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My story Clips.

Postby [Braveheart] » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:11 am

Hi! I am Rainstar12. I had this little problem once of strting up a story and never finishing it, even it is pretty good. My problem was that I could never share it becasue it was TOO SHORT! but now I have found an answer, alas, I can put them all in one post! You are allowed to post here, it is fine by me! I hope you like them.

Book one- Always Watching
Sootleap just got exiled! I don't know why yet, but he did! This is what he goes through:

Soot hopped over a growing plant. A strong wind blew over the moorland. He wished he knew how to hunt on moorland. His fur was ruffled from the wind. A rabbit suddenly dashed out from a nearby bush, shaking his head and trying to remember what happened, and came to his senses, soot gave chase, pretending that the dizzying moment never happened. The rabbit seemed to be 3 tail-lengths away. Before he knew it, the rabbit was gone. Giving up, Soot stopped. he pounced anyway and lifted his paws to find nothing.
Soot sighed. He was starving and needed food soon. He couldn’t go on for much longer. Soot walked over Windclan’s moorland and with a sigh, knew he couldn’t return to the clans. Ever.
Eventually the moorland disappeared and turned to forest. He wondered if he could live here. No, this was Leafclan territory. Not gonna happen.
He halted. My kits! He thought. He had to get them back! And nothing would ever stop him. Ever. He vowed.

Book two- Blast To The Past With ThunderClan.
Thunderclan is parched. The water has dried up and cats are dying.

Woodstar looked down at his parched clan. they looked up at him hoping for a idea to get some much needed water. a small and tiny kit wandered out of the nursery. Its mother following. The helpless kit mewed” I need water please help me Woodstar. Then it passed out. The queen looked up and rushed to her kitten. “Me and my kit needs water. So take better care of the clan, until you pass away and FlameFur rises ”scolded the mom. “ I will I promise, powderwing. He said to the silvery white she-cat” Come on! Listen to her!”Screeched a white- furred apprentice “she is my sister” Powderwing picked up her kit and walked across the parched ground to the medicine den. Snowpaw looked up at the leader. “get us some water. NOW” She retorted. “okay…. Umm… FlameFur, take a few warriors and do a water patrol” FlameFur looked up. “I will do as much as I can” “FlameFur deserves to be leader” Snowpaw muttered.

Book three- Rainpaw has super powers!!! (titleless)


