the lost pony of the mist

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the lost pony of the mist

Postby calicocookies » Tue Feb 07, 2012 11:47 am

i woke up one morning feeling a suden exitment in the air it was no ordinarly morning for me it was a bright warm day the sky filled with white fluffy clouds. my name is abbagal clark i live in vermont i live with my brother and sister my parents passed away when i was 2 we have a phoster dad but he is never around and when he is hes brutally hitting us.it was july 2nd i walked out to the kitchen stumbling on stuff on the floor my sister and brother still asleep.i went and opened the fridge we were poor people and only had 2 peaces of bread and some butter i took alittle peace of bread and put butter on it and put it in my mouth it tasted so staile and plain but had alittle sweetness to it i smiled and looked out the window i went over to the door and put my shoes on they were old shoes with many holes in them i walked out side and breathed in the air it was a fresh smell pine and flowers filled the air that day and the little smoke from the chimmney also made it smell good. i walked threw the grass that was about up to my knees the sound of it hitting my pants made a wispy sound and the dew still on the grass made my pants wet and shoes i looked at the ground as i walked when i heard somthing i stoped i thought for a second and thought that sounded like a snort i it was hard to make out in the mist but i say a horse figure rearing and taking off ill never forget the sounds of the hoves beating on the earth infront of me it sounded as it could have schooken the whole world.....


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here is a little poem i made

death
it overwelms me
like a black hole in the sky
as the chills fill my bones
the terror arises above the highest heights
the darkness it closes so very soon
asi slip away to the unknown

and another poem
why do i feel this way
nights just feel like day
i take the knife with the sharpest blade
ready to end this horid day
i fell to the ground
and slipped away
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Re: the lost pony of the mist

Postby calicocookies » Tue Feb 07, 2012 11:49 am

bump
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my babys injoy lol mail me if you have any questions about them thanks

http://pizap.com/gallery_display_page4.php?imagename=pizap.com10.80828206613659861328329654546.jpg&datestamp=020412

here is a little poem i made

death
it overwelms me
like a black hole in the sky
as the chills fill my bones
the terror arises above the highest heights
the darkness it closes so very soon
asi slip away to the unknown

and another poem
why do i feel this way
nights just feel like day
i take the knife with the sharpest blade
ready to end this horid day
i fell to the ground
and slipped away
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Re: the lost pony of the mist

Postby calicocookies » Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:07 pm

bump
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my babys injoy lol mail me if you have any questions about them thanks

http://pizap.com/gallery_display_page4.php?imagename=pizap.com10.80828206613659861328329654546.jpg&datestamp=020412

here is a little poem i made

death
it overwelms me
like a black hole in the sky
as the chills fill my bones
the terror arises above the highest heights
the darkness it closes so very soon
asi slip away to the unknown

and another poem
why do i feel this way
nights just feel like day
i take the knife with the sharpest blade
ready to end this horid day
i fell to the ground
and slipped away
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