Re: RPW #33

Postby Chimericect » Mon Nov 02, 2015 10:32 am

    Ah yes, I'll have this officially closed in 30 minutes, I have to get some RL stuff done before I can get to judgin q v q
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Re: RPW #33

Postby Chimericect » Tue Nov 03, 2015 12:36 am

.forever. wrote:
if this is still open uvu <33


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username ;; .forever.

name ;; Iridescent

gender ;; Agender with she/her pronouns

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personality ;;


    • knowledgeable
        Iri just loves telling others, no mater who it is, anything and everything she knows. Others don't trust her with their secrets because of this. One of her favorite things she loves to do is listen to audio books about paranormal investigations. They are her favorite and she knows just about everything about the most famous ones out there. Reading about them would probably be easier but it just stresses her eyes out. These odd facts kinda push people away and often creep others out. Though, she enjoys the company of the ones that stay around. She likes it when they stick around to listen to recordings of the scariest tapes of man kind.
    • natty
        Because of her random knowledge, she is often gloating about how smart she is. Her knowledge expends to more than just the paranormal side. She's actually quite fashionable and is almost never found wearing any of the out of style clothes. She lieks to wear dresses, cardigans, and scarves mostly. Her forte is jewelry. She loves the flashy necklaces and bracelets though she never wears more than just one earring in each ear. Its just odd for her to think of having more than one earring. Through this, she likes to sometimes give small advice here and there. Mostly to her friends and those who'll accept them.
    • grudgeful and vindictive
        With every nice side, there's also a bad. She holds grudges, very easily I might say. They're long lasting and it takes a lot for them to dissipate. Most of her grudges result in wanting revenge. Mainly for those who do her so wrong. Her revenge is unreasonable and she often doesn't act on them as someone usually talks her out of it. It doesn't stop her from wanting it though.

Winner!
I loved your form, it didn't have any excess or any extreme amounts of information and told me just enough about her character. I liked that you showed both the good and the bad, and the hobbies just fit her. I hope to see her around in the community <33

Since I have time I want to tell the other two why they didn't win ;w;
Viixen;
honestly it was a tie between you two for awhile, her form just stuck out more in my mind. However I like to see character development and wasn't exactly a huge fan of what you used your writing extra on q w q I understand you have the idea and I hope it comes true for you soon! Im also glad to see you love greyson so much ||D
Booklover;
You did have a longer form all together, and I was hoping that putting a word limit would have people have a more concise and organized form. Unfortunately, you had a lot of useless information that didn't really tell me anything about the character. From alignment down you didn't really need, that was all excess that could've been taken out. It takes awhile to read tiny tidbits and honestly it was hard for me to focus a few times, my mind wanders off with things like this. I did the same thing when I first started to make forms, then someone told me the same thing I told you: what takes you a few minutes to type up can take hours for a judge to read. Make everything in your form count, not just filler information because a longer form doesn't automatically mean you win. uwu
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Re: RPW #33

Postby .forever. » Tue Nov 03, 2015 1:34 am

QWQ IRRRRII YES

thank you omg xD I'll be sure to take great care of her! I promise uvu

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