Chapter one Book two. Rainpaw.
Leopardheart stood outside the nursery, proudly watching skykit, Silverkit and Rainkit walk proudly over to Sparrowstar. He rested his chin on Rainkit’s head and said “From this day forward, until she has earned her warrior name, this apprentice will be called Rainpaw. And Mossyfeather, May you pass down all you know to your new apprentice." Then Sparrowstar added” you are a brave, skilled fighter. I trust that you will teach all you know to Rainpaw” Rainpaw looked at her siblings, and to Silverkit Rainpaw tripled her size. “Silverkit! Come here. From this day forward until you have earned your warrior name, you will be called Silverpaw. Now, Owlstrike, you are old enough and respected for your nonstop courage. I trust you to teach Silverpaw well. “ he looked at Skykit, who thought both sisters have doubled their size. “come here” he said softly. “until you are 14 moons, you will be called Skypaw. And your mentor will be Shadowedpelt. Teach her well, for you are known for strength. GO!” their mother, Bravespirit ran over to her kits. “I am so proud of you!” she demanded, licking a unkempt tuft of fur on Silverpaw’s ear. She dunked under her tongue and was saved by her mentor” how bout we collect moss for the elders and show you the place?” offered Owlstrike. “sure!” Silverpaw ran behind her mentor’s back. Nodding, Bravespirit headed into the nursery. Streamwhisper sat next to Sweetfoot and Cherrypaw. “come on!” called Cherrypaw. With a nod from their mentors, Silverpaw, Rainpaw and Skypaw trotted to Cherrypaw. Owlstrike murmured “lots of energy, they have” and Mossyfeather nodded. Shadowedpelt walked along quietly. Rainpaw was sitting impatiently beside the other apprentices. They dashed out of camp, mentors running behind. Trees of thousand years old loomed ahead at every pawstep Rainpaw took. Next to her, skypaw’s muscles rippled under her pelt, making Rainpaw skitterish . she was first born, anyway. As they padded on, Rainpaw ended up getting used to it and loved leaping over logs, skirting brambles, dodging trees. She smelled the air blissfully. Cherrypaw halted and said” the mossy clearing where we will collect moss” then after a few awes, and oohs they continued on their way. After traveling a bit more, Cherrypaw almost missed the owl tree. “wait!” Shadowedpelt announced. “the owl tree! An owl used to live here but Sparrowstar caught and ate it”
They continued on their path. Wow I love thunderclan! Thank starclan we live under those strong trees. I could not imagine living in a better place. Rainpaw thought. She adventured into Silverpaw’s mind and caught what she thought. I am tired where is our next stop, I wonder? I do not fell like asking Owlstrike. He scares me. Guiltily, she pulled out of her mind and asked” when is our next stop? What is it?” Mossyfeather looked over his shoulder and mewed” soon. And tumblerocks” Rainpaw nodded and searched Skypaw’s mind. She was adventuring out, too. When Rainpaw disappeared into her thoughts, all she saw was the forest. She quickly looked around and halted. It was not the forest in front of her! Some great big, tall lumbering rocks!!!! Gasping with surprise, she realized I am not the only one with powers!

Chapter two

Book four- Breaking Through


A white she-cat with pink-tinged paws stood on a high rock. She looked at the hunting patrol as the small dappled gray she-kit quavered. A silver apprentice was sniffing at the thing, the white called her away. Her brother, a thick-furred handsome tom, came up and butted her gently in the side affectionately. Her gaze drew from the kitten to him. The leader was sniffing at her. “ the gray dapples…. Falling rain” she murmured. “ no scent, next to shadowclan” reported a pale tabby. A red she-cat was sitting next to her. “ we shall take her in, she will be called Rainkit” “ is that smart, Sweetstar?” asked the pale. Sweetstar turned to her. “ willowcloud, no duh” she hissed. “ Silverpaw, I said leave her alone!” the cat yelped back in surprise. “ if you have nothing to do, take lionpaw and clean out the elders bedding” lionpaw looked at his sister. “ thanks” he groaned “ a dappled she-cat announced “ mine first, I am as excided at this cleaning then as a apprentice is at its warrior ceremony” yawning, lionpaw mewed “ right away, Silverpaw will see to that” he turned and slipped the apprentice den, his tail lazily waving behind him. “ watch out for redpaw’s ear” a ginger to mewed from inside. Too late, lionpaw pressed his weight on the ear, and redpaw’s head dashed up. “ watch out, you blind badger” he lay down and washed it. Lionpaw swerved around a gray and white tom’s figure and kicked him when he fell over a golden tail. The tom yawned. “ ow, lionpaw” the golden tail belonged to a black and white she-cat with golden stripes. “ sorry, hazelpaw, sorry falconpaw” he yawned. “ sleep, you clumsily badger” hazelpaw retorted. Falconpaw just curled up again. Silverpaw stuck her head in. “help me” she wailed. But lionpaw was already sleeping. Hazelpaw lifted her head up. “for earth’s sake, It is early morning. You should let us get some sleep” “sorry. Lionpaw’s too lazy to help” A gray tom-kit raced in the apprentices’ den and stopped at a empty nest. He ran around, ripping moss and he formed a nest. “this is my nest!” He announced. “Cragkit, put the moss back. You have two more moons to go until you become apprenticed. “ Hazelpaw mewed.

