Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby light. » Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:27 am

chibifoxeh wrote:
DangerKilljoy wrote:I finally received inspiration to start a real story, with future. And I think I like it :3



:thumbup: Yay for you!
Whats it about? I'd love to read it!


It's really sad, but I decided to base it in a friend of mine, but changing the ending. Mainly is about the every day of a girl with mental problems, but rich. Those who have it all and try to pretend everything is alright, while it isn't.
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welcome to light.'s world. feel free to call me thunder, thunda, danger, killjoy or just light.
i'm mostly interested in roleplaying, from semi-literate to literate level, groups or 1x1.

i'm mostly interested in roleplaying, from semi-literate to literate level, groups or 1x1.
i love music, from the beatles and queen to my chemical romance, blink 182, sum 41...
my favorite sport is volleyball, and i love horse riding, swimming and dancing too.

roleplays at the moment; deffs's group - light's group - moose's 1x1 - cog's 1x1

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_____some people i consider ... special ;;

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and many people i'm surely missing and many people i'll surely meet

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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby nutella ♥ » Tue Apr 03, 2012 9:39 am

DangerKilljoy wrote:
chibifoxeh wrote:
DangerKilljoy wrote:I finally received inspiration to start a real story, with future. And I think I like it :3



:thumbup: Yay for you!
Whats it about? I'd love to read it!


It's really sad, but I decided to base it in a friend of mine, but changing the ending. Mainly is about the every day of a girl with mental problems, but rich. Those who have it all and try to pretend everything is alright, while it isn't.


I'd like to read it. :) Maybe you could share a sample when its finished?
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NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE.
Somebody left the gate open
You know we got lost on the way
Come save us a runaway train
Goin' insane
How do we
How do we not
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How do we how do we
How do we not
fade away
How do we how do we oh

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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby wildfire6 » Tue Apr 03, 2012 9:40 am

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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby TrebleMaker » Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:17 am

I'm starting a story, in first person, and would like to know if anyone would care to read it and give me any comments / critiques? I really need help with it, because I've never written in first person before.
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby light. » Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:20 am

.:Blackbelt:. wrote:
I'm starting a story, in first person, and would like to know if anyone would care to read it and give me any comments / critiques? I really need help with it, because I've never written in first person before.


I'd like to read it c: Could you PM it to me? If I'm still awake when it arrives I'll read it today, if I'm not...then I'll read it tomorrow morning when I wake up
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welcome to light.'s world. feel free to call me thunder, thunda, danger, killjoy or just light.
i'm mostly interested in roleplaying, from semi-literate to literate level, groups or 1x1.

i'm mostly interested in roleplaying, from semi-literate to literate level, groups or 1x1.
i love music, from the beatles and queen to my chemical romance, blink 182, sum 41...
my favorite sport is volleyball, and i love horse riding, swimming and dancing too.

roleplays at the moment; deffs's group - light's group - moose's 1x1 - cog's 1x1

my tumblr

_____some people i consider ... special ;;

fia pie tj deffs moose merc rosie cogs mounty chessie iri giz

and many people i'm surely missing and many people i'll surely meet

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so take my ___ FLESH
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby - serendipity » Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:21 am

.:Blackbelt:. wrote:
I'm starting a story, in first person, and would like to know if anyone would care to read it and give me any comments / critiques? I really need help with it, because I've never written in first person before.


I would like to read it. Just PM it to me. I have to go now but I will read it tomorrow and send my thoughts back : )
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby TrebleMaker » Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:27 am

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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby MBRShorse » Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:47 am

Hello everyone! I apologize for my extended hiatus. I just went through a family crisis and one of my dark, gloomy, I-don't-want-to-do anything periods in which I sat on the couch all day playing Sims. But I have risen from the ashes and feel invigorated, well, sorta. So, I will be getting everything back in order ASAP.

If you have any questions that you need answered or if you are an applicant still in need of acceptance, post or message me. I'm also still looking for contest entries since I haven't received any yet. Finally, it's April so I need another Writer of the Month, so if anyone has any suggestions then PM ASAP. Thanks!
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby placidcoast » Tue Apr 03, 2012 4:16 pm

MBRShorse wrote:Hello everyone! I apologize for my extended hiatus. I just went through a family crisis and one of my dark, gloomy, I-don't-want-to-do anything periods in which I sat on the couch all day playing Sims. But I have risen from the ashes and feel invigorated, well, sorta. So, I will be getting everything back in order ASAP.

If you have any questions that you need answered or if you are an applicant still in need of acceptance, post or message me. I'm also still looking for contest entries since I haven't received any yet. Finally, it's April so I need another Writer of the Month, so if anyone has any suggestions then PM ASAP. Thanks!


No worries! I understand the need for taking some time.. <3
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Re: Our Aspiring Writers League (O.A.W.L)

Postby crescent + cheep » Wed Apr 04, 2012 7:39 am

.:Blackbelt:. wrote:
I'm starting a story, in first person, and would like to know if anyone would care to read it and give me any comments / critiques? I really need help with it, because I've never written in first person before.

I'd love to read it. I would like to practice giving critiques... I'm not too good at them yet.
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