Tallik Hershi - Life of Many Horrors (Rough Draft)

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Tallik Hershi - Life of Many Horrors (Rough Draft)

Postby k i n g » Thu Jan 26, 2012 9:49 am

*DISCLAIMER* THE PERCY JACKSON SERIES BELONGS TO RICK RIORDAN. THESE WRITINGS ARE JUST REFERENCES FOR ONE OF MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS, TALLIK HERSHI, THAT I USED FOR DEMIGOD ROLEPLAYS HERE ON CHICKENSMOOTHIE.

As said above, this is a history reference for Tallik Hershi (last name pronounced her-shy). I'm still working on it, so some chapters will be missing. This is just the rough draft, I'll revise and edit when the whole "book" is finished. So, criticism appreciated, ideas for further chapters/characters/stuff to add in existing chapters are to be posted below or PMed to me, and I hope you enjoy this. This was written in his Point of View (POV).

Table of Contents
Prologue (WIP)
Chapter 1 - WIP

Prologue

[Insert Epic Intro Here]

The Characters
Tallik Hershi - Thirteen year old boy with dirty blonde hair, green eyes, pale skinned, taller than most boys. Click for picture reference. His family is Vincent Hershi (father), Mailee Hershi (half-sister), and Fiona Hershi (step-mother). Son of Athena.
Vincent Hershi - A man in his early 40s with blonde hair, blue eyes, pale skin, tall. No picture reference available. His family is Tallik Hershi (son), Mailee Hershi (daughter), and Fiona Hershi (wife).
Mailee Hershi - A ten year old girl with shoulder-length light brown hair, brown eyes, slightly tan, short. No picture reference available. Her family is Vincent Hershi (father), Tallik Hershi (half-brother), and Fiona Hershi (mother).
Fiona Hershi - A woman in her mid 30s with long brown hair, hazel eyes, tan skin, short. No picture reference available. Her family is Vincent Hershi (husband), Tallik Hershi (step-son), and Mailee Hershi (daughter).
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Re: Tallik Hershi - Life of Many Horrors (Rough Draft)

Postby nivans.piers » Mon Feb 06, 2012 12:01 pm

cool i want to read it! but, where is chapter one?
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" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans



"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans



" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans



" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans



" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans





to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
MULLER/SHERRY BIRKEN, PEIRS/CHRIS,
PIERS/OTHERCHARACTER RPs.
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Re: Tallik Hershi - Life of Many Horrors (Rough Draft)

Postby b e a u t i f u l » Wed Feb 08, 2012 12:20 pm

Wrriittteee Vine x3
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Re: Tallik Hershi - Life of Many Horrors (Rough Draft)

Postby k i n g » Thu Feb 09, 2012 11:40 pm

I'm having an epic delay because I lost the notebook I wrote the first chapter in DX
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