Book five- Caldora. (titleless)
Day one
Today was not that bad, after all. I woke up that morning with terrible night mares hinting I would have a bad day. The only things that were bad that happened to me are:
I got shoved into a locker
My room cleaner went through all my stuff and threw away the picture of me and Annabeth.
My mom called and yelled at me again for doing nothing.
My dad sent me an e-mail and which I am forced to reply to or he comes down to make sure I am okay
My sister called and said my cat, Cookie, died.
They took my gold fish away
I was forced to eat meat, the only thing they serve. It is hard when I am a vegetarian.
They threatened to take me to an insane asylum.
Well the truth is I am not insane.
And to think I could actually stand that. Most people would go insane.
And you would never believe what happened to me over spring break.
Most people would have a spring breakdown.
Maybe I am insane. In a way.
Day two
Me again. Well of course IT IS my diary .basically, it is really day four because I have not written for three days.
But that does not matter. The maid-girl came again and sold me out for finding SODA under my bed. As if I would break the rules. Soda is on the no-no list big- time. Why did they send me here?!



From Caldora.
(means beautiful gift. By the way they treat me you would not tell.) I think it is a pretty name. And people have told me it is. They call me Cal and Cow. I hate it when people call me Cow. I am not a cow! Some people wonder how others can stand to push such a pretty girl in lockers and stuff.
I walked down the hall and stopped to talk with Suzie and Emma and Una. Practically the only people who think I am pretty. I am pretty, but why do I have so many enemies? I don’t really know. I think they are jealous. But, all the girls at school are pretty. What the heck? Come on now!”Hi, Caldora” Emma greeted me. I did not reply, I just glanced at the men walking by. Una giggled”Caldora’s got a crush!” “I do not. They are the same boys who just so happened to shove me in the locker this morning” I said. “Come on. Let’s take the long way to class” “thanks for replying to me” Emma sighed. “What? Oh, hello. I am good, thank you” Emma looked at me doubtfully. “What?” I asked. “Oh nothing. Just the fact that I am confused right now” I furrowed my eyebrows. “What is there to be confused of?” Emma slung her arm around me. I glanced at it. “Ohkay” I said

Quote time! For cats, of course. i love cats.

I chased the uncatchable butterfly of love…. And I caught it.

Do not let them say you are not beautiful… do not mind those who do not see you as you are……to me you are the world.

book six-Dogs Of The Farm (a roleplay story with my BFF)

