[Khans]

Floofy Monster face Swirl

Swirl passes same as Chim
Floof passes same as Chim
Moster face - 100% with Chim, 50% with Monster face


Username: Khaos
Name: The Dahlia Monster // Dahlia
Gender: Mare
Personality: Introverted-Analytical-Pragmatic-Perfectionist-Outcast
Halter: Flower crown with Red Bleeding Hearts and Black Dahlias , still in progress
Sire: Coomon
Sire: Tell It As It Is a.k.a. Shelk

Dahlia is a custom/breeding and because of her amazing genetics It felt very selfish of me to keep her all to myself so I am having a comp for 8 of her slots. You can pretty up the forum as much as you like, but it will not count. On the other hand, attempting to do art will help aid in winning. There is no word count. You can go full out, good luck <3

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Story of choosing:

(you may attempt to do art)


May breed: 5/28/16

(PS first time making a floof >w<)

[Thelastsilhouette]

Childhood: Dahlia grew up knowing she was different, whenever a new tolter caught sight of her they either gasped because of her adorable fluffliness or they gasped because they caught sight of her face markings. Some tolters caught sight of her and she knew they didn't like what they saw. Her fathers knew her for the sweet filly she was and would constantly watch after her, not wanting her confidence to be ruined by the judgement of others who had yet to know her. Though they showered her with love and affection, she felt different, like an outcast before she even had a chance to introduce herself. Instead of playing with other fillies or colts, she stood alone, watching and longing to be asked to come and play, yet she never was..
Relationship with Coomon: Coomon's heart is as gentle as his coat is fluffy, he doesn't always know how to show Dahlia how beautiful she is. She is a bit skeptical of his kind words, as her father she assumes he says them because he's biased. But though she doesn't always take his words seriously she does love spending time with him, they share the struggle of grooming fluffy coats and bond together through that as well as time spent grazing or out on rides when they can manage it together.
Relationship with Shelk: With Shelk, Dahlia and him have the kind of relationship she wished she had with other horses when she was young. Shelk lets her see him as the less-than-perfect horse he shows himself to be in competitions. He doesn't like being around many other tolters but finds time to spend with her. She feels that he is as clumsy outside as she is in her mind. She does her best to seem like she doesn't care about her flaws but she does slip up sometimes when she's with him, he's seriously one of her best friends.
Story of choosing:

Stares. Dahlia was out on a trail ride with her two fathers and their humans, her markings were making the few people and horses to pass stare at her. Most looked disturbed by what they saw. She replied with flattened ears and head high, she was perfect and refused to feel shame for what made her special. Coomon would nicker encouragement to her, she was too proud to show it, but she appreciated it a little bit. Shelk was more awkward but did his best to give her a light nudge with his muzzle against her shoulder to show his own affection, most times he would accidentally swing his muzzle too hard and cause himself pain as his nose met her shoulder.
After a whole morning spent with constant startled stares and horses eyeing her like she was some predator in disguise. With both her fathers constantly trying to show that they loved her anyways, she was feeling very stifled by them and everyone else around her. Her mood had turned from uncaring and proud to sour and irritable. She was ready to snap at anything.
"Oh wow!" The sound of a surprised voice caught her by surprise. She moved to glare at the newest human to ogle her to see a horse with markings similar to hers. He looked calm and truly like nothing could bother him. "What a pretty horse, she's fluffy and got the neatest markings on her face. She reminds me of Rakshasa a bit." Rakshasa let out a gruff nicker, his way of greeting.
Dahlia just stared, still surprised that there was another horse, a tolter, with markings like hers.

[Lady Tuesday]

Mark!<3

[chaton,]

Childhood: Dahlia grew up much like you'd expect; bullied and feared for her strange markings. At first she cared what others thought, cried over their words, but hardened overtime into the critical mare she is now. Her few and far-between visits to her 'step-father' definitely helped with her formerly low self-esteem.
Relationship with Coomon: Dahlia absolutely abhors her sweet-obsessed father. She sees him as childish and incompetent, and does her best to stay as far away from him as possible, which is terribly hard when it seems to be his one goal in life to get her to eat one of those gut-wrenchingly sweet cookies of his.
Relationship with Shelk: Not at all impressed with the clutzy stallion, Daliah mostly keeps her distance from him. She puts up with him for the sole reason that he is blood, but she's always favored Etoile.
Story of choosing: first meeting with etoile - before the personality change

"Etoile, you've got a special guest." The stallion flicked an ear with disinterest - he got visitors often enough for it not to be a huge deal to him. Nonetheless, he obediently followed his human out of his stall and into the manicured courtyard of the estate where another pair of humans were unlatching the door of a pristine trailer.

