Re: Character #3- For Adopt!

Postby muttgirl310 » Wed Sep 14, 2016 4:38 am

Lilly Your Bff wrote:Username: Lilly Your Bff
Character Name: Toxin
Character Gender: male
Extras:
Story About Toxin and his Sister
(Takes place when they are pups their wild names are Cole and Lilly but was changed to their names given by the human: Toxin and Raelynn)
Cole opened his eyes slowly when his sister nuged him awake. He glared at her once finnaly realizing what was going on. She giggled and got up trotting off. He growled, he stood up stretching his legs out and chasing after her "your so dead!" he called out angrily. She just giggled and continued to run. He chased her into the woods before realizing he could no longer see his sister. He looked around, "Lilly? This isn't funny!" he yelled. He snorted and dashed to the left to find nothing, "Lilly!? Where are you?" he called out. Cole ran back the right then to the north. He finnaly saw her, she was laying on the ground crying. He jumped over a log and went up to her "Lilly!? What happened!?" He said, she looked at her leg in pain, their was a rope, tied to it tightly. He looked to where the rope lead and it was tied to a near by tree. "go get help" she pleaded. He nodded and ran back to the pack to see them being pulled by ropes around there neck into cages, he looked to his mom who was roped by her neck as well, she stood up on her back legs and they roped her front legs, she pulled and they roped her back ones. They pulled her to the ground, she looked at him "Run! Take your sister and run!" she yelled.

He whined and ran back towards his sister with tears streaming down his face. She looked at him with worried eyes. "what happened!?" she demanded, he took a deep breath before muttering the word "humans.." she gasped and started crying again. He laid beside her "its okay, everything will be alright." he said reassuring her. She laid her head down on his leg and he put his head over her neck. He knew the humans would find her and him next because he couldn't get the rope off. He swore to himself that no matter what the humans did he would escape, with his sister and pack. They laid their for half an hour or so before he heard a twig snap and turned to see a girl, she smiled sweetly. His sister shook like a leaf from fear and he stood in front of her showing his teeth. He growled, the human took a step back so he would calm. She took a few pieces of meat out a bag and tossed them over gently to the pup. He bent down to sniff them but kept an eye on the woman. After a moment of sniffing he ate one, he gave the other to his sister. He glared at the woman and she giggled slightly "don't look at me like that" she said. He huffed in response and got closer to his sister.

The woman had sat their for a while coaxing them and getting closer. Finnaly she was close enough to touch the fae and cut her loose.

500/500 words


Congrats! He is all yours! I really loved the story!
Image
Image
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━
┌────────────┐
coding art credit profile icon
my viscets dogons my art shop
● ● ━━━━━━━━━━━ ● ●
Hey I am Muttgirl but feel free to
call me mutt. I own a species on
here called Dogons and am always
willing to help out whenever I can
so do not be afraid to reach out or
send me a pm. I can help a little
with adoption forms and do some
art, although it's not amazing.

└────────────┘
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━
Image
Image
User avatar
muttgirl310
 
Posts: 2904
Joined: Wed Feb 03, 2016 2:50 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Character #3- ADOPTED

Postby Bunny!! » Wed Sep 14, 2016 8:19 am

Thanks!
User avatar
Bunny!!
 
Posts: 17353
Joined: Thu Feb 18, 2016 1:14 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Lex., randomcat287 and 2 guests