The Invasion Of The Gaspods! Still working on chapter one.

[Moskow]

Please coment. Questions are alowed. I will always post a new chapter on the front page. Also i am a farly new writer so dont be mean i am not as experianced as some of you.


Prolouge
"When will we invade, master?", a elderly gaspod asked gingerly. "Immidiantly", King Choke of the gaspods replied with an evil laugh in his voice. Choke grapped his megaphone and yelled, "Assemble the rockets! And everyone get in a rocket, and I mean everyone!".
He grinned his evil grin. Just 10 days of flying! They had been planning for decades. He was so excited. The elderly gaspod walked up again and started to pack for the King. Choke walked to his rocket and the elderly gaspod followed with the stuff. They were about to invade the primary planet, Earth.

Chapter 1
Bri walked out of her room and on to the deck. It was a sunny day. Bri got dressed and hooked up Titus, her dog, to his leash. She walked out with him and took him to the park. Bri sat down closed her eyes. Bri unhooked Titus and let him run around and play. Bri fell asleep on the bench and when she woke up Titus was gone.

Bri whistled a few times and he came back. Bri sighed. A peice of paper floated down from the sky. It said: Almost there! Be prepared! Hahaha!!. A cold shiver ran down her spine. She wondered what it was about. She took Titus back home. She walked inside and almost bumped into her brother. "Where are you going?" she asked him. "Um... Just to the park" he replied hesitantly. "Oh, no you are not", Bri said meanly. Her brother walked out of the room.



I am still working on it! but you can say if you liked it or not.