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.:Sorina's Notebook:.

Postby belle noire » Fri Jan 27, 2012 1:18 pm

Hey everyone, I'm Sorina. I don't generally post my writting publicly, because I'm very cautious of it getting stolen. However, I've really been needing somewhere to post songs/short-stories/poems instead of writting them down in my jacked up spiral. So yeah, this is going to be where I do that from now on~


Anyways, this thread is obviously open to comments and (helpful) critique. I just ask a few things of you while you are here.


    ~Please don't be rude when commenting/critique'ing. I want to get better at what I do, not get shot down for it.
    ~All songs here belong to me and my band (Live Out Loud aka L.O.L) so please do not steal anything or you will be reported.
    ~I don't want any fighting inside of the thread. If your going to fight with another visitor please take it somewhere that is not here.
    ~I don't know exactly how much I will post, but whenever something new comes up it will be here.
    ~All poems and short stories are my own creation, I ask that you do not steal/say they are yours or you face whatever consequences there are for thievery
    ~Though this isn't realy a rule; If any of you have ideas for songs for us, PM me and we will talk about them.
    ~Just in case you were wondering. The band consists of Myself (Letti) and my four best friends Liz, Bek, KC, and Ari. (Those are just nicknames FYI)
    ~Yes. We are an all girl band. But we pull it off because of our differences.
    ~Occasionally I will need help on songs, and due to being the main writter, will more than likely ask you guys for some help on coming up with lyrics. In that case, the song I need help on will be posted in this first thread.
    ~If possible for anyone (That can draw humans exceptionally good) I am in need of just a simple drawing of all the band members. You will of course be credited. Please PM me if you are interested.


.:About The Band:.
Well, all of us came up with the idea.
Basically, Bek and I were talking during Choir. I was watching her draw the covers of Pink Floyd (Or was it the Eagles?) and I said that it would be neat if we were in a band. She agreed, and at first it was sort of just a game. But then we started coming up with names, and what each of us could do in the band. Since all of us were in choir, it made sense we should all get to sing. However, the others can actually play instruments and I can't, so I chose to write songs along with Liz. Anyways, we then brought it up with the others, and though we haven't gotten a lot done yet, we are working our way up C:



Haha, but enough of my rambling. Lets get on with it C:
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Songs by L.O.L

Postby belle noire » Fri Jan 27, 2012 1:19 pm

.:WIP's:.
These are currently the song(s) I am still working on.

Ordinary Days-

These ordinary days
Go by without a thought
As to why were all here
And what we've got (yeah)
Take a look around
See what you can see
Ordinary days
Amazing possibilities (woah)

Life (life) isn't about
Taking the high road (road)
Or even the low road (no)
Life (life) it's all about
Finding the real you
And making your dreams come true...

And thats it so far. This one was written by me.

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Come back-

I'm leaving today, leaving you behind
Too bad you had a one track mi-ind
And if it looks like running away
Well I don't have much to say
'Cause I am
But I have to tell you

It was fun while it lasted
But if your gonna cheat, learn how
And it was dumb while it lasted
I didn't know 'till now
Now I'm going, going gone.

'Cause it's to late to change your mind
I'm not another movie you can rewind
You should know you can't turn back time
I'm not fallin' for that same dang line
Come back, come back
One more time.

All I have on this one. Written by me.


.:Finished:.
These are songs that have been finished.

Rocket to the Moon-

One dark night I took a look
Way up high at the sky
And oh how the moon
Hung there in the breeze
I thought if I could hold it
It would be a dream come true

So I'm gonna take a rocket
To the moon one day
Past all the stars
Through the galaxy
Seeing all there is to see
Don't wory this is just me
Being crazy lil' me

Today was a rainny day
But me, I'm happy
Cause it's
Over the rainbow
Gonna find that pot of marshmellows
All for me

And I'm gonna take a rocket
To the moon one day
Past all the stars
Through the galaxy
Seeing all there is to see
Don't wory, this is just me
Being crazy lil' me

We're all gettin on a rocket
To the moon one day
Past all the stars
Through the galaxy
Seeing all there is to see
Don't worry this is just us
Being oh so crazy

Now we're on a rocket
A rocket...
To the moon

Written by me. The others plus my boyfriend considered me high when I wrote this.. C:
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Poems by Sorina

Postby belle noire » Fri Jan 27, 2012 1:19 pm

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Short Stories by Sorina

Postby belle noire » Fri Jan 27, 2012 1:20 pm

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Re: .:Sorina's Notebook:.

Postby Medusa72 » Fri Jan 27, 2012 3:22 pm

HI! I myself like to write songs and stuff... what kind of music does your band do? Like... rock? country?
I wrote a country love song...

Sweet Melody
Lately I've been thinkin' 'bout my guy back at home.
The sweetest guy I ever met,
The one I wish I could hold.
He listen's to my every thought, and... just nods his head,
He makes me laugh he makes me cry,
I wish I could see him again.

Chorus:
The rumbling of his hooves,
The pitch of his winny,
The beat of his heart,
His, sweet melody... sweet melody.

I wish I were back home,
Riding his broad back,
Weaving through a maze of corn,
Getting lost then doubling back.
I wish I were standing next to him,
Brushing his long mane,
It would give me so much pleasure,
To make him pretty again.

(Chorus)

I love him like a brother,
I wish I were by his side,
My parting words to him were...
Don't follow me I'll come back.

(Chorus) X2

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My first country song :D (In case you couldn't tell... it's about a horse *blush*) I don't have guitar chords for it yet. :? Anyways... I LOVE your songs!
i will not sit down
did you ever make it out of that town

i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster

rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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Re: .:Sorina's Notebook:.

Postby belle noire » Sat Jan 28, 2012 6:26 am

C: Thats very good. We're generally all-around.
However, here is a short description of our various styles.

Me: Emo/Punk-rock and hip-hop
Bek: She's the classic one of the twins, and goes for music sort of like Pink Floyd and The Eagles
Liz: She's generally all-around, and will sing whatever she's asked to XD
Case: Case is the shy one in the group, o-o so she's really... Quiet and motherly.
Ari: Ari is the country one >:3

Also, I'm adding a new song that I finished today C:
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Re: .:Sorina's Notebook:.

Postby Medusa72 » Sat Jan 28, 2012 1:56 pm

Cool! XD
Can't wait to see it!
i will not sit down
did you ever make it out of that town

i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster

rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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Re: .:Sorina's Notebook:.

Postby belle noire » Sun Jan 29, 2012 2:10 pm

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Re: .:Sorina's Notebook:.

Postby Medusa72 » Mon Jan 30, 2012 6:15 am

Really cool Sorina!

Sunny Day

It's a sunny day.
Icecream meltin' away.
All in time.
For the music start to play.
Oh it's sunny outside.
So c'mon, c'mon.
Lets slide.

Dance, to the music.
Until it's dark outside. (X2)

It's a sunny day. (X4)

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Very short... but it was my first song.
i will not sit down
did you ever make it out of that town

i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster

rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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Re: .:Sorina's Notebook:.

Postby belle noire » Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:23 am

C: Cool
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