My short story. Would love critique.

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Re: My short story. Would love critique.

Postby proud.little.wolf » Wed Jun 05, 2013 9:30 am

This is probably the best story I've read on CS so far. The detail you put into it is beautiful; I hope to see more of your work sometime.
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Re: My short story. Would love critique.

Postby Small Child » Wed Jan 15, 2014 1:10 pm

Thank you. :3 Just brightened my mood considerably.


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