Warrior cats [my verison] part 1

[Write My Art]

this is my verison of scrouge's life.ENJOY.
i was waking up next to my brother and sister, "there still asleep"i thought.
i jumped out of my bed seeing mom eating, walked to her and said "Good morning,Mama" i smiled.
She smiled beautifully at me and said "Good Morning , Tiny"....oh yeah by the way my name is....well , actually mama calls me Tiny. My brother is Socks and my sister is Ruby.Mama said that today were going to the park.just the 4 of us.
When we got there mama said that we were not allowed to go away from her sight.I said confused "but if we do...-"
Mama growled a little at me and said "SOMEONE....ANYONE CAN STEAL YOU AND NO ONE WILL NOTICE!".My ears fell down and i said "sorry ,mama".She rolled her eyes and jumps up in a tree.to watch us.be the leader of our familyclan.
I don't know what should happen? please request

PART 2
I saw a cats coming out of the bushes.I gasped cause the cat was running to him.The cat was all black and with green/yellow eyes...but anyways then a hole pack of cats came running to me.Mum didn't even see the cats coming.I ran fast to mum. she smiled beautifully at me and said "whats wrong , Tiny?".But then she saw the cats.she ran to socks and ruby and ....well.....forgot me....i know it sounds like she didn't love me.......but anyways the first cat attacked me and stung his claws in he.I screamed loud!the cat stared at me and jumped away and all the cats too.....what do they want?..

[Write My Art]

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[stormiecrazy]

Perhaps Tiny shoud sneak off? The story is really good, so far.

[Write My Art]

Hey thanks but i think ill do part 2 tomorrow *YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWNNNNN*

[ChrissieFoxStar101]

Cool! I've considered doing something like this, but more from the point of view of a (fan-made) Shadowclan she-cat, but I'm not sure if it would be interesting enough. I would suggest that you didn't use numbers for words, but its your call.

[Write My Art]

part 2 made

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Cool story!