Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby conquest; » Sun May 12, 2013 6:30 am

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Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby Charias » Sun May 12, 2013 7:02 am

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I think this is my absolute dream kiamara! She is so amazing. I love her so much.

Username;;
    Hello, I'm яσттωєιlєя! You can call me Rott, Rottie or Weily. I'd just like to mention - this is my absolute dream kiamara. I would do anything to win her. If I could add stuff to this form, I would make it so long and put so much detail into it. It would do absolutely anything to win her. As it is, I've tried the best I can to make a good form... but word limits don't agree with me. I ramble too much. c:
Name;;
    Blaze Jayda Ash
    Her name, the one given by her parents before they died many years ago, was Jayda. A name that she always liked enough, even though she didn't think it really suited her character - Jayda was more of a name for a princess than a rebellious teenage kiamara who did anything but abide by the rules. But she didn't despise it. When she discovered her element, however, she felt it right to change her name; and so she became Blaze. Which sounded perfect, considering that is exactly what she is.
Gender;;
    Female
    When I saw her, I immediately knew that she was a female. In my mind, there is no way she could possibly be a male. I saw the subtleties and many different layers of her colour, and thought - no offense, anyone - that she is way too deep and diverse to be a male. Too cryptic. And I don't really think she would really fit in with the story if she was a male. No, she is definately a female.
The day my element was discovered;;
    As told by Blaze
    >>>>>It was just a normal day. Another dreary, wintry day, with snow swirling in the air and smothering my back and stinging my eyes. I could bearly see - I could bearly breathe - through the torrent of frozen water that fell upon me. The chill crept through my fur. My paws ached from ploughing so much snow from my path. I regretted taking leave as soon as my feet touched snow, but I was far too proud to turn back and admit that the weather was far too savage for a hunting trip.
    >>>>>I growled to myself. I had been out for over an hour, but there was no sign of any prey. All this to prove a point that can't be proven. I'm going to get myself killed. It wasn't exactly an exaggeration. I wasn't built for the snow. My toes, my tail, my ears - numb, both as numb as if they had already been devoured by frostbite. I knew I had to find shelter, but it wasn't an easy task when I couldn't see five feet in front of my face. Snow, I cursed.
    >>>>>It was a further hour before I was back under the partial shelter of the trees, though I knew that I would stand a much better chance of survival if I could find a cave of some sort. And so I stubbornly kept on plodding, despite the protest from my limbs and the burdening temptation to simply lay down and sleep where I stood. I found a narrow, winding creek and followed it upstream, to where I hoped I might find a rocky cavern in which to rest; I was lucky. An indefinate amount of exhausted crawling brought me to the black mouth of a dripping cave, which was startling against the white that surrounded it.
    >>>>>It wasn't cosy, nor was it warm. It was damp and cold and echoed with alien noises - creatures scurrying and scuttling in the gloom. I shivered, but whether from cold, exhaustion or fear I couldn't tell. From a place of water to a place of darkness - will this nightmare ever end? I gathered some dry-ish twigs and lichen from a deep within the cave's maw as I dared tread, and made for myself a crude bed in a corner, near enough to the mouth that I could escape if something crept up from behind.
    >>>>>I couldn't sleep, though. And this made me frustrated, and, in turn, angry. So angry. Angry at the cold, angry at the damp, angry at the darkness - why wouldn't it just go away and leave me alone? I closed my eyes against it and growled. I just wanted to be home. I just wanted to be far away from that horrible place. Something flickered in front of my closed eyelids and they sprung open - maybe it was another kiamara? What I saw shocked and relieved me even more.
    >>>>>Fire.
    >>>>>I stared at it as it writhed and flickered, fighting away the cold and the damp and the darkness. So beautiful. It spread across my bed of litter, dancing orange, yellow and red, warming my face. Then I grinned, and laughed. How funny and absurd it was. Did I do that? Well, there's nobody else here but me. Cool. The flame flared just before my paw. I had a strange urge to touch it. Which, thinking back, was a very bad idea. But it didn't stop me at the time.
    >>>>>It hurt. The flame licked my paw with painful warmth, but I didn't withdraw it. I simply watched. When I pulled my paw from the heat, the fire clung to it like glowing fur, making my foot look like a branch from a bonfire. I think any other kiamara would be fighting the urge to blow on the fire until it fled like a scared little insect, but all I wanted to do was watch it, forever. It slithered up my leg, wrapping itself around my wrist; and when it faded, it left something behind: two gems that smouldered with a dark, inner flame. I touched them with my nose. They burned as hot as fire.
    >>>>>What happened after that? I slept. I went home. I was greeted with sideways glances and under-the-breath remarks, all of which I ignored. I made my home far from the others, but not so far as that they could forget about me. Some looked at me with reverence, others with hatred, and all with fear. I liked that. They don't understand, they never will. I knew one thing for certain: my life would never be the same again.
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    >>>>>The young kiamara stood, quivering, before the blazing bed of fire.
    >>>>>"Umm... Blaze! Blaze! We need you!" He shouted. Two crimson eyes flickered into appearance through the flames questioningly.
    >>>>>"Go away. I'm busy," she replied lazily.
    >>>>>"Please. There's a forest fire."
    >>>>>"So..? Get one of the other elementals. I'm busy."
    >>>>>"No, we need you."
    >>>>>"What... why?" She yawned.
    >>>>>"Because half of the tribe is convinced you started the thing! Umm... sorry, Oh Great Flaming One."
    >>>>>"Just call me Jay, please. Where is this terrifying inferno then?" She asked, standing and stepping from her wreath of fire.
    >>>>>He started to run away, calling over his shoulder, "this way!" She trailed him through the clearing, other kiamaras hiding or bowing or cursing as she passed.
    >>>>>They soon arrived at a blazing area of forest, smoke billowing up to the sky like a black tower. A growling kiamara ran up to Jayda, shouting, "you did this!"
    >>>>>"No, I didn't. But I'll make the scary fire go away for you." She smirked, then looked up at the fire. Such a shame for such an impressive fire to be extinguished. She watched as it shrunk, suffocating under her gaze, until it was nothing more than a thinning pillar of smoke. "There, done. Next time, don't bother me."
    >>>>>He snarled. "Leave, demon! If you do this again... you will regret it."
    >>>>>"Is that a threat?" she mocked. She started to walk away, saying, "my name isn't demon. It's Oh Great Blazing One to you; you can even add a 'mighty' in there if you feel the need."
    >>>>>The young kiamara, who had been stood watching, burst out in laughter. She looked at him and smiled.
    >>>>>"Bye, kid,"
    >>>>>He waved a tail. "Bye, Jay!"
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    I know this story sucks a bit. I struggled to squeeze it all in with the word limit.
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Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby Wind Song » Sun May 12, 2013 7:02 am

