The Luck of the Star (St. Patrick's Day Story)

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The Luck of the Star (St. Patrick's Day Story)

Postby the force awakens. » Tue Feb 21, 2012 3:16 am

This is the life, I thought. Just going around in circles for millions of years.
That was what I was a year ago. Now, there's a new star around, and he's changing everything.
A star? Yes, that is what I am. My name is also Starice Trishinia. I am a white star, making the whole world bright. Luckily, I am not the sun. But, let's get back to "he."
"He" is known as Trine Stinsto, a white star, like me. He isn't very local, as you see, because he's our entertaining star.
Before Trine and his family came to our constellation, Artemis, life was very dull. We tried to not be seen elsewhere, ruining the constellation others saw. But Trine, a star who was expelled from school in his old constellation, came, and he explained how his old town celebrated many events called holidays. We had celebrated Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa, Chinese New Year, and Valentine's Day. But now, Trine was telling us about St. Patrick's Day, a day where luck came to anyone who wore green. We were excited, and now, let's get to the story.
".....And soon, people had good luck for the week!" Trine explained to everyone listening, including me. I had a crush on Trine, and sparks flew whenever we were face to face, despite the fact that it would spark any time that we were close enough to each other. My family is all red and yellow, so it was suprising I was born a white star. But, I knew my family was smart to end my thoughts.
"Starice!" yelled Mom. "I need to get to Startar. With Trine telling a new story, I can go shopping for St. Patrick's Day and keep little Renice entertained. Will you watch Renice for me while I'm gone?"
"Sure," I said. Sometimes whenever Trine is telling stories and I babysit, Mom should pay Trine instead of me. He's an instant babysitter. Mom overpays me, but I get over it.
Mom gave me Renice and was running to the car. "Bye girls!" Mom yells.
Usually, Renice is crazy without Mom. But, with Trine around, I usually give him a forth of my money from babysitting. I get paid $10 from babysitting an hour, so Trine gets paid lots from Mom.
Soon, Renice is in Trine's arms. It looks like he is about to tickle her, a no-no to Renice, so I yelled, "NO!!!!!"
Part 2 is out soon!
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