Child of the Holocaust

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Re: Child of the Holocaust

Postby KariSohma22 » Sun Feb 19, 2012 2:23 am

Thank you! And I know it's a complex and hard subject to talk about, but it's a memoir for those kids who dies, and it makes me feel good to honor them.
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When you try your best but you don't succeed
When you get what you want but not what you need
When you feel so tired but you can't sleep
Stuck in reverse

And the tears come streaming down your face
When you lose something you can't replace
When you love someone but it goes to waste
Could it be worse?

Lights will guide you home
And ignite your bones
And I will try to fix you

And high up above or down below
When you're too in love to let it go
But if you never try you'll never know
Just what you're worth
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Re: Child of the Holocaust

Postby lavendeer » Sun Feb 19, 2012 9:46 am

Oh yeah. I am trying to write a book on a second holocaust, where they're trying to make a perfect world. But its terrible learning about all the horrible things they did....
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Re: Child of the Holocaust

Postby KariSohma22 » Sun Feb 19, 2012 12:47 pm

Yeah. It is isn't it?
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When you try your best but you don't succeed
When you get what you want but not what you need
When you feel so tired but you can't sleep
Stuck in reverse

And the tears come streaming down your face
When you lose something you can't replace
When you love someone but it goes to waste
Could it be worse?

Lights will guide you home
And ignite your bones
And I will try to fix you

And high up above or down below
When you're too in love to let it go
But if you never try you'll never know
Just what you're worth
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Re: Child of the Holocaust

Postby KariSohma22 » Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:43 am

OMG OMG OMG! My poem is going to be in the program for the play! It's that thing they hand you was you walk into the theater. ^_^ I'm so friggin happy now!
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When you try your best but you don't succeed
When you get what you want but not what you need
When you feel so tired but you can't sleep
Stuck in reverse

And the tears come streaming down your face
When you lose something you can't replace
When you love someone but it goes to waste
Could it be worse?

Lights will guide you home
And ignite your bones
And I will try to fix you

And high up above or down below
When you're too in love to let it go
But if you never try you'll never know
Just what you're worth
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