Chapter one.
Zoe galloped through the farm’s land. This certain chicken would not budge. All the others would scatter to their cage. Out popped 7 eggs. The chicken was a pregnant hen! Now the hen rolled the eggs in the cage. Chocolate ran out to help. “ I can help you” he said. ”thank you” Zoe replied. Zoe’s job was to also herd the sheep. So, Chocolate helped her herd them. They finished their job and went inside to eat. “This meal is good.” Said chocolate. “ I agree.” Zoe ran out on the road suddenly, as a small, skinny helpless beagle puppy on the road. Without thinking, she dashed out into the road, and right as the car hit her instead of the puppy. Chocolate raced out at the speed of lightning and bowled the car over. It landed in a tree, and coco saw that all the humans were okay. In shock, Zoe realized that she was not hurt at all, and remembered of her powers. Shrugging, she picked up the beagle and trotted to the house. Izzy and Elise’s jaw dropped and they said “what on earth? ” chocolate says” this pup was about to get h-“Zoe cut him off.” Was about to fall, when he did, I caught him” she casted a scary glare at chocolate for almost blowing the secret. The dogs went outside again, and realized that the sheep were on the loose again. After heading them in the barn again, Zoe realized Miss Meany was sitting and would not move. She said a jibe at Zoe, saying” who are you and you are too small to herd” Zoe’s ears flattened. She said “ it is my job!” the sheep laughed and said “look! A puny beagle trying to herd!” That got all the others focus as they headed in the barn. They stopped and laughed away. Chocolate passed by the window, and saw them. He dashed out the house and raced toward Zoe , on winged feet. He leapt in the air…. It was happening so fast…. No longer was he a lab….. He was now a …….. Werewolf! Chocolate jumped on the sheep, batting it aside with no problem with his huge paws; he landed a bite on her shoulder and teeth seethed through wool. He held on, and his teeth met the weak skin inside. Time to stop. He let go, turning to his normal self. The sheep was not alone! It was pregnant and gave birth when he bit! Shaking his head, he trotted to Zoe. “are you ok?” he asked. “Fine” she said. Miss Meany and her lamb skirted into the barn. Other sheep who gave black wool were pregnant and trailed behind. She went inside an extra room where Athena was resting. She struggled to get up and said” I saw what happened. Those sheep are mean, ignore them,” said Athena. Suddenly, she grunted and lay back down. Her calm voice was now high and panicky. She gasped and said” oh my goodness! The puppies….. They are coming….. NOW!”
Chapter two.
By the time our owners Elise and Izzy were there, there was a black and white collie. Athena was not done. Her fur rippled as another popped its way into life. This was a gray and white. Coco was outside with chocolate. “Hey, I hope she will be ok” fretted coco “she is a strong dog, pupping is not that dangerous” said chocolate. “I know! This is her first litter…… With me! Oh my gosh! These are…. My puppies!” Laughing, chocolate said “duh!!! Hey, dude! Guess what, you know cloud, the pig? “Asked chocolate “Who cares about pigs?!?” growled coco, fur on end. Chocolate shrank back. “Well, pinky is having piglets” he said in a tiny voice. “Stop sidetracking me! Athena could die!” chocolate turned around. “sorry. I am just so worried.” Chocolate faced him, shrugging “ it is cool. Everyone gets worried.” Just then, Izzy came out. “come see the puppies. Athena is alive”. Coco shot in there so fast, he ran into Izzy. Coco scanned the puppies after licking Athena. One black-and-white, one gray-and-white, one all black, one brown and white, one short haired brown collie and lab mix with gray flecks, one white male lab , and a black collie with one white eye flash. More collies. One lab. “Dang! 7 puppies!” Izzy and Elise hustled out the door. “work time!” yelled Zoe. Athena raised her head. “ burglar! 58th street! Umm….. Bank! Girl yelling…… Save her!” coco dashed to the closet. “ athena’s costume…. Coco’s…… zoe’s……here!” he threw them, they changed fast. The team ran down the hall and into 56th street, where they lived. Together, they yelled “ we are the bonappers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” and, coco added, “ without athena!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”they arrived at the destination. Coco said “ I will distract the gaurds, and you guys will attack them. “ coco dashed in and bit one guard on the leg. Yelling, the guy spun around. Zoe sped into him, grabbing the keys which led to the persons cell. Chocolate jumped in the air and hit the thief in the belly. Coco leads him to the jail. Zoe hits him in the legs. Chocolate lures him into the corner, and zoe, who still has the keys on her collar attacked him and led him to jail, too. Chocolate jumped up and said “ to the cellar!” the team ran out. Halfway to their cellar, they saw the dogcatcher chasing them. Coco dashed so fast away, the dogcatcher had to follow. Now they are at the cellar. They ran in the door, and unlocked all cages, freeing all the humans. When they got home, coco was licking Athena, his mate. He looked up. “ good, you here” a cat slinked out from behind the couch. Coco jumps up, growling in front of Athena. Chocolate leaps in front of zoe, snarling. The cat hissed and threatened “ I saw at the bank. I knew you had powers.” The cat said. Coco said” you were spying on us! You have no right to blow our identity!” he snarled. the cat said “ sly dogs. You are undercover workers, aren’t you?” chocolate said. “ you have no right to tell!” he growled. The cat said “ I will make you a deal. Secret stays. You are my slave. If you don’t, secret goes.” Chocolate had had enough. He lunged forward, but stopped. Then he put one leg in the back, one in the front. The cat said’ stupid mutt, what do you think you are d-“ woof!!!’ the cat was flung back and smashed in the window. Chocolate said “that is the way the bone breaks” Athena looked up from licking the gray collie. “ thanks” she said. Chocolate nodded. Her black collie said “woof” in a high-pitched woof.


