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Black Song Bird song writer

Postby Day Of Silence » Wed Feb 08, 2012 4:45 pm

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I love writing songs and i've been writing songs for over a year.
I thought it would be good to show a bunch of my songs.

But I do have some rules if you are going to post.

Please no rude or mean comments, but if you are saying something truthfully it's always welcomed as long as it's not too harsh.
No stealing any of my songs.
Please no spamming.
and after that, I don't have anything else.

I have been partners with a couple of people, writing songs together, but that clearly did not last.
I'm not exactly 'looking' for another partner but if someone would like to be partners, I'd be more then willing to do it.

First song is called "Fantasy" and I wrote it for the February Album Writing Month (Fawm.org)

Oh that place so out of this world
dancing around in make belief
a fairy tale, fantasy, some crazy world
taking it all in till I burst up big

I'm lost in this world
this crazy, crazy world
lost in this make belief
fairy tales and fantasies

I'm lost in this world
this crazy, crazy, crazy, crazy, crazy world!

Oh that place so out of this world
dancing around in make belief
a fairy tale, fantasy, some crazy world
taking it all in till I burst up big

I'm lost (i'm lost) in this crazy world
L-l-lost (i'm lost) lost (i'm lost)
I'm lost in this crazy world!

Woah oh oh
na na na na
woah oh oh
oh oh
yah (yah)

Oh that place so out of this world
dancing around in make belief
a fairy tale, fantasy, some crazy world
taking it all in till I burst up big

I'm lost in this world
this crazy, crazy world
lost in this make belief
fairy tales and fantasies

I'm lost in this world
this crazy, crazy world
lost in this make belief
fairy tales and fantasies

A woah oh oh oh
a woah oh oh oh oooohhhhh
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Re: Black Song Bird song writer

Postby Day Of Silence » Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:43 am

~Red Hot Pumping Heart~

If only I could hold onto
what you gave to me
the red hot pumping heart
that I was waiting for

I've lost my way
that heart was taken away
I'm lost in this world
whirling around

I used to be waiting for
that red hot pumping heart
but now I'm just tryin' to find my way

If only I could hold onto
what you gave to me
the red hot pumping heart
that I was waiting for

Wishing that life could be easier
this tragedy i'm living
a dead heart now
what used to be pumping

You've broken what I've given to you
that red hot pumping heart
and now it's lost in a ton of others

If only I could hold onto
what you gave to me
the red hot pumping heart
that I was waiting for
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