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"Dreamwalk" A Roleplay Snippet (Comments Welcome!)

Postby Timey » Sun Feb 12, 2012 5:45 am

(Well, this is just a scene from some roleplays I do with my friends. They are completely random stories with no purpose whatsoever but to have fun! :D We do Fan Roleplays for the Disney Cartoon, "Phineas and Ferb." We've created Animal Agents, and kids of the characters on the show. Me being a Star Wars fanatic I ended up putting a few droids like C-3PO and R2-D2 in there somewhere. :roll: And we recently added a Roleplay Area to our Website where we can roleplay anything from any T.V show or Movie, ect. that we want to! But this story snippet is from the Mythical Equines we like to roleplay. And this is a love scene I typed for two of my characters. Featuring the song, "Kiss Me Slowly" by Parachute. If you haven't heard it. It's an amazing song! Look it up now!

No really. Right now.

Okay so the characters are Odett. She is a white Pegicorn Filly, with Dark Blue Swirls running through her coat. She has Ice Blue eyes, and her horn is Rainbow colors. Her mane and tail are Rainbow Peacock Feathers, with some gold ones mixed in! She's one of my most favorite characters and I totally adore her!!!

The other one is named Aztec. He is a tall bay colt with gold mixed into his brown coat, and he has Aztec Indian markings all over his body. He has a flowing Brownish/Gold Mane. Black Hooves. His wings are Black with Gold and Red Outlining them. His eyes are dark brown. ADORABLE!!!

So here is the cute story snippet! Please leave a comment!)

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"So what is it like where you live?" Aztec asked. A nice, soft song played in the background as both him and Odett made their way out to the back patio. Brandon had left the radio on earlier, and it was still chugging out songs.

"Stay with me, baby stay with me,
Tonight don't leave me alone.
Walk with me, come and walk with me,
To the edge of all we've ever known."


"Well, it's sort of forest like. Not rainforests, it's forests like, pine trees and such. Wait. I have an idea." Odett said. She was illuminated with a orange glow from the patio lights.

"I can see you there with the city lights,
Fourteenth floor, pale blue eyes.
I can breathe you in."


Aztec breathed in her sweet, comforting scent. And closed his eyes for a split moment. When he opened them, he was face to face with her. There muzzles almost touching. He was about to go for it, but then he thought better. And she backed up and touched her horn to his forehead. "Close your eyes." She said.

"Two shadows standing by the bedroom door,
No, I could not want you more than I did right then,
As our heads leaned in."


A grainy image began to appear, and suddenly he lost all consciousness of the hot, humid air and grass beneath his hooves. Suddenly he felt cold, crisp air. And his hooves felt buried in a thick, icey substance.

"Well, I'm not sure what this is gonna be,
But with my eyes closed all I see
Is the skyline, through the window,
The moon above you and the streets below.
Hold my breath as you're moving in,
Taste your lips and feel your skin.
When the time comes, baby don't run, just kiss me slowly."


Suddenly the picture before him smoothed out, and he was standing in a moonlight meadow. He saw the shadows of other pegicorns far off, and he whinnied a greeting, but somehow they did not notice him.

"They can't hear or see you." He heard Odett say, then whirled around to see her standing on a nearby hill, bathed in moonlight.

"Come on let me show you around!" She exclaimed, then reared and galloped off. Aztec smiled, then ran after her.

"Stay with me, baby stay with me,
Tonight don't leave me alone.
She shows me everything she used to know,
Picture frames and country roads,
When the days were long and the world was small."


Aztec saw a crystal clear lake nearby, and took in the scene of snowy mountains, towering cliffs, and lush, green forests and meadows.

"She stood by as it fell apart,
Separate rooms and broken hearts,
But I won't be the one to let you go."


"Oh, I'm not sure what this is gonna be,
But with my eyes closed all I see
Is the skyline, through the window,
The moon above you and the streets below.
Hold my breath as you're moving in,
Taste your lips and feel your skin.
When the time comes, baby don't run, just kiss me slowly."


Odett galloped on ahead, but suddenly she seemed to fade away, and her laughter only became an echo. He tried to gallop after her, but his surrondings also seemed to fade away, till he was in total darkness.

"Don't run away...
And it's hard to love again,
When the only way it's been,
When the only love you know,
Just walked away...
If it's something that you want,
Darling you don't have to run,
You don't have to go..."

"Just stay with me, baby stay with me,"


"Well, I'm not sure what this is gonna be,
But with my eyes closed all I see
Is the skyline, through the window,
The moon above you and the streets below. (Don't let go)
Hold my breath as you're moving in,
Taste your lips and feel your skin.
When the time comes, baby don't run, just kiss me slowly."

"Oh, I'm not sure what this is gonna go,
But in this moment all I know
Is the skyline, through the window,
The moon above you and the streets below. (Baby, don't let go)
Hold my breath as you're moving in,
Taste your lips and feel your skin.
When the time comes, baby don't run, just kiss me slowly."


Aztec's eyes shot open to find himself once again on the back patio, and what was more astonishing is that he hadn't moved an inch.

He felt the warmth of someone next to him and was relieved to find Odett still standing there by his side. She looked up at him with a knowing expression.

"Did you like it?" She asked.

"That place...was beautiful. That's where you live?" He asked. She nodded.

"The Hidden Valley. There's no place quite like it."
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(Also one other thing! One of my roleplay partners is also here, and she has posted two of our roleplay snippets! Please check them out! Her name on here is <3Chailey~Cholly<3.)
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Re: "Dreamwalk" A Roleplay Snippet

Postby chailey~cholly » Sun Feb 12, 2012 6:57 am

This is still one of my favorite scenes with AztecxOdett <3 LOVE IT SO MUCH! And Thanks for mentioning me! :)
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Re: "Dreamwalk" A Roleplay Snippet

Postby Timey » Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:00 am

You iz welcomes my fellow fangirl!!! :D :D :D
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