Book seven-warriors again. Dawn Splash
Coralsong walked over to her mixture of Goldenrod and honey, and looked up at Mallowpaw as he walked in. a patrol followed him, wounded and bleeding. Shrewfoot, Melontail and Tigerpaw. “what is it now?” she asked. Mallowpaw grunted ” Shadowclan attack. Again” Shadowclan has been randomly attacking Hunting and border patrols, as if their prey was scarce. Coralsong snorted” Rainstar should watch her brother’s actions” Shrewfoot protested” Rainstar does not control Mossstar” he obviously wanted to stick up for his father’s mother. “ I know that” she walked into her den and mewed” lay them down” to Mallowpaw.

Book eight- Dark Flame
Fire stifled a hiss as fleckfur, killer, shrewfoot and skyfur teased “ rouge! Rouge! Ha ha! Rouges are mean and terrible! Do not think about living here, Firetooth!” fire arched his back and yowled “ get it right cheeseball! My name is fire and-“he cut himself off and lashed out with his back legs, and fleckfur flew. Killer unsheathed his claws and scored it down fire’s pelt, he hissed and sprang on his back, claws unsheathed, killer dropped and fire hung on, but when he rolled over fire leapt off, and killer fled to give shrewfoot his turn. Fire aimed for the ear and bit down hard. He let go, dashed back, ran to shrewfoot again, grabbing his scruff and shaking him up. Shrewfoot bit him on the ear, and he let go, shrewfoot gave skyfur his turn. Then daisy, floss and vapor dashed to help. daisy ran to the right and jumped over his back, trailing a claw path while fire bit him on the ear. Floss went under and scored his belly, while vapor bit his tail. The patrol of cats fled and hissed “firetooth, this ain’t over, we will return tomorrow!” fleckfur bristled. floss hissed “cheeseball! Scat you dork!”Floss said to fire “ that was close” fire exclaimed “ he started it! “ I know, those freaks”


