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A shadow of the past

Postby dizz109 » Sun Feb 05, 2012 11:51 am

As I ran away from the exploding building my phone started ringing. "Skyla, this is NOT the time to be ringing."
"Hold on," She said "I just need to say...wait, WHAT? What is that roarng 'I just blew up a criminals house and now a giant sea of fire is chasing me down the path' noise? Oh...I see, I will be going then! Bye!"
Ah, Skyla, my best EVER friend. She always understands me!
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I looked behind me and shouted "OHHH SHIII..."
I tripped on a rock and i fell to the ground badly grazed my knee. I looked up to see a giant fiery explosion crash over my head..


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Re: A shadow of the past

Postby dizz109 » Sun Feb 05, 2012 3:44 pm

Just as the wave was about to crash I felt a pair of strong hands grab my shoulders. I felt myself being pulled out from under the flame wave just as it crashed with a trembling boom to the ground. I looked up to see a pair of familiar eyes. "You got yourself into a bit of a sticky situaton there didn't you?"
"Yeah.." I replied as the throbbing in my head began to take place.
"Didn't you promse to stay out of trouble?"
"Well you see Dan, when you are a spy, things don't come and go as they please!"
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My boyfreind stared at me in disgust as he sad "Doesn't mean you should walk into an illegaly run house and blow it up!"
I sighed as I looked around at the now charred environment. I chuckled as I thought, 'But what is the fun in Homework?'
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Re: A shadow of the past

Postby dizz109 » Sun Feb 05, 2012 8:15 pm

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Re: A shadow of the past

Postby dizz109 » Tue Feb 07, 2012 4:25 am

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I sat awkardly on the familiar stuffed red sofa and said "You know, you didn't have to bring me back to your house.."
Dan stared at me with Glossy brown eyes and a knowing look. That meant, I know you too well. You would go beat someone else up instead of going home.
I chuckled at that look and gave him the You are so like my mum! look. As I scanned his messy room I saw the 'Greenday' Posters dotted around his room. There were pictures of him and his mates placed on the chest of drawers. I smiled when I spotted the picture of me and him in silhouettes walking along the beach. There were a few pictures of us actually.
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He is such a kind person! There was a knock a the door. Shouting commenced and guns were fired. We both froze. Ice tingled down my spine as I shouted "NOT AGAIN!


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Re: A shadow of the past

Postby Pyper Hyper » Tue Feb 07, 2012 7:29 am

Bump, please continue!!
My name is Diddy, and I am 5.
Tonight I will see God so live.
I was hit by a van,
almost struck down by David's hand.
You protected me til then,
so til Rainbow Bridge's end, I'll wait for you my friend.
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