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I would like to note that this a story I am creating. It is a book, and hopefully people enjoy reading it. I have written about 12 chapters of it, but right now I am only going to post part of Chapter 1. Please enjoy!
(P.S. Notes from me will look like this so you can easily pick them out from the story.)
Chapter 1
Crack! Snap!
"He-Hello? Is any-b-body there?" a small young voice spoke out in the dark woods. A fine mist had settled, creating a horror movie atmospere when combined with the deathly silence and darkness of the moonless night.
CRACK!! "AHH!" she shrieked. "P-Please! Just st-stop doing that and sho-sh-show yourself!"
An enourmous, thunderring growl echoed among the trees. "Who are you?" it asked.
"A-A-A-"
"OUT WITH IT!"
She gulped. "Angel."
"Explains the apearance."
"Wait! Wh-who are you?"
"Doesn't matter. It's not like we'll become friends or anything."
"Just t-t-tell me, p-please!"
Man, she's scared. She'll probably explode if I don't tell her, she's shaking so badly. Besides, I guess she IS still a pup… "Fine," he growled. He stepped out from his cover behind the trees. "I am Shadow."
"You're hu-huge!" She jumped when she saw his eyes. "Your eyes! They're-they're-th-"
"They're red. I know."
"How old are you?" she asked, amazed at his size.
"A year."
"I'm ten months."
"Nice. Don't worry, you'll get this big. Bye now." He turned and began walking away.
"Wait! Don't go!" She started following after him.
"Go away…" he growled at her.
"But I want to go with you. I'm scared being on my own…" She looked trustingly up into his eyes.
"You can't." he muttered.
She stopped, still looking up at him. "Why not?"
"It's against both of our laws."
"What?" She sounded comepletely confused.
She seriously doesn't know our laws? I learned them when I was 3 months old. He sighed and rolled his eyes.
"You are an angel wolf from Heaven. You have pure white fur that glows, but yet you can always stay hidden. You're eyes are like golden spheres of light. You have angel wings and a halo.
"I am a shadow wolf. I came from Hell. I have pitch black fur and demon wings, and not to mention my eyes. We both have magic, yes, but my point is that the two of us shouldn't even be looking at each other, let alone talking."
"I don't care," she said.
"What?" he asked in amazement.
"I. Don't. Care."
I would like to note that this a story I am creating. It is a book, and hopefully people enjoy reading it. I have written about 12 chapters of it, but right now I am only going to post part of Chapter 1. Please enjoy!
(P.S. Notes from me will look like this so you can easily pick them out from the story.)
Chapter 1
Crack! Snap!
"He-Hello? Is any-b-body there?" a small young voice spoke out in the dark woods. A fine mist had settled, creating a horror movie atmospere when combined with the deathly silence and darkness of the moonless night.
CRACK!! "AHH!" she shrieked. "P-Please! Just st-stop doing that and sho-sh-show yourself!"
An enourmous, thunderring growl echoed among the trees. "Who are you?" it asked.
"A-A-A-"
"OUT WITH IT!"
She gulped. "Angel."
"Explains the apearance."
"Wait! Wh-who are you?"
"Doesn't matter. It's not like we'll become friends or anything."
"Just t-t-tell me, p-please!"
Man, she's scared. She'll probably explode if I don't tell her, she's shaking so badly. Besides, I guess she IS still a pup… "Fine," he growled. He stepped out from his cover behind the trees. "I am Shadow."
"You're hu-huge!" She jumped when she saw his eyes. "Your eyes! They're-they're-th-"
"They're red. I know."
"How old are you?" she asked, amazed at his size.
"A year."
"I'm ten months."
"Nice. Don't worry, you'll get this big. Bye now." He turned and began walking away.
"Wait! Don't go!" She started following after him.
"Go away…" he growled at her.
"But I want to go with you. I'm scared being on my own…" She looked trustingly up into his eyes.
"You can't." he muttered.
She stopped, still looking up at him. "Why not?"
"It's against both of our laws."
"What?" She sounded comepletely confused.
She seriously doesn't know our laws? I learned them when I was 3 months old. He sighed and rolled his eyes.
"You are an angel wolf from Heaven. You have pure white fur that glows, but yet you can always stay hidden. You're eyes are like golden spheres of light. You have angel wings and a halo.
"I am a shadow wolf. I came from Hell. I have pitch black fur and demon wings, and not to mention my eyes. We both have magic, yes, but my point is that the two of us shouldn't even be looking at each other, let alone talking."
"I don't care," she said.
"What?" he asked in amazement.
"I. Don't. Care."
