Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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Who's Your Favorite Character?

Amy
31
23%
Jenette
37
28%
Indah
5
4%
Rhubarb
5
4%
Misty
25
19%
Flower
12
9%
The Indians
3
2%
Suzi
10
8%
Mom
2
2%
Brent
2
2%
 
Total votes : 132

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Postby Ellies » Mon Sep 12, 2011 7:26 pm

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
Ellies wrote:Hey wait what? where can i vote suzy? I find her random.

I added more options to the pole! :)

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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Sep 13, 2011 5:23 am

Lil' Warrior wrote:I voted Indah and Jenette >:D

Ya, a lot of people like Jenette and Amy, probably because they're the main characters. But I have ideas, IDEAS I TELL YOU! But they come in later in the book..... so I need to decide what to write now..... *Sighs* Writers block! I hate it. :( :evil:

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Lunala » Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:26 am

Hmm... I LOVE Jenette not even because she's a main character. Like I like other characters more than Amy, lol.
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Sep 13, 2011 3:54 pm

Ya, I bet some people like the others better too.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Zookrates » Tue Sep 13, 2011 5:42 pm

Moar?
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Sep 14, 2011 5:55 am

Zookrates wrote:Moar?

Well, when you put it that way..... NO! lol just kidding! Of course I'll write more! :D








Rhubarb (am still lovin' that name!) grabbed me and hauled me down some stares, while MIsty blabbed on about how awful Rhubarb was being.
SERIOUSLY! Do you really THINK you can take us?! I mean, who DOES that?! Seriously, you aren't ACTUALLY going to take us, right? Because, after all, you ARE my brother and-
Wait, Rhubarb's your brother?
Misty nodded and continued on with her complaining.
This place is SO dirty and dusty. It's not at all good for my coat! Oh, once you get me untied I'm going to KICK YOUR BUTT so hard that you'll have an INFECTION! And that infection will stay on your butt forever and ever, and then when you're old you'll have that scar on your butt and be like 'Oh, if only I hadn't captured that certain sister of mine, who has wonderful hair, and had let her go free and changed me into a better man'. But when you think that, which I KNOW you will, I won't be arround! So HA!
Be quiet.
MIsty scowled at him, but he ignored her.
You're just going to waist your breath. I'm not going to listen.
I was about to fall asleep. This conversation between bro and sis was very boring.
Where are you taking us?
My voice sounded tired, even though I tried to sound strong. I failed.
You'll see, twired wittle dwoggie.
Now you're just sounding like Jenette.
Suddenly, Rhubarb stopped walking and he opened a rusty old door. He untied me and Misty and threw us into a room.
Listen to the orders, and then do as your told.
Rhubarb left me and Misty in the dusty room and locked us in. I looked around, and I saw large machines and equipment. I noticed a lot of other dirty dogs working with the machines. A dog walked up to us, who looked really scary. Here's a picture of him:
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Scary, right? Anyway, his writing shall be in a brownish orangishy color thing.
My name is Leonardo, but you will call me Leo. You go over to that machine and start cleaning it.
You're not the boss of us! Right?
Misty looked at me.
Erm.... uh.... DERPY...... uhhhhuhuhuhuhuhuuhuh.....
I was terrified!
YES!
I finally had said it!
Men!
Dogs appeared.
Take them away. Show them what happens to those who disobey my orders!
The dogs nodded and grabbed me and Misty, dragging us away.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Zookrates » Wed Sep 14, 2011 6:10 am

O no!
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:30 am

Sorry guys, I can't write more today. I probably won't get to it until Friday, or maybe even Saturday. Here's why:


FOR TODAY: I've got to practise piano today and start memorizing for Awana tomorrow.

FOR TOMORROW: It's Awana tomorrow, and I really have to practice memorizing a WHOLE lot, plus I'm probably going to play the main theme song on the piano for the first time, so I've got to practise that.

FOR THURSDAY: My whole family's going to the LA County Fair! :D

FOR FRIDAY: I've practically gotta clean EVERYTHIING! My room, the bathroom, I've got to dust, vaccum, clean the shower, and all that stuff.

FOR SATURDAY: Nothing that I know of. Just chillin' at home! XD


So, I'll probably write more on Saturday. As you can see, I have a busy schedule this week. Sorry guys!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby katomorakwarrior » Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:12 am

Wonderful story. Very exiting :D
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Postby Ellies » Thu Sep 15, 2011 12:00 pm

Sysshyria wrote:Wonderful story. Very exiting :D

I agree
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