I yawned, curled up next to my littermates as I rested. Suddenly, sageheart’s head shot up, splattering me with snow. She said “ they left, queens are sleeping” she sat up, her unseeing eyes scanning, she growled to me and my siblings., “ follow me!!” she left the den and we followed out of the camp. Goosekit, weedkit, mummblekit, beechkit and I followed her. weedkit was smallest and was lagging behind and fell. I raced around and hurried to his side, grabbing his scruff. He blinked at me with a silent message. ‘ thank you sister’ I lugged him a few pawsteps but mother was gone, and now I could not help my siblings. I scanned my surroundings, and felt weedkit shiver violently. I did not recognize anything under the blanket of snow, anyway, I never left camp. Sighing, I dragged weedkit through the snow in a unknown direction. “ I cannot move” whispered my sister, “ do not talk, you will freeze your lungs” I replied. The snow was thick, and everything was wrapped tight in it. The tall trees were terrifying, and looked as if they would fall. Under my paw, the snow melted into marshland, and into strange, yet safe-seeming land. Not long from when snow fell on weedkit, a bundle of cats were padding by. Weedkit could not help it, he let out a faint, long cry of pain. I joined in for our good. I would never let weedkit die of cold. My mewling came into cold, strong meowing. A light gray she-cat with ginger splotches raised her head. “ what in the name of starclan? Brackenheart look at this!” A hiss answered. “ is it more important than that pigeon I missed, mouse dung?” the she-cat growled “ you decide, deputy” he trotted over to me and weedkit like he was doing us a huge favor. “ what?” the she-cat could not stand it. “The kits! Oh the poor kits!” “Scarletpool, what?” she dashed to us, covering us with licks. Brackenheart picked weedkit up, who let out a mew of pain. I hissed and leapt on him, scoring sharp, pointy balls in his shoulder, hissing and spitting. Scarletpool picked me up, and I clawed her nose. Weedkit was carried by the tom; I was biting the tabby. She said “ the kit is a little warrior! Defending her sister!” finally, the cats put us down. Weedkit’s legs made a snapping sound, a wiry tawny tom raced over, Appling a liquid. I dashed over to him, clawing his paws, startled he stopped, I jumped his face and bit his ear, while he shook his head, trying to detach me. A tabby tom was sniffing my sister; I left the wiry tom and bit the tabby tom’s scruff, who pelted for a burrow. A tough looking dark brown tabby said “ a kit who attacked 4 cats cannot live, I hissed “ mouse dung all of you! I will fight for my sister, lay a paw on her and I will kill you, “he spun to face the dark brown. “Including you, mousebrain” he sprung and bounced off his fur, slicing through his fur, though. “stop wrestling with a kit!” after causing pain to the tom, I raced over to my sister, planting myself over her crumpled body. A light she-cat with eyes of many colors came up and crouched over me. I hissed and slashed at her nose. Weedkit, under the protective belly fur, trembled. “ no need to fear, weedkit, no cat will lay a paw on you. “The leader bonked me away and heaved up a tree branch, carrying weedkit. Her yowl blocked me out. “ ivystar! That kitten will attack!” warned scarletpool. Ivystar chuckled. “ yeah, sure!” I dashed up that branch as many cats emerged. “ did this kit hurt any of you?” the tabby tom from earlier yowled. “ she bit my scruff” while the deputy yowled “ she clawed my side!” scarletpool called out” she hissed and spat and bit me” she offered. The earlier tom who tried to apply something to weedkit said “ he bit my ear and clawed my paws” the she-leader gasped. “ a medicine cat was bit? Oh, crowheart are you okay?” she asked. I had made it to the treetop by now, weedkit was lying still and I leaped on the cat,claws unsheathed and I pounced on her, all attacks were missing me. She rolled over and I jumped off. The leader rolled……… right off the branch and landed with a thud. I yowled triumphantly and yowled. “ that will be you if you even think about touching my sister!” I threw back my head. “ who dares challenge me?”
CHAPTER TWO