Just to answer a few questions that people have pmed me about concerning these kias~

May we try for more than 1 at once?
Yep, you can try for all four if you wish, but you can only win one.

When is the end date?
You have exactly one week, so this ends on the 18th.
There will most likely be no extensions, but this is quite a short and simple contest so please have everything done by then n.n
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Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby KaedeMaple » Sun May 12, 2013 8:06 am

b u t t h e w o r l d t o o k a s p a r k
l i k e a m a t c h i n t h e d a r k
a n d t h e f i r e b r o u g h t m e t o l i f e
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The Day My Element was Discovered:
Phoenix trudged through the forest. His eyes where fixed n the ground, his tail drooping. He had felt sick ever since coming here. It was just too.....Cold. When your sick, aren't you supposed to feel kinda cold? But. No, no. He let out a sigh, and plopped down, eyes staring balefully up at the trees surrounding him. But his ears shot up. He heard a voice. "This waaaay. This waayy." It called. Suddenly, he felt a surge of energy. He shot to his paws and pounded after the voice, ducking under a low-hanging tree branch, he gasped and stopped mid-stride. A vast desert stretched out before him, sunny and hot. He smiled and pounded down the slope, kicking up sand as he left the forest. The hot, dry ground seemed to refresh him, unlike some Kiamara's might feel. A smile was upon his face as he continued to follow the voice.

His eyes where brighter, and he felt so much better. Suddenly, he skidded to an abrupt halt as a huge thing rose up in front of him. Smoke came from the top, his sensitive nose wrinkling in slight disgust as the acrid scent wafted down. But the voice seemed to lead him onward. Cautiously, he started around the mountain before finding some-what stairs. He bounded up them, sending pebbles down onto the ground. He gulped nervously, eyes flickering downward as he realized just how high he had gone. But he was near the top and the voice was never stronger. He ran the rest of the way, forcing himself not to look down. He stopped, coming to a flat top. A large hole was in the center, smoke coming out of it.

