly, Rose (her namesake) on Blue Clouds and two girls she didn't know on Choclate Pudding and Punch. Waving to the girls as they walked into the school, she sighed once more then led StarDream toward her stable, opening the door then locking it after them.

CHAPTER 1 TO BE COUNTIED...
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Re: Wild (A story.)

Postby -Compass- » Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:13 am

Up. Please read/comment!
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