Palmfur hissed. “ why does rainstar want a million warriors in camp at all times? Can I go on a hunting patrol already? I have been here for like, a moon. “Palmfur, you went on a hunting patrol yesterday with spiderfur, silverstream and bubblestripe” sageheart sighed. “ yeah, at morning!” then sageheart added “ then you, Frostypaw, crowpaw, Gorseflight and I looked for Sedgekit and her litter.” Palmfur rolled his eyes. “ I know, then sageheart said they were dead and eaten.” he Retorted. sageheart’s eyes melted to water. “ they were my kits “ he turned around. “ Gorseflight choose a patrol and hunt. Tell Luckypaw, too. “ then he stomped away. Gorseflight came up. “ nice move with reminding him of the pain!” he hissed and stalked away. Palmfur growled. He was supposed to meet someone! He would have to sneak out, he hated doing it, but he had to see them. With the feeling of dread, he climbed up the trees that encircled the camp. Once, twolegs was here and the played on old toys. But that was years ago, and the toys “defrosted” into the ground and aren’t there anymore. He broke light and peered over the leaves, bonking his head. “ ow” he hissed quietly. He wondered if coralpaw had a herb for dizziness. He squeezed out of the leaves that held dew from early morning rain, and a watery sun ray warmed his fur. He wondered if a yummy powdery she-cat with kits would be waiting for him. He took a second to look at his beloved territory. He could see the whole cats’ land. There was the soft, round, large hole in the ground where apprentices trained with their mentors. and there was the owl tree where the owl hangs and every mentor tricks his apprentice into sticking their noses into an owl pellet. There was the purple outline of the mountains where the cats of tigerclan used to roam. Embarrassing memories of sticking noses into owl pellets overwhelmed Palmfur so that he had to stick his snout into his fur to keep from laughing. “ I remember when I was palmpaw and tricked flitterpaw and Flutterwing into eating rabbit droppings by telling them that it was a new kind of berry. “he murmured. And when coralpaw was taken on as a healer apprentice and she fell into the moonpool, dazzlefern joked that she would at least have good, fresh dreams. but then flitterpaw got hit by a monster and dazzlefern was hit by a tree. They are dead and romp in starclan. Shaking his head, Palmfur continued along the branch. He looked for the branch that sloped. Sliding down, he half-jumped, half-fell onto the next branch. Finally, his paws touched beloved earth again. He sniffed. All clear, it was. He dashed into a hedge, and a mouse scurried out. He pounced. Something to give her! He peered through the sticks, hoping his white, fluffy fur did not give him away, or his glowing, bright yellow eyes. He dropped the mouse as he saw melontail, soilwhisker and lionheart go to the entrance. He shuddered as Sagestorm said “ Palmfur, you can hunt now” he stalked out and headed to the windclan boarder. Ferretpelt, the long-furred fat gray tabby was on patrol with a cat he did not know, and a smaller cat. he recognized his apprentice, minnowpaw, mallowpaw and Frostypaw were talking at the last gathering. The patrol looked, sniffed and padded away. Out came his powdery she-cat! following her was a dusky pale tom with black stripes, a pure white she-cat with yellow eyes and long fur, a ginger and white tabby tom, a gray she-cat with two white paws and two ginger paws, a dark pale, light ginger, red, blue-silver she-cat with the slightest touch of gray dapples. tabby she-cat with a white tail, a dark gray and brown and white she-cat with thick fur sticking out on all sides, a unusual yellow-gray tabby tom and swift-looking black and white tom. Seven kittens! Boy will she need help! Right as Palmfur was about to step out, Ferretpelt dashed over, he was surprisingly swift. “ what are you doing with those kits?” he yowled in distress. The powder cat turned on him calmly. “ showing them earth!” he hissed, his long fur standing straight in the air. “ they are so young!” she growled. “ go back to camp and speak of this to no one!” he left. Palmfur stepped out. “ wow” he breathed. “ adorable, right?”his furry she-cat purred. The ginger and white tabby tom stumbled up. “ pa-pa” he sounded out. Palmfur blinked lovingly. The she cat suddenly meowed” I cannot keep them” Palmfur looked up. “ why?” “because my milk is not coming” she admitted. “ eat a herb! Let another queen suckle them” cried out the mate. “ I am the only queen except for stonedance and she has 2 kits and says she would not want another, let alone 7, ‘helpless’ furballs. She ducked her head. “ please take them, I washed off their scent”
€hapter three
