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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby BlazingSabre » Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:16 am

Marking ^.^

As to how to write a good death, I would recommend looking at some of your favorites-- mine would be, say, the death of Hal 9000 in 2001-- and seeing what makes it so meaningful. A lot of my favorites are made dramatic by the reaction of other characters to the death. Think about how your characters would deal with the death: often, there's shock, fear, disbelief, denial, rage, misery, numbness, or some combination thereof in the initial reaction, followed by the beginnings of the five stages of grief (which I'd recommend looking up).
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby iWonder » Sat Jan 24, 2015 11:05 am

Tadashi Hamada wrote:So, since I'm plannin a writing project (which I will link later), what do you do to plan projects like this?

I write ideas for each chapter on a piece of paper uvu


What I do is I have an overarching plot for the whole book or story, then I plot each chapter one by one until I reach the end goal. Once those are done I write each chapter, step back for a while and read it a few weeks later. I make edits I twist the plots etc. I found a book about that, which I found very helpful. I will try to link it.
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Roadhog » Sat Jan 24, 2015 11:06 am

saturn. wrote:
Hello, I need to re-introduce myself C; its been a while! I am saturn. Member of the last thread - I am a decent (in my opinion) try-to-be writer- I really love fantasy and personification stories, and I just made one, I would love if you guys would read it! It would make me feel better since I feel kinda down right now!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat Jan 24, 2015 11:09 am

I downloaded wattpad, it looks good, but I haven't started a story, (coz I'm too busy reading a joke book on it, XD) I also think I should finish 'The Link' on here before I start one on wattpad, I'm REALLY bad at starting a story and not finishing it!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Sleipnir » Sat Jan 24, 2015 12:21 pm

PROMPT.

Pick one of your characters. Imagine having them shadow you at school for a day. How would they interact with others at the school? Include any school based activities in the evening!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat Jan 24, 2015 1:02 pm

(Hehe, that's gonna be hard for me to do, I'm home schooled!)
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Megaguirus » Sat Jan 24, 2015 1:20 pm

Spanner339 wrote:(Hehe, that's gonna be hard for me to do, I'm home schooled!)


LOL, me too. XD But I'm still gonna try it later.
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Mercury.Muses » Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:18 pm

Doing the prompt! Throws hands in air then slams them onto a desk dramatically MY MUSE BUCKET IS OVERFLOWING xD
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby iWonder » Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:20 pm

Megaguirus wrote:
Spanner339 wrote:(Hehe, that's gonna be hard for me to do, I'm home schooled!)


LOL, me too. XD But I'm still gonna try it later.


*bro fist* Home-schooling Writers unite!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby watermelon. » Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:22 pm

Hehe..
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*nervous laughter*

I go to a school with 1600 kids. There's only 3 grades... yeah. There's a lot of us! I definently don't live the homeschool life! Hahah, oh well. I get to write a little at shcool.
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