Ocean Breeze by .Coyote

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Ocean Breeze

Postby .Coyote » Sun Aug 28, 2011 11:18 am

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    Name: Ocean Breeze
    Gender: Female
    Skill: Wind control (???)
    Mate/s: None
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    Personality: Needs to be Written
    History: Needs to be Written

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It was a stormy night, and Ocean was... Floating, if you will, on a little bit of wind that she was using to keep herself suspended in the air. She was hidden amongst the storm gray clouds, her ears and eyes were focused on the water below her, waiting.
"Help! Help!" Came the desperate cries of fishermen. Their boat had capsized in the storm and they had been tossed into the water. At last, the call had come. Ocean swiveled her ears around, trying to pin point exactly where the cries were coming from. There! She thought, as she in the air above and floated over to where the men were. She blew the clouds away from her a little bit so she could see better. Ocean counted a total of four men in the water, and she used her powers to change the waves around them to her advantage. She used them to push the fishermen to shore, drifting down onto the surface of the water as she did so. Ocean walked calmly behind the men, urging them forward with the altered waves.

Slowly but surely, the fishermen soon made it back to the sandy shore and crawled onto the land, gasping for air after the long swim. She stood there for a moment and watched them, still standing on the water. The crashing waves seemed to bend around her as she stood there. Another job well done! She thought to herself, though she had been expecting no less.
"Look!" Said one of the men in loud whisper to his three companions. He didn't know if he was just imagining things, but standing on the water was the most beautiful Night Walker he had ever seen.
"Is that -" one of the other men started to speak, but the first man shushed him. Apparently no, he wasn't imagining things.
"Come here, pretty little Night Walker," the first man said, trying to coax Ocean towards him. His wife would definitely forgive him for going fishing again instead of cleaning out the garage like he said he would, if he brought her this pretty Night Walker as a present. He knew that many Night Walkers lived with humans, although his family didn't have one yet.
How silly, Ocean thought. She knew what he wanted, as many people that she rescued had tried to adopt her. If I came home with you, who would watch over the skies and the seas? Ocean turned and began to walk away with a flick of her tail.
"Wait!" Shouted the man, reaching out with a hand as if he could grab her and make her stay. Ocean continued to walk away, walking up towards the sky and disappearing in the clouds. The storm wasn't over yet, and she knew that more people may need her help tonight.
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Re: Story Contest

Postby actionhero » Sun Aug 28, 2011 1:49 pm

Lol @ ugly stick.
/refrains from entering this one o_e
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Re: Story Contest

Postby .Coyote » Sun Aug 28, 2011 2:15 pm

XD, I suppose you could... You can only win one out of three, so it is alright.
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Re: Story Contest

Postby actionhero » Sun Aug 28, 2011 2:28 pm

Maybe... I love blue XD
But I'm not feeling very creative right now...
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Re: Story Contest

Postby .Coyote » Sun Aug 28, 2011 2:50 pm

XD, it is alright, it can wait. Not sure how long I'll wait. At least five entries. Yus yus.
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Re: Story Contest

Postby Zoe-Underland » Sun Aug 28, 2011 9:07 pm

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-The Story-

*Looks up* "Oh hello there my names Saphire Opal, but please just call me Opal, you see I'm what people call, A Nightwalker, a breed that looks like a dog, but with a fluffy tail, the place we stay at till we get Adopted is as the city sleeps, the Person who runs it is called, Nikki, she's a kind lady, but i can't wait till i get a new home, cause sadly, i'm the only one left here, but any-way on to my story, this is the story of my life so welcome inside" * Opens up a big dusty book*,

She was walking down the street, dreary wet and cold, her mother and father and siblings had left her, all had been found and adopted ,well people did'nt really like, her thats what made her sad , she looked up as the Sky rumbeled with lightening and thunder, she sat under a awning, trying to stay dry, as the lighting boomed, she yelped and hid under her paws, ~Why is it when-ever im sad it starts to thunder and rain?~ she asked herself looking around, ~Do i have something to do with the weather~ she Asked again, and sat up shaking her head, the only answer she got was the thunder booming again.

She sighed lightly, and walked off letting the rain patter down onto her blue coat "I'm different to the others, they had well normal Colours well me, i'm blue Why god? Why must it be me?" she asked glancing up at the sky as it poured down with rain, people, walked past her ignoring her, but then one lady stopped and leant down smiling (It's you nikki), she glanced up at the Lady fearfully, as the lightening and thunder boomed and flashed, the lady picked her up "Shh little one don't be afraid" she said and started to walk off, she struggeled and whinnied, the lady smiled lightly "Shh" she said as she walked towards a building.

