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Re: Don't have a name for it yet...

Postby Agarwaen » Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:11 am

Read it!...please?
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Re: Don't have a name for it yet...

Postby Agarwaen » Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:42 am

Found a title! This story is now known as The Revenant Masque. It can also be found at FictionPress.com
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Re: The Revenant Masque

Postby Agarwaen » Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:11 pm

Please review...
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Re: The Revenant Masque

Postby Agarwaen » Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:27 pm

Added second half to chapt 2, I still want reviews!^^
In fact feedback is necessary for the continuation of the story
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Re: The Revenant Masque

Postby Agarwaen » Tue Feb 21, 2012 11:41 am

....I think no one likes this...o.O"
Not that I'm surprised...
I'm so whiny... :'(
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Re: The Revenant Masque

Postby Agarwaen » Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:49 am

hehe bump...
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Re: The Revenant Masque

Postby r h y m e » Thu Feb 23, 2012 2:10 pm

    [I like it! Although, I thought it was easier to read when it was centered. I read things easier that way. ^____^ Not that I am trying to fight with anyone! It's good, it has a wonderful plot. Keep writing, PWEASE!]
    If only I had a gif mustache. I could rule the world.

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Re: The Revenant Masque

Postby Agarwaen » Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:39 am

}{Thank you Brimstone^^, I'm glad you think it's good. I don't intend on stopping it, but life, school, and role-plays come first^^
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