Volato 1st litter! End! by kavlri

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Volato 1st litter! End!

Postby kavlri » Wed Jan 04, 2012 5:44 pm

3 Volato Pups Open for adoptions!

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Winners!

Pup1
1st place - calphina
Your entry is really good and you clearly put a lot of effort to get this Volato. The story also show your understandings and his personality very well. Well done!


2nd place - lolpeaceoutlol
Your entry is also good, but you lacks some understandings of Volato's personality. Volatoes are a very social animals and couldn't live very long on their own. Even though he got kick off, he'll need to find another group somehow.


Pup2

1st place - Aki~
Again, I was very impress with this entry. I love the point that you link everything about her to her personality and history, also when you add the name of another Volato, Blue jay, in her history which makes it even better. The only thing that you forgot is her wings on the art, but apart from that you totally deserve her!

2nd place - xoKorina
Your entry is almost perfect, from what I've read. I like the story really, where the other Volato didn't understand her and blame her on things( just like real life isn't it XD),you're just about to get 1st!

3rd place - lolpeaceoutlol
Another great entry, better than another one, but again I feel it lacks some understanding. Very good effort though.


Pup3

1st place -Soy
Short, simple but interesting entry, love it! I like where you add that she occasionally got lonely for being the only pup because it really shows that you understand the point that Volatoes are very social. Your art is very cute too ^^

2nd place - *Blackberry*
Love the entry so far, it's so hard to decide between you and soy. Sad start but happy ending :3

3rd place - Taco cat
Ok entry, but lacks something. Volatoes don't usually want to be around people that much. Sorry

4th place - Zalaika
Incomplete form.



Thanks to all who entry!You guys make it so hard to decide who should win, hope you all enjoy it so far. Another litter will be open for adoption by the end of this month, good luck!

Pup Number:1
Gender:Male
Base on:Common Myna
Placement+Number of ID feather:3 on the base of the tail
Reference Sheet:Link

Entries: calphina
/ lolpeaceoutlol

Pup Number:2
Gender:Female
Base on:Semi-albino Peacock
Placement+Number of ID feather:2(one on each side) behind the ears
Reference Sheet:Link

Entries: lolpeaceoutlol / xoKorina
/ Aki~

Pup Number:3
Gender:Female
Base on:Song Thrush
Placement+Number of ID feather:4 on the base of the tail
Reference Sheet:Link

Entries: Soy
/ Zalaika / Taco cat / *Blackberry*

We recommended you to read the information about Volato, which can be found here, first before you try for that Volato.

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[b]Pup Number:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]Why do you want him/her?:[/b]
[b]History:[/b]
[b]Art of Volato:[/b]


If you have any question, please feel free to ask.

Enjoy!
Last edited by kavlri on Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:52 pm, edited 14 times in total.
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Re: Volato 1st litter for adoption!

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Wed Jan 04, 2012 6:21 pm

Looks adorable.
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Re: Volato 1st litter for adoption!

Postby lolpeaceoutlol » Wed Jan 04, 2012 6:44 pm

Name: Peacock
Personality: Peacock is a very sweet little girl and very innocent. She os nice all the time and to everyone around her even people that aren't nice to her. Peacock though falls in love too quickly or so she's been told. PEacock is very gullable because she trusts people so quickley.
Why do you want him/her?: Because this cute little one seems very interesting and her design is beautiful. IT wou;d be an honor ot have her. Not only because of her den, but also because i find the species quite interesting!
History: Peacock was born to a wonderful mother and father. Oddly enough they didn'tlike out in the wild likethe others. She lived in a house with humans. They had no idea Peacock and her family lived there. PEacock and her family were incredbl smart. She had two brothers. One was a dark green color with dark blue wings with white tips and feathers on its front right foot. while the other was a darrk grey with green wings and white feet and feathers on its back left foot. The names were Saint and Wild. Peacock was one year old when thhe owenrs showed up with a large grey tom-cat one day. It was also her time to get the food. She did't think anything of the cat and snuck out while the humans weren't there. She stroleld around the house looking around for food. She was almost at the tale when the grey tom stood infront of her. Peacock let out a loud squeal and her loving family came flying over. The cat knocked Peacock away hardly sending her flying and she hit a wall knocking Peacock out. The cat attacked her family viscously. Saint came running by her side, but when he was a few steps away from reaching his helpless sister that cat stomped on his tail sinking its large white claws into Saint's head. IT went for the rest of the family killing them as the cat did to Saint. The cat began to eat Wild when the humans walked in. They placed the family in the trash can outside carrying them by thier long tail. They didn't notice the odd wings though as they were too busy praising thier new tom-cat. Peacock used her sharp white teeth to chew out of the white bag she was in. She opened thetrash can bin by banging into it a few times and eventually it flew open. Peacock felt so lost without her family. She was so sad, but she promised hersself that she wouldn't let her family's death hold her bath. Once she gathered up the strangth she spread out her white wings. She flapped them warming them up as she only used them once before. She flew to the forest, being unseen by humans. She's been looking for a family of rats to stay with since....
Art of Volato: viewtopic.php?f=30&t=974008
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Re: Volato 1st litter for adoption!