The kiamara slunk forward, keeping low to the ground. He came to rest by the hole and looked down. A gasp escaped him, eyes widening. Lava-well, no, it was fire- surged below. The voice sounded again, but it was right below him. He looked down, but only saw the fire. Then it hit him. He was fire. He could control it. It was him, he was it. I am fire.
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Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby redpanda. » Sun May 12, 2013 8:08 am

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Have to try for this gal too <33
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Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby P1877a & Crazy » Sun May 12, 2013 9:00 am

Username: p1877a & Crazy (crazy here)
Name: Fizzella Flame - Just Fizz or Flame
Gender: Female
The day my element was discovered: It was Chinese New Year and I went to China for the holiday. I bought some fireworks and I grabbed my matches and I picked one up and it was lit so I closed my eyes and I tried another one and then it did it again so I took a weed in my hand I thought 'flame on one of the seeds'. It only set one seed on fire. That is how I Discovered my element.
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'Spick and span,
Wish and wash,
Burn and crush,
hatred fills the heart,
and is contagious,
to anyone,
Flames are hatred,
but in one way,
they are love,
for the day,
and fireworks,
might be our,
Savior'
I don't know but it came to my mind :P
Also, a short story how she got her name!
Fizzela's Point of View
I was walking to the gas station and I bought a Pepsi and some Rootbeer. I was going to try out what my friend taught me to do. She said, 'take a soda and if you want it to fizz up just drink some and swish it around in your mouth and look up then, just lightly blow out of your mouth.' When, I got home I did what she said to do and I thought of some names (they just called her bug as a nickname) because I didn't have a name. I thought really hard and I liked the name Jezzabell and I like fizz in my sodas so I thought Fizzela! And then I thought of how the fizz came out of my mouth and I thought Volcano! Then, I snapped my fingers, "since I lit those matches up on Chinese New Year myu last name should be Flame....... Fizzela Flame! I kept on saying that name until I fell asleep.
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Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby arsim » Sun May 12, 2013 9:13 am

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Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby latte jack » Sun May 12, 2013 9:17 am

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    The day my element was discovered, my parents and I were "vacationing" in a log cabin on the edge of a pine forest. My mother said we needed to get away from the crowded city for a while. Anyways, on our first morning there, I woke up to my father's voice. Hearing the alarm in his tone, I leaped out of bed, pushing the soft, cloth sheets and hand-sewn quilt off of myself. I ran down the old wooden stairs, my paws making loud thuds as they hit each one. I came to a slow stop as I saw my mother nervously gazing out the huge window which overlooked our country-style kitchen. I looked, too, and what I saw shocked me. The forest, which was about a half a mile away, was blazing in bright red flames. The fire danced on the top of the trees, the smoke blurring the air around it. The pine needles made an unbearably loud crackling sound as they burned. The tongues of red and yellow leaped and flickered wildly. The smoke billowed everywhere, soon shrouding the sight of the forest out. My father was on the phone with the fire department. "Yes, hello," he said. "There is a forest fire near our cabin on..." I couldn't hear the rest, for I ran out of the side door of the cabin without a thought, towards the blazing forest fire. The fiery light reflected in my eyes as I bounded toward the forest. The soft earth beneath my paws kicked up as I ran, and the smoke enveloped me. Before I knew it, I was in the forest, watching everything around me burn. A large tree crashed behind me, and branches full with sparks fell like raindrops from the clouds and crackled when they hit the ground. Before I could think about what I saw, a fireman pulled me away. I didn't fight, for I was just in awe of the blazing beauty, running throughout her home.
    We were driven to a hotel, and I received a good scolding from my parents. However, I shrugged it off as I often get those lectures from mom or dad. Our room window had a great view of the fire, so I strode over to take a look as my parents unpacked. The fire department had said they needed to leave the fire alone this time, because the forest wasn't inhabited and there was no need to waste water on something that has to naturally happen. A few days later, the fire had died out and our cabin was cleaned, so my family and I returned to our regular vacation schedule. As soon as we arrived, I went into the forest. I gasped at what I saw as I trotted along. The line of trees nearest to our cabin had made it through the fire, but beyond that, there was a field of saplings as far as the eye could see. They resembled little bushes, with their dark green branches poking out from their new and flimsy stems. I recalled learning in school that a forest fire usually causes conifer trees to drop their cones, and then new saplings would grow. That was when I realized that fire and I were extremely alike, and we were somehow bonded, in a way. You see, most people think that all fire does is destroy and burn, but really, it brings life. Where would our world be if there was no more room made for new life, nothing to relieve old living things from their duty and bring fresh, new life? Fire got a bit of a bad reputation, but that was like me. I'm not that bad, and I have never committed a crime. I'm just mischievous, and people tend to take it the wrong way. I admired fire because it was misunderstood like I was. But I was fine with that, for fire and I could be misconceived together, and I know I'll always have a friend in that.

