Corrupted #2 - Closed by aamity

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Corrupted #2 - Closed

Postby aamity » Sun Mar 18, 2012 2:09 pm

The second Corrupted to go up for adoption! Here are the rules:
  • Do NOT change species
  • Do NOT take design
  • Do NOT take off-site without permission
  • Do NOT claim species, design, etc.

To adopt this Corrupted, fill out the form below. I will choose the winner based on my favorite form.
Contest ends on the evening (MST) of 3/18/12

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    The winner is You are a Pirate with Laziet. (:
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Re: Corrupted #2 - Open

Postby Marmoset » Sun Mar 18, 2012 2:34 pm

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Re: Corrupted #2 - Open

Postby daices. » Sun Mar 18, 2012 2:42 pm

Yay! First post! Número uno! ( I suck at Spanish) scratch that. Someone posted while I was posting. Does that make sense? Still, I'm second! Número....quatro? ( I still suck at Spanish.)

Username: nightwolf2982
Name: filimin
Gender: male
Extra:
Personality: filimin is a strong, bold corrupted that loves risks. He is very carefree, and doesn't really care I'd he dies. But, if his loved ones die, that's a completely different story. He will stop at nothing to save his friends and family, and even though he looks menacing, he has a big heart and is actually really nice, though blunt at times.

Art: the dog ate my art. :D

Poem: really!?!? Out of me? Talk to my LASS teacher. That should make you change your mind.

Likes: fun, sky diving, mountain climbing(without straps) training, and just generally hanging out with friends.
Dislikes: liers, people who make fun of his friends, flowers(allergies) and climbing trees. He especially dislikes a corrupted called Moro. ( explains in story)

Stories: filimin watched, a shadow in the middle of the forest. Filimin listened, ready for action. The signal came. Filimin pounced, knocking the enemies into the undergrowth.

Filimin was a raal hunter, a specially trained group of assassins that where trained to fight the corrupteds mortal
enemy, the raals, which where equine creatures with fins and spiked tails, almost like a hippocampus. The corrupted and the raal had been enimies for as long as anyone could remember, and the raal hunters where sent out to kill them. Filimin was actually born as a brown and cream corrupted, but because of stealth purposes, filimin had to die it black.

The flaming hair came much later. Filimin was sent on a mission to terminate the valkre raal, and they lived in the middle of a volcano. And as filimin was venturing over to the volcano, it erupted, spraying him with rocks and hot magma. It turns out that the raal had evacuated, for they new the volcano was going to explode. Filimin cried out in despr as his fur was singed, and suddenly, the mountain split in half, and filimin was surrounded lava. But, suddenly, t as was about to die, the magma flashed, and in an instant, filimin was transformed, and ended with hair the color of flames.

I know it isn't good, I'm just really tired right now, and not in the best writing mood. :D
If I offended anybody in any way in the parts above, sorry.
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Re: Corrupted #2 - Open

Postby You are a Pirate » Mon Mar 19, 2012 3:33 am

Username:
You are a Pirate
Name:
Laziet
Gender:
Male
Extra:
He named his tail Fluffy 8D

Poem:
Here goes the Corrupted with the pelt full of smoke.
His eyes shine with heat as intense as flames.
This is one being you do not want to evoke.
He is cruel and vile, so it seems.
He is always the one who blames.
The tail scorch whom it redeems.

Phft, try to make sense out of that XD
I can't.

Personality:
Laziet {Laz for short} seems cruel and unkind, though he {deep, deep inside} is actually good natured and caring.
Laz is a tightwad. Everything has a place, and it should stay in that place. If it ever comes out of that place, he considers it his job to put in back into place. If it doesn't...well, that could get ugly. He's thought not to have a sense of humor, but that thought is quickly gone as soon as he tells you his tail's name.