She went inside, and to the cages, she put her down, and walked off, she sniffed, and glanced around "Mama? Papa? Brother,Sister? she asked looking around frightened, a pain filled howl emitting from her mouth, then the lady walked in and she looked up at her, her mood was sad, and fright filled, but also filled with anger, the thunder boomed and there was a loud ~CRACK~ From outside, then the power went out, there was some Clicking, and then a Generater Started up by Rumbling and the lights turned back on, her tail flicked as her mood changed back to normal, the rain stopped, and the thuder and lightening stopped.

The sun came out and so did the birds, they started to twitter away, the lady smiled "Come on don't be afraid", she said as she layed out some food, and water for her, Opal smiled and ate some of it, she licked the Lady's hand and sat there happily, the lady grinned "I feel silly doing this but my names Nikki" she said and Opal grinned lightly, she picked opal up, and walked outside into a big yard, she set her down and grinned lightly "Welcome to The City Sleeps" she said, Opal barked happily, and wagged her tail, ~This is the first step to finding a new home~ she thought grinning, as she stood up and started to run around barking, Nikki smiled lightly, and grabbed a red rubber ball Opal growled at the ball, Nikki blinked as thunder and lightening boomed across the sky, she switched to a light blue ball with white splotches over it, and instently, the Lightening and thunder dissapered, and the sun came back out.

Nikki blinked Puzzeled "Just what are you?" she muttered and glanced at Opal, who in turn tilted her head wagging her tial, wanting the ball, Nikki shrugged and smiled "Oh Well" she said and threw the ball over to Opal, who in turn jumped up and twisted catching it in her mouth, landing On her feet, she smiled lightly, and trotted over to Nikki and dropped it infront of her, Nikki laughed and threw it again, Opal barked again and ran to it happily, she picked it up, and squeezed it, the ball squeeked, she barked happily, ~Mine, MIne MINe MINE!~ she thought sitting down chewing on the ball happily, (For the mine bit she means the ball XD), Nikki smiled lightly "You can have that ball it's obviouse you like it" she said smiling, Opal in turn barked happily, before being picked up and taken inside, she was taken to another room, with a fire-place, a bed a big comfy, and poofy arm-chair, a mat infront of the fire-place, and a crackleing fire, Nikki smiled and placed Opal down infront of the fireplace, "Welcome to your new life hmm, what should i call you, oh i know Saphire Opal" she said smiling lightly, "Welcome to your New Life Saphire Opal, well that is untill some'one adopts you, also i want you to meet, Mascot, my pet and our Well mascot" she said smiling pointing to the Sleeping one in the chair, (It's the mascot for the NightWalkers), Opal smiled lightly "Till i get adopted" she said as she smiled at Mascot, before drifting of to sleep, into a world of Slumber till she will be woken up, but not before Nikki grabbed one of the necklaces a Blue stone and put it around opals neck the young NightWalker, slept on happily.



Opal smiles *shuts the book*, "so what do you think? it's my life up to know of course, please comment and review (which means what could be improved), Good night all" *She smiles then goes to sleep after putting the book away*


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Re: Story Contest

Postby lynettetan1 » Sun Aug 28, 2011 9:41 pm

the nightwalker sighed. today would be the same routine. Eat, look for more food, eat then sleep. She was going to become a mindless zombie at this rate but it was real hard to find food and when she found it she was tired. She looked at the stone around her neck. Everytime she held it, it glowed. She stared at it for a while for the 5th time tonight. There had to be something... She did not remember who she was but the stone must have had something to do with it. She stared at it, and it glowed, as if trying to tell her something, but it was just like the humans, shouting through a stained glass window. She could plainly see that they were trying to tell her something but for the like of her she just could not figure out what. She sighed, blowing on the stone.

Suddenly, her nose caught the smell of something. Food! for the first time in two days! her mouth began salivating and she walked towards it, sniffing in the air hungrily. Her stomach growled like an angry monster. Hissing at her belly to keep quiet, she stalked forward. A man was barbecueing, there was a party. she licked her lips in anticipation. An angry raincloud went over the party and stopped it. All the people started grumbling and going back, some taking all the food. She cursed her bad luck and then saw something. A woman had dropped a wing of a... bird maybe? She rushed over and grabbed it, eating happily. "hey pretty missie. Its dangerous out here, what are you doing out here...alone?" She turned and started growling at a big stray. "hand that over pretty missie, and i might consider giving you a little bit." She tried to run but he grabbed her tail. "c'mon i have not had any food in weeks!" She wrenched her tail free and ran but he was gaining on her. She then had no choice. throwing the chicken wing towards him, she ran away.

