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Nikki Hawk :: A story based on the RP, Insanity

Postby satuurnity » Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:06 am

This story is based on this RP. I am writing in 1st person, and pretending to be Nikki Hawk, my main character in that RP. I am currrently in the middle of year 6, and acheived a 5C at the start. So I am open to crit's and complements.
This story will progress as the roleplay does, or if I think of something good, I will add that here. Just keep in mind that not everything in this story is happening in that RP, I do like to use my imagination. If you want to read any of my other stories, just check my siggy; I'll be changing it soon.



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Re: Nikki Hawk :: A story based on the RP, Insanity

Postby satuurnity » Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:06 am

This is the first post in that RP, by me. Go below to see Nikki's point of view:


Chapter 1 :: Ariving At The Center


I was dragged into the center, by a tough looking man, with a chain draped around my neck, even though I was in human form. My black tail swished behind me, and my ears were flat against my head. I wasn't scared. When the moment was right, I quickly shifted into a jet black wolf, with sleek fur, almost softer than a cat. I shoved him over and sent him flying flat on his face. But as soon as freedom was in my grasp, it was snatched away from me. A few more guards came, grabbing my arms and the chain that circled my neck. I shifted back, and let them take me. One violantly pushed me to the back of a large cell, with a boy in it. When I hit the wall I ran at the door, but it had already been locked. I went and slumped at the back of the cell, and shouted to myself, so annoyed that I had been caught "D*mn!"
The boy had dark blue hair, covering one of his eyes. He had a few rings on his fingers, and his ears were peirced. He came over to me then, and spoke "So they got you too huh? Sorry to hear that" I heard him say. He then held out his hand to me. His hand was freshly cut up, with blood dripping for it "I'm Ciel" I heard him say. I turned away from the welcoming hand, knowing that because I was a wolf shifter i'd probably try to rip it off. "I'm fine with blood, its just it kind of makes me, well, kill" I said, with a sigh in my voice. "Oh, and i'm Nikki" I finished, and went to sit by the walls that were covered in bloody red liquid. I stared at the ceiling, and looked at all the barbed wire and bloodlust. "Has anyone ever escaped from here?" I then asked the blue haired boy. 'I must be mad' was my thinking. I was planning something that may have not even been attempted before.



Chapter 2 :: "I Must Be Mad..."


Ciel looked at the ground, I think he was thinking about my question. He looked up and answered me "Hmm... escaped?" He mumbled, he probably didn't know for sure. "From what I have heard, no. Many have tried, none have succeded" He said. I thought about this for a while, maybe he hadn't been in there as long as I thought he had. Suddenly, I get a rush of determination and courage, and I smile at Ciel. "Well i'm going to be the first one to do it". I then turn my head to the ground and my empty stomouch rumbles. I couldn't get the picture of fresh meat out of my head I was so hungry. I had so many questions to ask, but my first, (well second if you put it that way) was "So whats your ability then?". He was probably thinking I was a cat, with my bushy tail and ears. Yeah right, thats not me. I'm a free predator, who runs when she wants, hunts when she wants, and eat when she wants. I then turned my head back to Ciel, and waited for what he had to say.
I watch his eyebrows raise, and a smile spread accross his face. "I have the affinity for darkness, and communicate with the derad" He replied to my question. "How about you". He had told me his ability, so now it was my turn, and it was only fair that I did. So I started trying to explain "Well... Its a bit hard to explain." I turned my head to the ground, then spluttered out "I'm a wolf". Boy I found telling him that hard, and I really thought I was mad when I told him. I wasn't. "In other words, i'm a shifter" was my other way of putting it, acctually, my better way of putting it. "Thats interesting, i've never met anyone with that ability." He said. A few moments later I could hear footsteps coming down the corridor, and a guard slowly came into view. "Time to eat prisonors" He huffed in a gruff voice.


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Re: Nikki Hawk :: A story based on the RP, Insanity

Postby satuurnity » Fri Feb 10, 2012 5:40 am

2nd chapter is half way through!
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Re: Nikki Hawk :: A story based on the RP, Insanity

Postby satuurnity » Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:11 am

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