a warrior cat story, no title...yet

[chintz]

"she will come, bringing the one thing you would died for, but she will only tell you were it is if you agree to change our noble code.
The fate of all medicine cats lie in your paws"
New-leaf has come and Cloudclan is thriving,
the fresh kill is plentiful and the nursery is full
Even the clan's young leader, woodenstar, has his own mate and kits,
But when a deadly force appers,
he loses the one thing he cares about
And now, with leaf-bare approching and darkness haunting his every step
he remebers the profecy he was told seasons ago by a former leader
and enters and world of fear
That is the blab


Prologe
"may all cats belonging to this clan gather beneth great log for a meeting" leaders call was still ringing after the clan had gathered"As you have most likly heard, one of our trusted clanmates has broken the warrior code and will be punished" The cats started to chatter"that piece of foxdung" "she should have been kick out before they were born" "Deadstar's way too soft on her" "Silence! As leader i can do what i want with my warriors"Deadstar snapped"Hugefoot. go collect the tratior" The deputy nodded and and disappered down a tunnel in the bracken wall. He appered heartbeats later pushing a young ginger queen and her kits, a white tabby and a slender tortashell"Herbpool, you have had kits and broken the warrior code.I expected more from my medicine cat."Deadstar's eyes glinted with anger. The father of the kits was her mate, forced to be mates with her by the threat from her father, previoes leader, of death."For that, I hearby banish you for this clan" "i can agree with you punishment and i won't argue, but what will happen to snowkit and cloudkit?" the queens eyes were wide with worry" no kits with tratiores parents will stay here" she snapped"take your kits and leave" as the queen left the slender cloudkit turned and sneered at Deadstar" i will get my revenge, i will elminate the rule thats stats i shoudn't be born!"

Chapter 1
The setting sun colored the sky pink. The light lit up the two cats sitting down, staring at the clouds"woodenpelt, do you think there watching us?" " who, starclan?" "Yes" "of course mouse brain, why won't they?" "I dunno, maybe they think you should be with Canarystar instead of here with me" "you heard stillpool, there's nothing we can do. The force of the tree craked his leg and then when those rouges came....let's face it, by next leaf-fall i'll probly be leader. Even Canerystar's been telling me all about how to speak to the other leaders at a gathering and who would be a good deputy" "Poor Canarystar, having to go through life knowing he could died at any moment." "oh Birdsong stop worrying and enjoy the sunset" "okay" With a sigh Birdsong leaned aginst Woodenpelt, their twind tails swaying in the wind.

"Woodenpelt! Where were you?" The young she cat's yowl broke through the still silence of early dawn"I..I was with Birdsong, w..why Twistedpaw?"his wood coloured tensed as he sented fear coming off his apprentice"Stillpool's been looking all over for you. There's something wrong with Canarystar..." One look at the she-cat's panicked face reminded him of her kinship"go back to the apprentice den, I'm sure it's nothing but i'v got to check any way. Ok?" The she-cat didn't answer.She just turned and walked towards the apprentice den, her twisted ear staring at Woodenpelt

please don't copy

[Southern Speed]

epic!!!

[chintz]

thanks am about to add more

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more added

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bump

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bump

[Glitzy]

i love it!!

[-Frost-]

I like it, but you need to use better franker and spelling

[chintz]

what is franker?

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Sorry I meant grammer XD