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Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby [Braveheart] » Mon Jan 23, 2012 12:13 pm

Doveflight walked across the clearing and sat down next to Brambletalon. He looked up and purred, happy to make room for Doveflight. Cloudberry, her sister, glared from across the clearing. She loved Brambletalon, but he loved her sister, Doveflight! Darkfrost nuzzled her side and she focused her gaze on him. “Mind if I eat with you?” he asked kindly. “Sure. Could you not catch anything today?” she asked sourly. Darkfrost purred and mewed back, not noticing her rudeness. “I did, I thought you looked lonely” his voice got soft. Cloudberry got up and left, heading towards her den. All because of Doveflight I won’t ever curl up in my very own den with someone. She thought. In Thunderclan, each cat had their own den. That is, when they find a mate. So a cat finds a mate then has the leader build their own den for them. Until that day, the no-mates sleep in the Warriors den. Doveflight bucked Brambletalon with her head, and they walked out of camp with their tails entwining. Doveflight felt the warm spring air flow around her and Brambletalon. “So, do you have anycat in mind to share a den with?” asked Doveflight. “Um, no” Brambletalon meowed. Then he leaped on her and pinned her to the ground. “Yes, and she is lying right under my paws” then he got up and licked his pelt. “that is cool” Doveflight said smoothly. “Mine is right next to me” she fell into step with him again.
Cloudberry paced across the clearing, brainstorming how to get Doveflight and Brambletalon apart. “If only…” she breathed deeply. Just then the young couple padded into camp. She dashed behind a bush and yowled her sister’s name. Then she raced back into the clearing, in front of Brambletalon. She started licking her pelt as Doveflight trooped into the bush.”Hi!” mewed Cloudberry. “Oh, hey, “ said Brambletalon, watching Doveflight get engulfed in the bush. Suddenly there was a yowl and rocks crashed the ground. Brambletalon raced after her and halted. Doveflight was in a deep hole. “Brambletalon!” Rainstar came out of her den. Brambletalon turned and promised Doveflight he’d get her out. Cloudberry raced away and dragged a leaf cameo covering over the hole. “Say one word and you won’t be able to say Mouse anymore” she threatened, keeping hidden. Cloudberry pelted out and Brambletalon came back. “Brambletalon! Someone sent me to fetch you in the forest!” cried Cloudberry. “where?” he asked crossly. “The Dead Ok Hills” replied Cloudberry, and sent him all the way to the other side of ThunderClan’s forest. Cloudberry pulled off the covering and leaped on her sister. “Come with me” she snarled, moving a rock aside. She trapped Doveflight and forced her to enter the tunnel. After a long walk, they sloped upwards gently. Cloudberry pushed on the dirt and it fell, making a hole. “Go” she snarled. Then she shoved Doveflight out and sealed the hole and ran back.
Chapter two
Cloudberry waited for Brambletalon’s return. When he did return, Cloudberry nearly fainted. DOVEFLIGHT WAS WITH HIM!!! “some cat pushed me out and ran. I don’t know what clan it was from, it was covered in fox dung and had pitch black fur. No one in thunderclan looks like that.” Doveflight mewed. Cloudberry almost yowled in anger. She raced into her den and closed her eyes and thought.
HOW HARD CAN IT BE TO GET BRAMBLETALON TO LEARN HE BELONGS WITH ME?
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Re: Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby ✖HESTIA » Mon Jan 23, 2012 3:26 pm

Awesome!!
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Re: Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby [Braveheart] » Sat Jan 28, 2012 2:48 pm

Thanks!!!!! That made me want to write more!

Cloudberry reopened her eyes after a fail of sleeping, and took her paws off her face. She got up and yawned. Her friend, Luckyfrost, opened one eye. "Where are you going, Cloudberry?" She mewed, half asleep. "for a walk" she said quietly. She untangled herself and stalked out of the den. She was still angry about Brambletalon and wanted to avenge on her sister. She trooped into the forest and ripped some brambles off the branch. She collected a good amount and then walked quietly back into camp. She glanced around the gloomy place to see where her sister's new den was. Reconizing it becasue of the fallen branch, she creapt in ever so quietly and carefully placed the brambles around her sister's side of the nest. She backedout and headed back into the forest. She didn't want to kill her sister! She walked down to the shore and gazed out over the water. Pawsteps sounded behind her and she sniffed the air to smell Darkfrost. He crouched low and gently padded to her side. "What's wrong?" He asked lovingly. "I couldn't sleep" Cloudberry Shook her head sadly, lying.
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a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
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heart belongs
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Re: Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby Ourpawprints » Sat Jan 28, 2012 3:55 pm

great! :D Cloudberry is so desperate
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I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

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Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
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Re: Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby [Braveheart] » Sun Jan 29, 2012 6:54 am

Thanks! I Know, she really is!

