Taken- By: Jayden Demorest

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Taken- By: Jayden Demorest

Postby SquidLuver<3 » Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:43 am

------------------Never Safe Here--------------------
Chapter 1
San’s Tragedy
I really never ever thought this would happen! I said kind of lying about that. Not like I killed him! I just knew he would die eventually but not like this from this I felt like I needed to figure out who did that. But I kept persuading myself do you want to get killed by the Monster? I was afraid that monster that killed San would come and kill me! This day couldn’t get worse. Really this whole year was just nothing better than Emotional Toll on me having so many deaths in such a little tiny year! I stared down one last time at this broken body and felt a tear welling up in my eye. Please don’t cry! I thought to myself how embarrassing would that be if my friend walked in. Nobody understands what I have faced what I have gone through beside’s three people me, myself and I.
I felt so sad like I could just go in a corner and cry all year long. Hibernating like a bear but I would cry and sleep instead of just sleep. I crinkled my nose and felt something some kid of power coming straight out of both of my eyes like some kind of anger ball staring at my Dead cousin San. That really was a monster that can just kill somebody for doing nothing. Then I thought of my family members what if it is somebody I know or hang out with all the time that would be so scary… But I did not care I was determine to find mister or misses let’s just call him/her MONSTER for short in till we find out the name.
I didn’t know where to start! I am not a detective. My brain started talking to me and it said “Well you need to talk to your mom or somebody like San’s parents to figure out more in then if the stupid mind of yours is that dumb hire a friend like Margret she is a lawyer. Well her Dad is…. I rolled my eyes like I was talking to a Divaish hair flipping kindergartener. I walked out of the room and sat in the lobby chair and thought about my Aunt and Uncle they were right inside of the lobby to! This is a perfect opportunity I will ask them now!
I didn’t want to look to desperate so I got up slowly talked myself into it and went over even more slowly. “Um…. Aunt Becky I know it is a little too soon to ask this… But I need to know more about San death.” “If that is okay with you I mean I am not ordering you around by any means.” Uncle Stan seemed like he was okay about the death so he told me “Well San went to go for a walk and he said he was going to his friend’s house it is only like 3-4 houses down though!
I stared at him with wonder in my eyes trying to put all of this in my brain so I could write it down later. “Continue on Please” I bellowed. He scratched his arm and continued. “Well, San was always a very you would know Macy he liked to adventure around. I thought maybe now that he and his friend went for a walk. But why would his friend not disappear. It just doesn’t make much sense at all if you think about it.
I thought for a second and decided that was enough for now I thanked him and walked back in to my lobby seat. I got out a little green notepad in my purse that I always carry with me and wrote so much down that I used 24 pages in my notebook. I smiled for my accomplishment and was thinking hard when I thought about San and his friend “going for a walk”. Then I started to question about his friend I had meant Justin before and he was always crazy and secretive. Was he responsible for San’s death! I jumped up and decided I better go home and talk to Margret. She can keep any secret any.
I got in the Elevator and jumped in the car my mom was waiting there. I didn’t say anything about the San and Justin thing I just sat there in complete silence. Finally Mrs., Huber my mom said “So how did it go was San doing okay?” She didn’t know about his death! I felt crushed HOW WAS I GOING TO TELL HER! San was her all time favorite cousin! “I shook my head and decided to tell her later. “Um… you know he is doing okay.” I lied to my teeth again. She seemed happy “Great! I glad they found him!”
“Yah! Me too I said “I am going to get out now okay I am going to actually go to Margret’s house is that okay? I asked. “Well yah! But be careful remember what San went through! I closed my eyes and because I thought of San and his mangled body on the bed. I ran as fast as I could to Margret’s I had to pass Justin’s house on the way. I was petrified by him now I will never forgive him if he was responsible for his death. And right now I was too scared to talk to him I would have to have Margret come with me. It was 4:00 so she would be out of school like me by now. I got up to her driveway and dinged on her doorbell over one thousand times. I had to talk to her no if’s ands or butts!
She answered and was staring at me for a while when she said “Come in!” I ran inside and asked if we could go to her room and talk privately. “Yes of course Macy!” she seemed really happy I thought about how to tell her about San. We dashed up the stairs and walked quietly into her room. “Yes!” Margret said. “Well it just about San you know…… He got abducted recently and well they found him dead!” I started sobbing and I didn’t know why I was just in a hospital room saying how embarrassing that would be if my friend walked in and saw me crying. Here I am now not crying but actually sobbing!
She had this look like I was joking and to my surprise she actually started crying. She was really close to San like me almost like they were cousins. At this moment I felt even worse for dragging her into this. But I knew this battle was not even close to over. I pulled out my note pad and wrote down the 3 thing’s I still have to do to solve this. 1: Go to Justin’s with Mar. 2: Tell Mom about San. 3: Solve the whole case! And 3 was definitely the biggest one yet. I stopped crying and asked Margret if she would be so kind to come with me. I hadn’t told the walk story. Because I didn’t want her to be scared. She would have to be brave like me.
“Okay! Anything for you I am so sorry for you really I am!” I shake my head and then I let out a sie. It is really okay I just need you to come with me just this one time! “Okay let’s go” She said sounding brave I am ready. We got on are jacket and ran outside. I felt bad still for not telling Margret about the walk. But I didn’t care right now I was praying to God that Justin was not the killer he had proof and he could actually help us with this mystery.
Finally, after what felt like a year we arrived at the MONSTER’S house. I was trembling from the cold and scared running through my body. I ran the door bell and waited nobody came. What if Justin was gone too! What if his parents killed both of them and hide them! I started getting more mad than scared now that his parents would do that! I knew well thought I knew something for actually one second Justin wasn’t the MONSTER Justin’s parents were!

Chapter 2
Little Miracle 1
I felt that weird anger ball coming back in my eyes but worse this time. I stared at the door and I saw the door handle twist and turn when suddenly it unlocked and opened! Margret was staring with amazement but what if Justin’s parents were playing there little tricks to let’s just say do what they did to Justin and San. I clenched my fist and opened the door. “Please be okay I can’t die this young. I knew Margret could sense my fear
(Still adding more so come back tommorow and see a nother chapter!)
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Re: Taken- By: Jayden Demorest

Postby SquidLuver<3 » Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:45 am

Feel free to post events that you want to happen in the story. Or what you want the name to be I am not 100 percent sure it is going to be Taken.
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Re: Taken- By: Jayden Demorest

Postby SquidLuver<3 » Tue Feb 21, 2012 3:45 am

Anybody up for roleplay go to my post to see my Teen RolePlay boarding School Experience Have FUN!!!
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Re: Taken- By: Jayden Demorest

Postby SquidLuver<3 » Mon Feb 27, 2012 1:09 pm

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Re: Taken- By: Jayden Demorest

Postby SquidLuver<3 » Tue Feb 28, 2012 9:12 am

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