Postby kavlri » Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:48 am

Thanks for entering lolpeaceoutlol! I add your name in the entry now :3
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Re: Volato 1st litter for adoption!

Postby NinthWolf » Thu Jan 05, 2012 7:29 am

So cute! Nice one Peace&Colby!
Pup Number: #3
Name: Willow
Personality: Young and foolish, kind hearted, popular
Why do you want him/her?: Not only is she beautiful, but she's not a 'usual' character to have, as in, most people, list their characters, most of them, dogs, cats and horses- but not many are unsual breeds such as your litter of Volato. I think she would be a great asset to have on a character page, and if i got her, i'd make sure she wouldn't gather dust.
History: Willow, grew up mostly with the other Volato's in the safety of the roof and gutters of an old barn, She didn't actually grow with humans around her, she grew up in a special place called Redwall ( don't know if you've read the books ) Red Wall, was a large castle, with, Badgers, rabbit's, mice and many other animals and rodents. Willow's parents died, whilst fighting in a war for redwall, a long while back. Willow does not have any other siblings, so she occasionally got lonely.
Art of Volato: WIP
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Re: Volato 1st litter for adoption!

Postby kavlri » Fri Jan 06, 2012 3:39 pm

Soy wrote:So cute! Nice one Peace&Colby!
Pup Number: #3
Name: Willow
Personality: Young and foolish, kind hearted, popular
Why do you want him/her?: Not only is she beautiful, but she's not a 'usual' character to have, as in, most people, list their characters, most of them, dogs, cats and horses- but not many are unsual breeds such as your litter of Volato. I think she would be a great asset to have on a character page, and if i got her, i'd make sure she wouldn't gather dust.
History: WIP
Art of Volato: WIP

Thanks, I'm glad you like her(and her species (; ). Added ^^
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Re: Volato 1st litter for adoption!

Postby kavlri » Fri Jan 06, 2012 10:53 pm

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Re: Volato 1st litter for adoption!

Postby calphina » Sat Jan 07, 2012 3:44 am

These are very adorable, I have to try for one

Pup Number:1
Name:Arsen (it means strong)
Personality:Very shy, but also very curious of his surroundings, tends to get in trouble a lot because of it
Why do you want him/her?:He is adorable, I love his coloring and wings
History:*The day I learned to fly*
It was a cold day, though the day before it seemed a bit warmer. Me and my siblings were getting about the right age for us to be able to use our wings. I was so excited to be able to finally use them and soar through the sky like the older rats around me. I couldn't believe the day had finally come. I woke up very early that day, too excited to sleep. My mother and father took me and my sisters to the highest part of the tree..it was than that they told us to jump, than said our instincts would kick in and we should open our wings and let them do their work. This made me very nervous, but I trusted my parents, so when it was my turn, I took a deep breath, than leaped off the end of the branch. As I fell I let out a high pitch squeak, before my wings burst open and I caught a draft of wind, whooshing me up into the air. It was the scariest and most thrilling feeling I have ever felt. It took me a minute to be able to control my wings, every time I would flap one, my body felt like it was going out of control until I flapped the other. It was at this point when my mother came over and showed me that in order to fly I would have to flap them both at the same time. Once I realized that, it worked out a lot better and I was soaring through the sky with my siblings and parents until sundown that night.
Art of Volato:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=30&t=989431
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Re: Volato 1st litter for adoption!

Postby NinthWolf » Sat Jan 07, 2012 8:56 am

I edited my history- to win, does my form require art? I cannot find anyone who is willing to do any...
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Re: Volato 1st litter for adoption!

Postby zima. » Sat Jan 07, 2012 9:05 am

Pup Number:
Three (3)

Name:
Bambi

Personality:
Coming Soon!

Why do you want him/her?:
Coming Soon!

History:
Coming Soon!

Art of Volato:
I cannot do art :( I have neither the Java nor talent for it.
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