My Refuge - Short Poem

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My Refuge - Short Poem

Postby Sharpy » Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:40 pm

My Refuge

My refuge consists of nothing more than my mind,
just my hopes and dreams of tomorrow,
where I escape through my fantasies,
my wishes take me on a journey,
where anything is everything,
and the earth is the sky,
through time and space,
either I wait for a lover,
or warm in his embrace,
I escape through thoughts,
but do I ever truly come back?
I'll work on this eventually. -w-
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Re: My Refuge - Short Poem

Postby Sharpy » Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:40 pm

((Please comment; I'm doing this for a contest, and I'd like to see if others like it.))
I'll work on this eventually. -w-
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Re: My Refuge - Short Poem

Postby hakaze » Tue Feb 07, 2012 4:10 pm

I really like this, it's quite good! I loved the entire thing.
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Re: My Refuge - Short Poem

Postby Sharpy » Wed Feb 08, 2012 1:48 pm

Thank you so much! ^^
I'll work on this eventually. -w-
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Re: My Refuge - Short Poem

Postby hakaze » Wed Feb 08, 2012 3:37 pm

Your welcome. =^.^=
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