Doveflight woke up early. She yawned and rolled over, then gave a scrrech of pain. Brambletalon flew into the air in suprise and hit his head. Rubbing it with one paw, he mewed "Doveflight, what h-Your pelt! Why, its covered in thorns!" He mewed in suprise. "I know!" Doveflight turned her head to lick her fur. She grabbed a thorn with her teeth and yanked it out with a rip. She spat it out. "Don't leave that here" Brambletalon warned. "And be careful, it will make it worse if you pull too hard" Brambletalon guided the fretting she-cat out of thier den. "It's okay, Doveflight"he assured her for the fifth time. "Fanwhisker will heal ya up" he added after looking at her once again. "Fanwhisker...Fanwhisker....Fanwhisker!! FANWHISKER!" he yowled. The shecat uncurled her body and looked up. "No need to yell" She mewed in response. "Imma coming" She draged her self out of bed, Her hindpaws scurrying in the dirt. (She broke her legs when fire hit the camp and she ran away and a tree fell on her hindlegs, Shadowclan found her and healed her up before returning her at the next gathering) She looked at Doveflight, chewing up a pulp. "Thorns?" she guessed. (Fanwhisker was medicine cat before fire) "Yeah." Doveflight sighed. "And tonight's the gathering" she hissed. "well, hold still and tell me what happened" Fanwhisker rubbed on the sappy liquid after pulling out a burr. "I woke up, rolling over like always. I Guess I pcked up some burs. I don't really... ow... Know what happened. But someone is after me, and I just don't know why"
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I love all
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heart belongs
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Re: Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby Ourpawprints » Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:03 am

I think I can guess who did that XD
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"You shout it out,
But I can't hear a word you say
I'm talking loud not saying much
I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

I'm bulletproof, nothing to lose
Fire away, fire away
Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
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Re: Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby [Braveheart] » Mon Jan 30, 2012 10:23 am

Yeah :)

Fanwhisker dragged herself over and yanked out another burr. "Wow, you have a lot of them" She mewed, draping some juices over her pelt. "What is that for?" Doveflight winced. "Just to loosen yourself up" Fanwhisker left into the storage cleft. She pulled out some leaf Doveflight didnt know and Fanwhisker begun pouring that on the roughest patches of her fur. Her fur smoothed down quickly and a shine settled upon it. "This makes shiny fur and smooth fur. No cat will know about the burrs enless I cannot get this stubborn one out" She placed one paw on Doveflight and gripped it with her teeth and pulled and pulled. It just wouldn't come out. Suddenly Pinekit came racing into the den. She stopped, and twisted her head at Doveflight. "Burrs?" She squeaked the word out. "Yeah. Doveflight, lye down here. Pinekit, come pull this out while I go get some cobwebs" Doveflight gulped. Cobwebs was for blood. ALOT OF BLOOD. Pinekit placed the burr in her mouth and struggled to pull. With a pop and a gush, the burr came out and Pinekit went rolling across the den floor.
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Re: Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby [Braveheart] » Sat Feb 04, 2012 6:42 am

Darkstripe padded into the warriors den and lay down next to his friend, Appletail. However she was sleeping and Darkstripe wanted to talk, so he headed to the medicine cat, who every cat, even Rainstar, goes to with their problems. “Hi, Fanwhisker” Darkstripe sat down. Fawnwhisper lay in the corner, curled up and asleep. “Hello, young tom. Looking healthy?” she sniffed the air. Darkstripe nodded slowly and his eyes drifted to her legs. “How about you? Chest clear enough?” he asked, licking his paw and drawing it over his ear. “Yes, of course. Now who is the medicine cat?” Fanwhisker dragged herself over to Darkstripe and propped herself up. “What is on your mind today?” she asked. Darkstripe gave Fawnwhisper a weary glance. “She’s sleeping like a badger” Fanwhisker lowered her voice. “Would you like to go into the forest?” Darkstripe nodded. “Okay. Ivytail!” Fanwhisker called. “I’ll get her” Lilytail mewed, trotting by the den. Ivytail padded out of the nursery, belly swelling with Rowenfoot’s first litter. “yes?” Ivytail dipped her head. “Watch Fawnwhisper. If she wakes up give her some of the first herb in the row you see. It has fuzzy leaves. Give her some of the berries” Fanwhisker nodded briskly. Fanwhisker broke her legs moons ago and soon she will be able to walk. She got up and walked next to Darkstripe. He bended his head and she wrapped her forepaws around his neck and Darkstripe pulled her out of camp. When they got to the shore, she let go and Darkstripe sat. “Okay, what is it?” prompted Fanwhisker. “Well, it’s about Cloudberry. I love her, but she loves Brambletalon, who loves her sister, Doveflight. She’s all giddy for him, and she doesn’t notice me! And you wouldn’t understand” He looked away. Fanwhisker glanced up at the sky and wanted to yowl out the name of her loved one. It pained her every day to see him grow up with that Honeyleaf, who bared his kits. “Try me” she said softly. Just then, a yowl broke out of the clearing. “Fanwhisker! We need you!”
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Doveflight gave a nervous giggle and squealed as Brambletalon leaped at her. “I’m going to get you!” he shook his fur out, pinning her under his paws. Doveflight leaped up and the bowled each other through the forest clearing. Doveflight dropped her weight and let Brambletalon carry her. “Hey!” He laughed.
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Re: Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby Ourpawprints » Sat Feb 04, 2012 9:18 am

great! I keep getting confused between Fanwhisker and Fawnwhisker XD
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I'm criticized but all your bullets ricochet
You shoot me down, but I get up

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Ricochet, you take your aim
Fire away, fire away
You shoot me down but I won't fall
I am titanium"
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Re: Warriors. Starring Doveflight, Cloudberry and Darkfrost.

Postby [Braveheart] » Sun Feb 05, 2012 12:30 pm

Sorry! want me to change it?

Doveflight dodged a blow on the face and slid under Brambletalon's belly, delivering a tough and well-aimed blow. Brambletalon dropped but Doveflight slid nimbly out of the way, throwing a blow to the ear as she retreated. "ok, ok! You win, you win" Brambletalon purred. "I've never been happier in my life" Doveflight pressed against him. "neither have I" Brambletalon whispered. "Have you ever thought of little paws added to our family tree?" he asked quietly. She looked at him. "with every breath I take"

Editors note: Fanwhisker's name have been changed to Honeyfern. She is the medicine cat.
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heart belongs
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