.:Captured Myths:. .:Chapter thirty-one up!:. .:Poll up!:.

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Poll ended at Fri Apr 13, 2012 10:28 am

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Re: .:Captured Myths:. .:Chapter twenty-one up!:. .:Poll up!

Postby .drizzled.mango. » Thu Mar 01, 2012 6:25 am

ahh! Not Lily!
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Chapter Twenty-two

Postby eternalglitch » Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:37 am

Chapter Twenty-two~


The world seemed colder. No color seemed bright, and I lay curled up in a closet, bawling my eyes out where Shadow wouldn't see. I already missed her, and several times thought she was still here. But no matter how hard you wish things were different, it didn't make a difference. My life had proved that.

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I remember my mother, a white German Shepard, telling us being mutts didn't change who we were or what we were. Our brother, Taiyo, would always roll his eyes as mother told us how one day we would be able to go out of the abandoned building and have the time of our lives in a perfect world of our own. And thinking she was true, Lily and I had ventured out, betting on who could run the farthest.

We didn't realize what was happening until it was too late when a net dropped behind me onto Lily, snaring her into a small bundle of fur. I remember leaping, trying to rip her free when a collar was dropped over my head and I was yanked away, scared for us both. That day Taiyo had been right. There was no such thing as a perfect world. Just a deadly one.

I pawed at my tears, catching them on my hoof to look at them for a moment. And then Lily appeared.

Well, not really. She didn't move and was slightly floating, but it startled me all the same. As I ran to her, I tried to nuzzle her in relief, not noticing the odd things about her. Not until I passed right through her, of course. A hologram! I realized, falling to the floor. How did that happen?

And then I realized that my horn, my useless horn, was glowing. And as I stared at my reflection in the metal door, it dimmed, and Lily faded away.
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Re: .:Captured Myths:. .:Chapter twenty-two up!:. .:Poll up!

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:45 am

Thats so sad.... :'(
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Re: .:Captured Myths:. .:Chapter twenty-two up!:. .:Poll up!

Postby eternalglitch » Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:10 am

Ha,ha, everyone seems to think so. By the way, that's Taiyo off to the side, not the mother. ;)
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Re: .:Captured Myths:. .:Chapter twenty-two up!:. .:Poll up!

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:13 am

Oh........ I thought it was the mom :P
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Re: .:Captured Myths:. .:Chapter twenty-two up!:. .:Poll up!

Postby eternalglitch » Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:40 am

Yes, I thought about that. Taiyo looks like the mother, Lily and Lexi took after their father before they were 'edited.'
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Re: .:Captured Myths:. .:Chapter twenty-two up!:. .:Poll up!

Postby Betta132 » Fri Mar 02, 2012 4:18 am

Yeah, more! And :shock: MAGIC!
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Re: .:Captured Myths:. .:Chapter twenty-two up!:. .:Poll up!

Postby eternalglitch » Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:17 pm

Sorry everyone, no new chapter today. Instead I decided to see what the comic would look like, so here you guys go~
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Re: .:Captured Myths:. .:Chapter twenty-two up!:. .:Poll up!

Postby TigressJaguiar » Sat Mar 03, 2012 2:49 pm

I will be reading.
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