Diamond Theif(Please add on)

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PROLOUGUE
Sean was a normal, ordinary boy at the age of 12. He gets bullied alot and never gets his respect. It seems to him as if people only care for themselvs. Every day after school, he gets punched, kicked, and beaten. His worst enemy's name is Matt. Matt has a group of friends that always pick on Sean and get him in trouble. He needed to find a way to stop all of this. Maybe a counceler, maybe a girlfriend. He just didnt know.

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CHAPTER 1
After school today, Sean was walking home from school with a green and black jacket covering his face. He didnt want Matt to see him and bully him like usual.All of a sudden, he heard somthing behind him. He looked back and saw a kid that he didnt know starring strait at him. "Do I know you?" said Sean. The kid smiled. "Not yet." Then the kid ran into an alley. That's when Sean noticed thatthe kid had some blue, shiny thing in his hands. "Wait! I want to ask you somthing!" yelled Sean to the kid. While Sean was running, he stumbled over a rock. He landed face first into a ditch. "Ugh." said Sean. When he looked up, he saw a sign in the ditch. It said 'Doom' and pointed to the direction where the kid is going. "I gotta follow him" Sean said to himself. He climbed out of the ditch, and ran the direction the kid is going.
When Sean was completly out of breath, he stopped at collapsed on the ground. "I...can't...keep up...*Huff* *Puff*" "What the heck are you doing?" said a familiar voice behind Sean. Sean turned around. When his blurryness faded, he noticed that his old friend from elementary school, Jack was looking down, confused at Sean. "Jack, what are you doing here?" asked Sean confusingly. "What are YOU doing here?!" Jack corrected. "Well, I saw this kid with this blue, shiny thing in his hands and it looked interesting, so I followed him. But now I lost him and I don't know where he is.

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((wait do you what us to write a continuation of chapter one?))
(( and this is really good.))

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I'm glad your enjoying it^^ Yeah, i want you to add on to Chapter 1

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((ok!))
Sean ran desperately searching for the kid. He ran and ran until he fell exhausted he couldn't run anymore. Then the kid appears behind him smiling " hey!" he said walking inform of him he looked just like Sean. Sean " you.. You look like me?" he huffed. The kid " yep. O hey don't forget to return this for me." and with that Sean blacked out.
He woke in a strange new place holding the dimond in his hand. He sat up looking around " w-were am I?" he asked as a cart and horse roll past him. He was in the midleages but how?

((how is this?))

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should i not wright this story anymore cause noone is reading it

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( No lets contiue and maybe people will sart to get intreasted as we write))