At a dirty alley way in a ditch, she sobbed to herself. A funny box with pictures on it boomed. "sjbnfdnerfnerj"it sounded like.(she does not understand human speech) she looked up, it showed an overwhelming number of rainclouds over something green. She stared at it, confused but after a while she tried something(she controls the weather.best at wind and water though.) A tiny rainstorm was created above the funny boxes head and it exploded. Jumping back with obvious surprise, she heard the two legged's angry voices. She ran of gleefully.

The next few weeks, she was happy. She learnt how to control her powers, and had given that big stray a lesson by electrocuting him. She now had more time to figure things out. She had learnt english and spanish but there was one language she had not learnt yet... her stone's

It still blinked when she held it, but now when she used her powers it glowed bright blue. When she felt sad it felt somewhat comforting, and she could not take it off. she stared at it, a thousand possibilities envelopeing her mind...

A few days later, a woman walked right up to her. She wanted to run away, but the lady said, "wait!" In HER language. "how did you learn to speak..." she drifted of. The lady smiled. "come with me, ill tell you." As she walked, she told her. "You are a nightwalker eith the powers to control water. You are overusing it though. The stone is to hold your powers back lest you do something really wrong. You need to bond with a human. She looked up at the lady. "bond?" The lady nodded. "Yes. when you have found a human that loves you,your stone will glow and merge with the chosen human's hand and they will understand all you say, and you them. You will be able to see through each others eyes, and be able to discuss teleoathically on the best move, and be each other's friend when either of you are feeling discouraged. Youre partner." The nightwalker smiled. "I hope to find my bond soon then." The lady nodded. "im sure you will, im sure you will."
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Re: Story Contest

Postby actionhero » Sun Aug 28, 2011 11:11 pm

((In this story, she's going to be named Ocean Breeze (; but Ocean for short ))

It was a stormy night, and Ocean was... Floating, if you will, on a little bit of wind that she was using to keep herself suspended in the air. She was hidden amongst the storm gray clouds, her ears and eyes were focused on the water below her, waiting.
"Help! Help!" Came the desperate cries of fishermen. Their boat had capsized in the storm and they had been tossed into the water. At last, the call had come. Ocean swiveled her ears around, trying to pin point exactly where the cries were coming from. There! She thought, as she in the air above and floated over to where the men were. She blew the clouds away from her a little bit so she could see better. Ocean counted a total of four men in the water, and she used her powers to change the waves around them to her advantage. She used them to push the fishermen to shore, drifting down onto the surface of the water as she did so. Ocean walked calmly behind the men, urging them forward with the altered waves.

Slowly but surely, the fishermen soon made it back to the sandy shore and crawled onto the land, gasping for air after the long swim. She stood there for a moment and watched them, still standing on the water. The crashing waves seemed to bend around her as she stood there. Another job well done! She thought to herself, though she had been expecting no less.
"Look!" Said one of the men in loud whisper to his three companions. He didn't know if he was just imagining things, but standing on the water was the most beautiful Night Walker he had ever seen.
"Is that -" one of the other men started to speak, but the first man shushed him. Apparently no, he wasn't imagining things.
"Come here, pretty little Night Walker," the first man said, trying to coax Ocean towards him. His wife would definitely forgive him for going fishing again instead of cleaning out the garage like he said he would, if he brought her this pretty Night Walker as a present. He knew that many Night Walkers lived with humans, although his family didn't have one yet.
How silly, Ocean thought. She knew what he wanted, as many people that she rescued had tried to adopt her. If I came home with you, who would watch over the skies and the seas? Ocean turned and began to walk away with a flick of her tail.
"Wait!" Shouted the man, reaching out with a hand as if he could grab her and make her stay. Ocean continued to walk away, walking up towards the sky and disappearing in the clouds. The storm wasn't over yet, and she knew that more people may need her help tonight.

((Neeeeehh. Its 4 am. I have writer's block and my imagination is asleep DX ))
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Re: Story Contest

Postby .Coyote » Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:42 am

XD Yay entries! YUS!
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Re: Story Contest

Postby actionhero » Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:30 pm

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