sorry, for the absence. i haven't forgot about this, i've just been busy. the winner is fishi. you put a lot of work into your entry, that's apparent in one glace. but your writing itself is nicely detailed and almond's emotions were clearly conveyed.
HM to ravenwhisper. your entry really wrenched my heart. i felt pity towards turtle-spirit but also an understanding of how he felt and why he had to kill. if you had expanded the story more, it would've been wonderful.
HM to ravenwhisper. your entry really wrenched my heart. i felt pity towards turtle-spirit but also an understanding of how he felt and why he had to kill. if you had expanded the story more, it would've been wonderful.
