by Uchuujin » Sun Jan 13, 2019 5:32 pm
I've never posted here before, but I have a question. How do you guys decide how to break up (or not break up) your story?
Clearly the obvious answer is chapters, but a lot of really fantastic literature, even some very long ones, are told without being broken up into real chapters at all. Sometimes authors will just have shifts in the scenes, or maybe much longer "books" or "acts" within the story.
I'm kind of in a bind right now, because one story that I have written was meant to be just a long one-shot, but it ended up being much, much longer than I had planned. It's not like full novel length, but it's really more novella length, like 40k or 50k words. It's already completed but I'm still doing some final editing which is why I don't have an exact word count yet. I suppose it's important to note that it is a fanfic. So my plan is to upload it online, likely on AO3. But because it ended up much longer than I planned, I'm really unsure of HOW to upload it. I really have 3 options, I guess.
1) Upload it the way it was written, as a long one-shot that is broken up by scene shifts but still presented as one "chapter". I like this option the best, because it affects pacing the least, however I'm not sure what most people feel about not having chapters to help organize their reading, especially when it comes to stuff posted online where you can't just throw a bookmark into the pages. 40k or 50k words is a LOT for one sitting.
2) Divide it into chapters based on the scene changes and upload each chapter. I normally do this, but in most situations I go into the project knowing it will be a chaptered story and so I pace myself accordingly, allowing for chapters of roughly the same length and with similar weight of content. This option allows people to leave the story and come back easily without struggling to find their place. However, since this was never meant to be a chaptered story, some of the scenes are very, very small, especially in comparison to other scenes. So just... for example oh here's the big climactic chapter that's many thousands of words long, but then the scene right after it might be just 5 or 6 paragraphs of character dialogue or something. I am afraid that uploading it as chapters might make the pace feel uneven and jarring.
3) Upload it in two chapters as a sort of... before "X" event and after "X" event kind of thing. I suppose this is good middle ground, but the two chapters would still be very long and the first chapter of before "X" event would be quite a bit longer than the second one, which again, I'm afraid would make the pacing seem strange.
Can you guys help me? What would you do in my position? And as readers, what would make the story most enjoyable for you?
I know it's silly to waste so much time worrying about this, since it's only fanfiction, but I'm seriously at such a loss about what to do.
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