Warriors. Please read. Last Breath

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Warriors. Please read. Last Breath

Postby [Braveheart] » Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:32 am

warning: all of the cats below are NFT (not for trade)


Leader: Rainstar
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Deputy: Lightningclaws
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Medicine cat: Pebblesong
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Warriors:
Sandheart
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Luckyfrost
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Brambletalon
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Darkfrost
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Silktail
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Dapplefrost
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Spiderfoot
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Rippleheart
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Reedtail
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Lightfeather
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Crowfrost

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Cloudberry
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Spottedleaf
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KOKO (my first cs cat ever!)

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Sorrelfrost
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Bramblestripe
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Leopardclaw
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APPRENTICS:

Daisypaw
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Leafpaw
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Swiftpaw
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Queens:
Articfrost: Mother of Icykit (looks like a smaller Articfrost)

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SPOILER!!!!!!!!!!!


Doveflight-mother of Cloudkit, Birchkit,Stormkit and Streamkit
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Daisyfoot-mother of Gingerkit and Swirlkit
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ELDERS:
Flowertail
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Dizzyfur
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Sprialwing
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Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Warriors. Please read. Last Breath

Postby [Braveheart] » Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:49 am

Articfrost arched her back and slashed out at the fox. She spat and dashed to the side, dodging a well-aimed blow and swiping the fox's face. She stepped back some and the fox's paw smacked her on the cheek. Hissing, Articfrost crouched and circled the fox, waiting to make the first move. She lunged and ripped at its pelt, slashing and digging her claws deeper and deeper into the fox's fur. She ripped some off and they got stuck between her claws. The fox spun around, frantic to loose that cat or it would loose her life. The fox finally shoved Articfrost off of it, and it retreated out of the camp. Flowertail stood angerily in front of the nursery, protecting the kittens. Articfrost yowled and spun around to make sure her kits were all right. Icykit stood there, eyes streched wide with horror to see mommy fight like that. Articfrost licked her over the ear, but Icykit shuddered. Articfrost glanced over her shoulder at the large scratch on her back. Articfrost understood and turned to make sure it would not come back to attack some more. Rainstar was so worried about the other clans she sent our all but one cats on partol or something outside camp. Rainstar was somewhere but not here. Articfrost stiffened. Crowfrost was on the ground, a gash pouring out of his throat. Articfrost ran over and pressed her nose into the warrior's fur. It was cold with death. She threw her head back and yowled sadly. Crowfrost was her brother. Rainstar dashed into the camp, Brambletalon, Sorrelfrost and Luckyfrost behind her. Luckyfrost shrieked and raced over to her brother. Articfrost pressed her sister's fur. They turned around. Rainstar was right there. "Articfrost, let Pebblesong take a look at that scratch" Articfrost glared harshly. "It is all your fault. If you weren't obsseing over the grief of Mossstar, you wouldn't have let my brother die!" she hised. Rainstar flincehed. Her brother, Mossstar, had to leave with the old shadowclan becasue a monster infected thier water source. She trembled. She also had Reedkit, her other brother, who died when he was trekking through the territoy of Shadowclan. Lovespitit was the deputy of riverclan; Rainstar had no one. Articfrost was too mad to feel sorry. Pebblesong led the queen away. Articfrost looked back. Rainstar was lying on the floor, ears drooped and eyes closed. Articfrost finnaly felt bad for her loud mouth.
Chapter two
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Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Warriors. Please read. Last Breath

Postby GreekMythology<3 » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:44 am

Your story has a silent story stalker. =3
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Re: Warriors. Please read. Last Breath

Postby [Braveheart] » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:45 am

awesomeness! :3
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wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Warriors. Please read. Last Breath

Postby Ourpawprints » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:46 am

gr8 story
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
-David Guetta Titanium

Between school, my pets, homework, art and life I have not been able to get on cs often, so please don't be surprised if I'm not very active.
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Re: Warriors. Please read. Last Breath

Postby [Braveheart] » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:52 am

thank you!

Articfrost could not helping looking back every few pawsteps to make sure Rainstar would be okay. She knew she could stop checking when a)she hit a tree and b) Lionheart led her to the nursery to visit Lightningclaws. Articfrost kept walking, sniffing the air to make sure her nose wasn't broken. "Stupid tree" she muttered. She heard a faint wheezing sound and turned to see Pebblesong trying to hold back a giggle. "smell anything?" she teased. Articfrost glared, then let herself lighten up. Rainstar would be okay! And Icykit was safe and sound with Daisyfoot, Rainstar and Lightningclaws in the nursery. Articfrost begun laughing along, until she tripped over a stone and her shoulder began to hurt. "Okay! enough" Pebblesong purred. "we want you alive by the time we are at the other side of the camp" Pebblesong gently rested her tail on Articfrost. Pebblesong was right, as always. Icykit needed her. And she had to say sorry to Rainstar later. But then they thought struck her.

HER BROTHER WAS DEAD
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wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Warriors. Please read. Last Breath

Postby [Braveheart] » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:53 am

Here, Rainbow Skittles, this is the first stroy to the two:

viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1003775


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called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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