Quick Story:
I was just walking when I caught scent of a strange creature. It aroused a strange feeling inside me, I couldn't quite pinpoint it. It seemed to awaken all the bad things that have happened in my life. My fur involuntarily fluffed out and my eyes became slits. Then I realized what it was. Rage. Utter fury.
I struggled to control it, telling myself that it was foolish to go wild just because of an unknown smell. To further overcome it, I foolishly decided to go find out what it was.
The smell led me to a small clearing. The creature was already there. It knew I was coming. I realized with a jolt. After all, what did I expect, a dumb rabbit? No, of course not. Yet the sight of it still left me dumbfounded.
It was as dark as night. A short mane covered a portion of it's neck, which ended in a tuft of human-like hair covering one of the...the thing's eyes. My eye quickly flew to its tail. Oh, great. It has a mouth too! I growled. Well, Scratch you've really outdone yourself, always trying to be brave and strong. Just for once, why couldn't you follow your instincts, you old fool?
The creature's eyes swept over me, it's face expressionless. Perfect, just perfect. It has two pupils too! Although it seemed calm, its eyes told a different story. They were filled with rage, eager to tear me apart until my very last breath.
Then it began to chase me.
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It didn't stop until I was cornered by two large rocks. Geez, this thing can run! "Please, don't eat me!" I whimpered, like a coward. "You wouldn't like the taste of my flesh. I'm practically all skin and bones! The only meat on me is probably all stale and rotten. You wouldn't want to eat that!"
The creature stared at me for what seemed like hours. "Nah, fox is good. I've tried it many times." It laughed.
"You...you talk?"
"Of course I talk! Jeez, what did you think?" The creature glanced back at me. "Say, what's your name, fox? I'd like to get to know you before I have to eat you. No offense, I just gotta eat, if you know what I mean."
I nodded. Maybe I can make a break for it as soon as it looks away. I thought. "My name is Scratch."
"Well, I'm Laz. This is Fluffy."
"Who's fluffy? I'm not fluffy!"
"No, this is Fluffy." His tail swooshed toward me.
"Uh...oh." I was awestruck. I reached out a paw toward it's gaping jaws.
The tail snapped up out of my reach.
"Ah, ah, ah! You don't want to touch Fluffy. If you do, you'll be paralyzed in less than a second. Do you want that?"
"Um, no..."
"Good. Anyways, I'm a Corrupted."
I fought the urge to say 'Yes, yes you are.'.

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I made many sketches of him in my notebook but I don't have time to upload them ;A;

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"Why?" The girl cried. "Why can't we be together? I love you more than anything, yet you reject me."
The boy tore away. "I-I'm sorry. I can't tell you."
She wept. "I must know. Please, tell me why."
The boy stayed silent.
"Please..." She said. "I love you."
He finally replied. "I can't love you because...because you are a pirate."
The girl stared at him. "I'm a what?"
"You are a pirate, you're all pirates except me! Because I'm a princess!"
The girl narrowed her eyes. "Isn't it the other way around? I am a pirate, you are a princess?"
"NU! You are a pirate, and I'm a pretty pretty princess! M'kay?!"
"What?"
"Problem?"
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Re: Corrupted #2 - Open

Postby ursaminor » Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:54 am

Username:
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Name:
-Flickering Embers-
Gender:
-Female
Extra:

History:

When Ember was born, she was completely black, as dark as the night sky. That was when she was named coal. She grew up normally, learning to hunt, where to hide when larger canines were about. But something, just felt wrong. She was bored, and she was tired of hares and small foxes for food evveryday. She wanted to see what was beyond the dark path. The dark path was magic, as it floated over the rushing river into a glowing forest. (A.K.A. A bridge to a city.)

Ever since she was little Coal naturally knew never to journey on to the Dark Path. It reeked of a poisonus gas, and the hard ground hurt the feet of the one walking on it. It was very long, about half the distance of the forest she lived in, and large creatures constantly journeyed across it, day and night, there eyes lighting up to see the path ahead of them. Until one day, weird cretures with pelts draped over them came, and put a barrier across the Dark Path. They used loud machines during the day, and left it during the night. The large creatures that used to come everyday stopped coming. (A.K.A. Construction workers :3)

Coal watched them, fascinated at what they were doing, when one day, a strange thought hit her. What if they were destroying the Dark Path? She always wondered what lay beyond it, in the glowing forest, but she had always been to scared to actually cross it. It would be now or never. If she wanted to cross it, she would have to. And very soon. So she made up her mind. That night, Coal would cross the dark path.

Coal had spent the rest of that afternoon filling up her stomach on the small woodland creatures that thrived there, her long tail lashing out to clamp them in it's jaws. Finally, twilight came, and she watched the creatures with the loud machines pack up and leave. She wated another hour, to make sure the coast was clear. She slowly approached the barriers, staring up at the large obstacle. She took a deep breath, and launched herself over, onto the Dark Path. No going back now.

She started walking along the path, trying desperately to ignore the rancid smell that was peircing her nose. As she walked forward, the glowing forest grew larger and larger, until she realized it was not a forest. It waslarge stones and rocks, that glowed from the inside. A little closer, and she could see that the creatures that used to run along the Dark Path lived here, because they were everywhere. She kept walkinguntil she had made it to the edgeof the glowing rocks. All of it wasso loud, the creatures with pelts chattering away, the Dark Path creatures yelling at eachother. That part was pretty annoying, but she foung the glowing rocks beautiful. She had never seen so many colors at once!