Sagestorm gasped. How dare Palmfur think that mintyfrost can suckle more kits? He looked as Sundance trotted forward. “ the pure white she-cat with yellow eyes and white fur is so cute!” she exclaimed. Nervously, she cast a sidelong glance. “ you are gonna keep him…… Right?” Sundance said, a little testily to see if he would crack for her. He half-nodded then stopped. “ that is for Rainstar to decide. “ he replied. One kit wandered up. A gray she-cat with two white paws. “ w-here le-a-der? She was the smallest, and Palmfur was determined to let her live. He bounced away. “Rainstar! Look!” the small she-cat came out of her den. “ awww…….” The kits were scampering around as ribbionkit and shellkit played happily. Rainstar did not need an explanation. as soon as she saw them she said” they are now thunderclan” redwillow came up, rubbing each all over to make them carry thunderclan scent. She jumped on highrock. “ come cats!” cats gathered. The 7 kits proudly sat on the highrock, heads and tails held high. this kitten” she Wrapped her tail around the dusky pale tom with black stripes. “ will be Cypresskit” she unwinded her tail and put it around a long-furred pure white she-cat with yellow eyes. In shock, rainstar realized that Palmfur and this kit looked exactly alike. Are these his kits? She wondered. “ this she-cat will be cliffkit, for her bulky shape. “ rainstar padded to the ginger and white tabby tom and said “ this will be Vaporkit. “ she padded to the gray she-cat with two white paws and two ginger paws and a black tail with a ginger splotch on her silver pelt. “ this will be tallykit” she rested her gaze on the long furred gray she-cat. she turned to a dark pale all colored she-cat with small gray dapples. “ you will be juniperkit. “ she walked to the dark gray, brown white she-cat with fur sticking out on all sides. “this kit will be kinkpaw, for she is older than the rest- six moons. “ the unusal yellow gray tabby tom will be fallenkit. coldkit will be the swift black and white tom, and that is all. Mintyfrost, take juniperkit, coldkit, fallenkit and tallykit. I will take on Vaporkit, cliffkit and Cypresskit.” She called them forward and headed into the nursery.
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Cliffkit smiled up at the clan leader. She admired her small, delicate, bulky, shape as she admired the kits as they tussled with ribbionkit. Dugkit leaped over cliffkit, who collapsed under his weight. Cliffkit rolled over and squashed dugkit. He went limp. Cliffkit new that trick and did nor relax her weight. He heaved up, and cliffkit moved off the older kit. Sedgekit dashed over, pouncing on lionheart, who was drooling over the kits. Shocked, Sedgekit bowled him over. Lionheart stiffened as he got up, and Sedgekit slapped him on the head, he crouched and sprung. Sedgekit ducked, leaning all her weight on her front paws and tripped him with her snout. He fell, and, embarrassed, sat up. She dashed to the left, and he dashed to the right. Swerving in midair, she jumped on his head, he shook frantically but she clung on and rolled onto his back. Lionheart rolled over, but Sedgekit was too fast and she jumped off. So his belly was exposed, she bit gently on his tummy, and scratched, claws sheathed, down his belly. Lionheart heaved up, but she clung on as the tom pelted across the camp, trying to peel her off.
Chapter four
Powderwing yowled in agony, acting like a badger got to her kits instead of giving them away. She made a hole in the wall of the nursery that she slept closest to. Sleepy cats dashed their heads out. Clawstar made his way out of his bramble den and yawned. “powderwing, what?” he asked. “My kits!” she screamed again. Leaptail, the elder stuck his head out. “ it sounds like bloody murder!” powderwing’s eyes were round in distress. Owltail, her mate yowled “ no!” his gray fur bristled. He pelted to the nursery. “ they are gone!” he pelted around the camp. Clawstar jumped on stiffrock. “Wavewing, fishpaw, blackclaw and volepaw, search everywhere for these kits. “ all the cats headed out. Stormkit crawled out. “ where is my buddy?” he whined. Powderwing was so into fake crying, that she did not reply. Stormkit had started to fall in love with Sedgekit, powderwing’s little tabby.


Last story for now-book nine
As I looked out in the road, which was soaring by like no tomorrow, I passed a human, walking next to her was her husband. He was carrying the baby. I heard a squeak, I first thought it was the truck. But then I remembered it was new. 3 hands poked out a window and touched my rear. I jumped back and recognized the hands of my owners, Mary, Kyle and Elise. I smiled my doggy smile which everyone thought was adorable. Awesome! A window in the middle of the car! How cool is that? I do not think it gets much cooler then that! at that moment ,the car lurched to a stop. I was so happy! It is not every day I get to cruise around town with my owners! A dirty Dalmatian glared at me hostilely and barked” loose the grin! You did not pick out the car!” woof!woof! Woof! Growl! Growl! Growl! Howl! Yip! Yap! Howl!
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