Foxinama Series- Sly, Book One PROLOUGE!! *please comment*

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Hearts pounded, paws thumped. Golden leaves, diamonds, and peacock feathers flew. Creatures swipe all day and sneak all night. And two-leggers don't even notice.
"I'm sorry!" Armenia yipped. Aslynn snuffed. The little kit had stepped on her paw. Schineal signaled Armenia to swipe the chips right now.
Then there was a crash. A light came on from the place two-leggers are.
"RUN!!" Aslynn yelled. Armenia stumbled and knocked over a table. Schineal sighed and pushed Armenia away. It was the worst Sunset Sneak ever! All because on un-sly Armenia, the clumsy fox.

I know its not that good. It is the prolouge from my new series, Foxinama. This is book one, which is called Sly. Please comment!

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