Re: Guppy #57 late to the club like

Postby Noodlely » Thu Jan 11, 2018 4:03 pm

hey, so here are the results for this guppy
I apologize for the wait on this

the winner of this guppy is Evils
a concise and believable character
I appreciated how your latter piece of artwork brought to life your description of her love for the frosted countryside nights

honorable mentions go to Ph.D
your writing and unique use of first person view to set a scene was incredibly gripping and vivid
I felt all the uneasiness and distress of the situation right along with the character
out of all the forms your storytelling was my favorite, but I felt a bit confused by the character (who they were and their motivations)

and Lumy
I really enjoyed the menagerie of beautiful artwork you created for this character
I also liked the way you used first person description to express this character's complexion, but because of this some of their personality came off a bit one noted (it would have been nice to have seen the juxtaposition of their view of them self and the reality of the situation/another characters point of view)

sorry again for the wait
I know what it's like to try out for these sorts of contests, and I can't tell you how much I love and respect the enormous amount of work and soul you guys pour into this
thank you so much
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Re: Guppy #57 late to the club like

Postby lumy » Thu Jan 11, 2018 4:35 pm

Noodlely wrote:
hey, so here are the results for this guppy
I apologize for the wait on this

the winner of this guppy is Evils
a concise and believable character
I appreciated how your latter piece of artwork brought to life your description of her love for the frosted countryside nights

honorable mentions go to Ph.D
your writing and unique use of first person view to set a scene was incredibly gripping and vivid
I felt all the uneasiness and distress of the situation right along with the character
out of all the forms your storytelling was my favorite, but I felt a bit confused by the character (who they were and their motivations)

and Lumy
I really enjoyed the menagerie of beautiful artwork you created for this character
I also liked the way you used first person description to express this character's complexion, but because of this some of their personality came off a bit one noted (it would have been nice to have seen the juxtaposition of their view of them self and the reality of the situation/another characters point of view)

sorry again for the wait
I know what it's like to try out for these sorts of contests, and I can't tell you how much I love and respect the enormous amount of work and soul you guys pour into this
thank you so much


Thank you ! I still don't know english very well so it's confusing for me to understand, but I think I grasped the idea of what you said! It was a really cool character do draw even though I was doing this while cleaning up the house to the new years , but it really gave me the feeling I could do something nice in less than 24 hours and that was a bonus since I wasn't drawing for months ( college bleh)
Certainly will have your advice in heart, I will try to write better in the future :') Living in a country that never speaks in english is a pain , really !
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Re: Guppy #57 late to the club like

Postby Evils » Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:48 am

AAAA!!
Thank you so much!! <33
I'm honestly so glad to have Ricochet, I definitely know I'll be fleshing out her character even more soon. QwQ
I really enjoy feedback from these kinds of competitions! It's always so nice to see what the artist has to say qwq
Thank you so much once again!!!! Words can't describe how happy I am, thank you!! <33
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Re: Guppy #57 late to the club like

Postby Ph.D » Fri Jan 12, 2018 8:53 am

Congratulations Evils! Thank you for the honorable mention, I really enjoyed to have some writing inspiration and I'm glad you liked the writing.
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