My first Marra so far!
jennfreckles wrote:minecraftpuppy606 wrote:User: minecraftpuppy606
Name: Twix
Gender: Male
Story: Sitting, Twix curled his tail around his legs, watching his life pass by as if he were dying this very moment. With each song a new memory danced in his mind. His heart would pump blood along to the beat of the song, giving him life almost as good as the music he was listening to. Suddenly his head shot back, making the headphones crash onto the ground, with a loud thump. Even with it on the ground Twix could hear the song blasting through his headphones. He gave it a death glare, then shook his head, hoping to forget about that one song. His eyes took a little to focus on the ipod after shaking his head so hard. He gave the song a very low rating, then skipped it. Twix's fur back prickled when the headphones slid back over his ears. The feeling of having his headphones on was different from anything else he had felt recently. As a new song begun his eyes closed, and he drifted off to his happy world of childhood memories.Congrats to minecraftpuppy606! all these stories were really incredible, pulling at the heart strings and inspiring feelings of awe, but i have to pick a winner! When i read this story i just had to give it a second read through! it was one of those stories that you cant understand its full potential until you reread it! I love how this story gives you a feeling that the reality of the story is much bigger than what you've read, and gives an amazing atmosphere. I can practically see Twix's head shooting up and his glare!Congrats again!
Those words have to be some of the most important things ever said to me.
I try so hard to make my stories feel this way as writing is so important to me, it's been important to me since I first started role-playing around the age of 10.
One of my biggest dreams is to write my own books.
