An Orphan's Wish
Give me a home to go to...
Who will love me for who I am...
Guide me through stars in the sky...
Through the stars...In the sky...
Just something I made XD hope you like :p
An Orphan's wish
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An Orphan's wish
by scourgeblood <3 » Sat Feb 04, 2012 7:18 am
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Re: An Orphan's wish
by Zede » Sat Feb 04, 2012 8:55 am
I like it, despite it being very short. The punctuation, however, is quite unusual for a poem, though I guess it gives the poem the right mood. It really conveys a feeling of loneliness to the reader. 
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