She had continued walking when she smelled smoke. She turned and looked, and one of the glowing rocks had cought fire! The Dark Path creatures started running every where,along with the pelt creatures, their screams peircing the night. But Coal had never seen fire before, though it scared her, she found it quite beautiful. So she journeyed toward it, growing warmer as she did. It was nice, she enjoyed the heat.

When Coal got to the building, she was nice and taosty warm, and was awed by the brightness of the flames. Before she could go any closer, she heard aloud burst, and part of the building fell to the earth, red and orange flames surrounding it. It crashed right in frontof Coal, who screamed. A flame lept off the building and on to her back, and allof a sudden, she felt a warm feeling grow inside her.When she turned to look, she only saw red, orange and yellow marking along the spikes on her tail. She turned back, and her mane whipped across her face, and she saw the same glowing red and orange. She was not plain anymore, but beautiful.

But more pelt creatures came, dressed heavily in strange pelts, and carrying large things, that lookedlike snakes. Their shouting scared Coal, so she ran until she found safety in a dark alleyway. She started calming when she heard something rummaging through the stuff beside her, and she tensed. Then a small head popped out, one of a black cat. It was so small and pathetic, she wouldn't dream of hurtingit, even though it was considered prey.

"Hello?" She called out gently, and the small cat stepped out of the pile of stuff it had been in. "Hello," it said, though it seemed to be staring at her tail, which was smiling at the small cat.No wonder she was timid. "Please, don't eat me!" She said, taking a step back. "No! I would never!" Coal exclaimed, stepping towards the poor starving creature. She wrapped her long tail aound her, who was now whimpering. "What's your name?" She askedmor softly. The small cat looked up with big green eyes. "I'm Shadow," it said, clearly not as scared as it had been. "What's yours?" Shadow asked. Coal smiled, but before she could say her name, Shadow said, "You look look like flickering embers." Something about the little cat's words touched Coal, so she said, "Well no wonder, it is my name."

So Coal's name was now Flickering Embers. She and Shadow ended up staying together, Ember catching them prey, Shadow teaching her about life in the city. The duo were inseperable. Ember ended up staying in the city with Shadow, away from water, though there was always the trouble of canines, but Shadow always knew where to hide for the large ones, and Ember could always take out the small ones. She was a city Corrupted.


Hehe, I might have gone a bit overboard with the story :3

Personality:
Ember has always been the brave, adventerous type. She's the first one to accept a dare.While this may seem dangerous, it can come quite in handy, if someone is trapped, she'd be the one to save them. She always does something without thinking. While she may seem wild and adventerous, she has a soft side too. When she sees something that is so small and pathetic it doesn't bother to run for it's life at thesight of her, she will spare it. It may seem like a soft thing to do, but look where it got her with Shadow.
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Re: Corrupted #2 - Open

Postby aamity » Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:07 am

    Great forms, everyone! (:
    This contest ends tonight.
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Re: Corrupted #2 - Open

Postby Fawkes-Rinzler » Mon Mar 19, 2012 9:53 am

Must hurry!

Username: Loki Odinson
Name: Tanaris
Gender: Male
Extra: Poem (Because I can't write histories for the life of me):

I am not what you think I am
Not as deadly as I seem
I may seem a tiger, I am really just a lamb

For many miles, have I ran
under the soft, gentle moon beams
I am not what you think I am

Under fallen trees, over beaver dams
Across lakes that, with salmon, teem
I may seem a tiger, I am really just a lamb

My breath grows short, my calm's a sham
and finally, after my run, it's safe I deem
I am not what you think I am

With exhaustion I collapse, my muscles all a'jam
and, with a final sigh, I take away my pains to dream
I may seem a tiger, I am really just a lamb

With morning come, I awake, and my body ram
as I return to my ungodly sprint, I cannot stop this theme
I am not what you think I am
I may seem a tiger, I am really just a lamb.


I hope you liked. The Corrupted seem like a race that would run a lot, and, when I read about their legs, I was inspired to write this. :D

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Re: Corrupted #2 - Open

Postby aamity » Mon Mar 19, 2012 9:54 am

    It will end at night on Mountain Standard time, and it's only 4 here. You've got time. (:
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Re: Corrupted #2 - Open

Postby aamity » Mon Mar 19, 2012 1:22 pm

    Everyone has one hour to finish their forms. Good luck!
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Re: Corrupted #2 - Open

Postby Fawkes-Rinzler » Mon Mar 19, 2012 1:48 pm

OOh! I can't wait! Even though I just applied today. Good luck everyone!!
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