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    Pompeii and her friend the flame play a prank on an unsuspecting kia!
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Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby winter.sunset » Sun May 12, 2013 9:30 am

Written in the Stars,
A million miles Away,
A message to the main,oh...
Seasons come and Go,
But I will never change,
And I'm on my wayyy...
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A little bit about myself...
I'm the shy type,so I refrained from making forms for Kias for a long time.I didn't think that I had a chance of winning,seeing so many awesome forms.Also,I figured I would be too busy to see when new ones came out,and miss my chance for them altogether.
I was just a beginner when I tried for my first Kia,of course.I wasn't sure how to handle the emotion and stress of losing my dream Kia,though I am quite picky about which ones to try for,if we're being honest here.But anyway,so yeah.I tried out for one of my dream Kias,and I lost.I felt terrible about it,but tried to keep a cheerful mood and congratulate the winner.I didn't think I could take making a form for another Kia.
But I did for one more that I fell in love with.
And also,here I am now!!
So,obviously I hadn't given up.I will keep trying to win a Kia even if it kills me!!
Well,maybe not THAT hard,but you know what I mean OwO

Name:
His name full name shall be Vulcan Hephaestus Kasai.
I have chosen this name for him,because each of these words have to do with fire,his element."Vulcan" and "Hephaestus" are the Greek and Roman gods of fire."Kasai"(or 火災) means "fire" is Japanese.
I also chose it because his name is unique.It stands out to more bland names.

Gender:
Vulcan is a Male Kia.
I decided this when I looked into his eyes.I didn't just see color.I saw a spirit.His temper,his rage,and his man-like personality.His eyes told the whole story by itself.I just imagined all the confusion he'd been through,the drama throughout his life,and I thought:
"There is no way any story like that could come from a girl."
I know that probably sounds offensive,but I'm a girl too.
And girls tend to stretch the truth a little bit.
So that is how I decided on male.

The day my element was discovered:
((This is from Vulcan's point of view.))
I woke up one day to the blazing sun in my eyes.I got up,yawned and stretched,and chewed on a rabbit for a little while.I soon got bored with it,and started to take a stroll in the deep forest.I never had felt comfortable with the forest.It made me feel strange,yet powerful.I felt I could just burn the whole place down,though I didn't know why I felt that way.
It was as if I had been connected to the element since birth.
It was just a strange sensation,that I often chose to ignore.I didn't feel like putting much thought into it.That would put on stress,and I always feel cold sweat every time I stress out about something.
I felt sweaty soon enough anyway,though I had no clue why.The forest started to spin,slowly,than faster.The trees were darkening.
"Am I overheating...or dying??Or both??" I thought.But I didn't think another word to myself until I blacked out.
When I awoke,I was in some sort of volcano.The rocks under my stomach felt hot,and I saw steam all around.Was this heaven??It WAS where I had always wanted to go.Lava,rocks.It was perfect.
I saw an old looking Kia walk up to me.He motioned me to stand up.
"Vulcan..." the Kia wheezed."You have been found at last."
"Found??" I asked,dreadfully confused.
"Yes.The ancestor of flame itself.You are part of out tribe.You need your gems." the Kia coughed.
"Gems??"
"Yes.Gems." he said simply,and tied 2 rubies to Vulcan's paw in place of the usual feathers.
"W-what's this??" I stammered,not knowing exactly what was going on.
"These are rubies.They show that fire is your ancient element.It is the reason why you always feel a strange surge of power in your forest.You know you can destroy it with one false swipe." he says wisely.
"Fire...is my element." I breathed."No wonder..."
The elder smiled brightly,knowing that I understood.
"Your temper is also,a side effect.Rage boils inside you that you just want to release on all those who insult you.Your cold sweat.It is cold because all the rest of you,is of much higher temperature." he says.
I nod,really understanding.It all made sense.My eyes flashed from my newfound knowledge.
"Now.Be gone." he said,and the world began to spin again.
"No wait!!Will I be able to come back!?" I shouted quickly.
The elder appeared to nod right as the world turned dark.
I awoke in a hot spring,my new home.That,is how I discovered my mighty element,fire.
((Word Count:474/800))

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Most likely art,but if I can't get time in for that,have an interview c:
Interviewer:Hey Vulcan!!Can we ask you some questions??
Vulcan:Okay!!Shoot!!
I:How did you realize your element was fire.
V:-snorts- How did you realize your element was being obnoxious??
I:-sputters- Well I'd never!!
V:Of course you would.It's what interviewers were made for.Seriously,how did you find out??
I:Aren't I supposed to be asking the questions,NOT you?!
V:Beats me.Weren't YOU listening either??
I:Well-yeah but,AUGH.Just...never mind.This is hopeless.
V:???Okay?Then I'll see you around???
I:-grumbles- Don't count on it.
-FIN
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Re: Kia #272 Fire

Postby ~Pandasilk~ » Sun May 12, 2013 9:40 am

No longer active. Sorry. :\
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