Now, this caught his interest. His visitors usually didn't arrive in a trailer, unless they were here to take up a stud slot. Snorting, he took a curious step forward when the door swung open...

Only to take one right back in shock when the tiny, floof covered body of a foal wobbled down the ramp. He cast an accusatory glance at his human - 'what is this? this isn't mine why have you brought it here' - before turning back to the foal. Or where she'd been standing previously. Whipping his head around this way and that he searched for her, though a solid thump against his leg revealed exactly where the little thing had gone.

Ears flat, he snorted, completely unimpressed with what must be a joke, and wedged his snout between his leg and the foal and puuushed her away firmly. She stamped a small hoof and marched right back up to him, staring him down. The humans standing with them seemed to think the encounter was the funniest thing ever, and he felt his pelt itch with irritation. This filly was making a fool of him, and they were laughing - at him!

"Easy big man - this is Coomon's daughter, Dahlia." His human stepped in right as he was contemplating sitting on the little brat, and her words piqued his interest for sure. So this was his, what? Step-daughter? Turning back to her, she cocked her head and he lipped at her scruff of mane. She whickered and pushed back against him, and Etoile, though he would never admit it, realized he had a soft spot for her.

The two spent the rest of the day together, found at sunset in curled up together in a patch of waning sunlight. A crown of black flowers had somehow been nestled upon the foal's head - though it was a few sizes too big still and bent her ears at odd angles.

[Tazaria]

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lord nope

[heyheygirl101]

Childhood: Dahlia grew up rather normally, now of course one wouldn't think that by looking at the her but at her stables it was normal to be different so no one was ever really treated differently because of it. Dahlia was a little shy though, but that was mainly because some of the tolters she first met were rather frightening to a new born foal, tolters like Anon who she was pretty certain wanted to kill her when she first met him. So as I said she grew up rather normally though, that is if you find The Addams Family's way of raising children normal, which is certainly something I and I believe Dahlia would.
Relationship with Coomon: Dahlia has a difficult relationship with her father, mainly because she doesn't really see him as one, I mean yes he helped in her creation, which she is rather surprised about, since it meant that he would have had to stop thinking of cookies long enough to do so, but past that he didn't really care much for her. She didn't share his love for cookies, and by love it was definitely an obsession, she also didn't really have much interaction from him either unless it was about cookies. Coomon's obsession made it impossible for her to try to connect with him past the blood they shared, which she often regretted, so instead she really just tried to stay as far away from him as possible.
Relationship with Shelk: Dahlia's relationship with Shelk is better than with Coomon but still not really all there, this is mainly due to the fact that she doesn't see him enough to really build anything. Though she has been over to his stables a few times she doesn't enjoy it at all because of the way all of the horses look at her there, it is as if she is a Monster or something, and because her father is too scared to stand up for himself, he also never defends her, and this has cut Dahlia deeply as he is her dad and should protect her better than anyone else in the whole world.
Story of choosing:
Dahlia's parents weren't really there for her when she was little so instead she was sort of adopted by Stan and Anon, though as mentioned before it always looked like Anon wanted to kill her he and Stan were probably the best things for her because they made her feel normal, it was only when she wasn't with them that she knew she was different some how, she never really knew what made her different, until one day she caught her reflection in a car window, it was then that she realized how much of a monster she truly looked like and why everyone seemed to fear her. So the next day when she saw Stan she asked him why he wasn't scared of her, why he wasn't scared of the monster she obviously was, now of course one has to know that Stan loved Anon and well Anon was probably the scariest horse on the face of this Earth so it should come to no ones surprise that he laughed at this question. Dahlia was stunned by this reaction but Stan explained that although she looked different and scary to some that to him and Anon, even though he would never show it, it was what made her Dahlia, it was what made her the different, interesting mare that they loved. So it remained that the three of them were feared by many, loved by few but at least they knew they were never going to be outcasts to each other.

[kayynine]

Childhood:
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Story of choosing:
res

[Raury]

Childhood: Dahlia
Relationship with Coomon:
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Res.... C:

[trees |-/]

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res

[Kallisto Moon]

Mark <3

iStarz & Everly sent me ^.^