Poem Your Life - Everyone!

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Poem Your Life - Everyone!

Postby RedInkedWolf323 » Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:16 am

Heey everyone! You might know me, or you might not! I am Oliveleaf323, but you can call me Olive ^^ everyone does. Anywaay, if you have seen me you might know that I usually [if not always] have poetry in my signature. So I randomly decided to open a place where people can share their poetry :)

This is a place where you can post your on poem's, being on a whim or not. Lets all share a read them, and maybe critique a bit. But I have a few rules [Sorry!]
Rules:
1) Don't...be too offensive to anyone on CS, its not nice XP
2) If you want to critique a poem, please do it nicely. Again, please just be nice!
3) Express yourself! Don't feel like your holding back, let out what you have in mind. We'll all listen ^^ (Or at least I will :D which is better than nothing right?)
4) [If you read these rules, when you first post on here (somewhere) say in big bold letters "BEAGLES!" (not bagels)] Please don't fight on here!
5) Enjoy yourselves! ;D

If you have questions just ask :3 I might be able to answer them, hopefully. But if I miss your question you can say something like "shame on yu! You didn't answer mah question! >:D" [yea just don't be super mad with me, I am a bit sensitive! XO ... and I might yell back ... I don't like peoples fighting though ...]

Its also generally okay to advertise your role play/art shop/whatever on here, but it would be nice if you asked me to post links and stuff like that first.

Also if you want to describe your inspiration, please do ^^ if you are like me, and like to write poetry, then you would love to find inspiration anywhere.

So everyone, come and...write! XD [*secret face-palm*]
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Content is time,
While watching all.
Holding back
From crying.

Singing the song
Of Wind and Waves,
As everything
Was dying.
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Re: Poem Your Life - Everyone!

Postby RedInkedWolf323 » Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:10 pm

I have the words in English and Japanese

のこれらの黒い瞳
涙と血は彼らが流した。

私は多くの費用を感じる
何で私は失った。

私は、叫びを聞く
私の心はあるとして。

"私はあなたを愛していけない!"
"私はその真の知らない!"

それは痛みで悲鳴
私は殺された人に嘘のよう。

なぜあなたはここですか?
なぜあなたは恐怖ドント...?

この戦いを失うかもしれない
そして永遠の夜、それを呼び出す。

私は、今あなたを失うことができない
私は何を、どのようにか?

私は敵に実行するよう
私はこの "frienemy"を保護するために強さを感じる...

引き裂かれた心
それは離れて落ちる。

引き裂かれた魂、
それは、その全体を与えた。

少なくとも、あなたは知っている
私が戻って開催する流れになっています。

のこれらの暗い目をしてみましょう
それは、これらすべての涙と流血を引き起こした

、私は真の保持しているものを保存
私はあなたを愛しているあなたは知っているから。


These dark eyes of red
The tears and blood they shed.

I feel much cost
At what I lost.

I hear the cries,
As my heart lies.

"I don't like you!"
"I know its not true!"

It screams out in pain
As I lie to those 'been slain.

Why are you here?
Why dont you fear...?

You might lose this fight
And call it eternal night.

I can't lose you now
What do I do, and how?

As I run to the enemy
I feel the strength to protect this "frienemy"...

A torn heart
That falls apart.

A ripped soul,
That gave out its whole.

At least you know
What I held back is in flow.

Let these dark eyes of red
That caused all these tears and bloodshed

Save the one that I hold true,
Because you know that I love you.

My inspiration was mainly of these two picture's:
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Content is time,
While watching all.
Holding back
From crying.

Singing the song
Of Wind and Waves,
As everything
Was dying.
-carcinoGeneticist323

I used to be Oliveleaf323
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