Corrupted : #1 : OPEN by King of Crows

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Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby King of Crows » Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:30 pm

The first Corrupted to go up for adoption! Here are the rules:
  • Do NOT change species
  • Do NOT take design
  • Do NOT take off-site without permission
  • Do NOT claim species, design, etc.

Now, to adopt this cutie, fill out the form. I will choose who wins based on who put the most effort into their forms!

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Re: Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby wolves01 » Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:33 pm

Username: wolves01
Name: Kiko
Gender: male
OTHER: His personality; fit to be a Clan leader! He will be amazing in grace, hunting, and skill!
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Re: Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby Irios Atelis » Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:44 pm

Username
xX-Nix-Xx

Name
Duellum

~*| Meaning |*~
Latin.
It means Duel, reprisenting it's two mouthes.


Personality
Duellum finds it hard to trust others because of his aweful past, where they would jab him with needls and shock him, hitting him and giving him little food and water, he learned to fight and finally escaping he is careful about who he now trusts as anyone could turn him in, back to that horrible place.

He is quite smart, causing him to be able to stay away from the Scientists however having beein kept in a lab all his life he dosn't know how to react to the world around him having never experienced it before, causing him to come across as aggressive.

Despite this he can be affectionate if given the chance however it isn't often that anyone notices, through his lack of socialization he dosn't know how to show affection and it causes him to feel locked in...


Gender
Male

Story
The breeze sliced through Duellum's fur like icicles and the rain was even feircer plastering his fur down against his body, turning his fur so dark it was almost black, the stripes were slightly darker but otherwise blended with his fur, he just wanted to curl up and sleep, his body ached and small cuts lined his body but he knew what would happen if he gave in now they would catch him, he felt the fur on his throat flare out as a result and he heard the faint barking of canines that slowly gained on him.

He felt his throat vibrate in a snarl at the thought of the oldest species of his face and the urge overhwelmed him to turn and fight however he wasn't stupid, he knew he wouldn't be able to fight them all, not in his weakened state, he looked around him, they would find him, he didn't know where to go next.

Suddenly a girl stepped into his past and he stopped blinking in suprise, his fur flared out again and he showed his teeth, his tail whipped around in defense but the girl didn't seem afrait, cocking her head to the side she studied him curiously,
"You escaped. Good job" She said with a thin smile.
Duellum narrowed his double pupil eyes in suspicion, he was perplexed, usually at the sight of him humans would scream and run, well except the ones back at the horrible place he ran from.

"I know where you came form, a lab, somewhere there was pain in every breath" The girl wend on with a grimce and suddenly to large purple wings unfurled from behind her, causing Duellum to hiss and retreat a few stepps in suprise, this girl seemed to be altered,
"At the same place those scientists throught it would be funny to see what would happen if they combined the DNA of a dragon with a human" She told him spreading her arms, "And guess what happened"

Duellum narrowed his eyes, he could see the shadows in the girls eyes and knew she was telling the truth, she came from the same place as him, taking a step forward he inspected her wings with interest, touching them delicetly with his nose and feeling the smooth membrane quiver at his touch.

In return he allowed her to touch his tail, running her hands gently over his fur, carefully avoiding the toxic spines,
"I know you can't trust me, and I can't trust you. But they're getting closer to both of us" She said eventually, stepping backwards into the shadows as the barking of dogs became louder and closer.

Duellum turned his head toward the sound, glancing back at the girl he saw she was quickly dissapearing into the forest her wings folding neatly back into her soaked clothes and without a sound, he folllowed,
"My name is Nix by the way" She murmmerd over her shoulder as she lead the way to saftey..
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Re: Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby King of Crows » Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:50 pm

Cool :D Can't wait to see the story :D
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Re: Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby Irios Atelis » Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:58 pm

Thanks! ^^
I am writing it right now, and I am having a sudden urge to make it into a Maximum Ride type fanfic story :/
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Re: Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby supernovacity » Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:59 pm

Username: Darkness angel
Name: Monochrome
Gender: Female
OTHER:
Personallity:
She is shy but has a few tricks up her sleeve to get exactly her vegance,will,or intetion.
Likes:
Well she hates to admit it but she is a nerd. so she likes alot of anime,is absolutely obbessesed with well you guessed it learning.

dislikes:
people with low IQ points ._.

Poem:
We sing in monochrome
watch as it flies by
Felling utterly alone
I will go where you beckon
Do not toy with me now
This is getting violent don't you reckon
This will end with my survival
Oh dear, you beg for mercy
But oh my sweet you are my rival
And with that you are cloaked in an endless night
Oh dear how i forgot
Dinnner will be late

(this is based off the fact that she is a servant so she is saying by conqouering her rival dinner will be late xD)
Won't waste more tears on yesteryears
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nova - she/he/they
icon - pixels

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Instead we'll carry on
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Re: Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby daices. » Sun Mar 18, 2012 2:08 pm

Username: nightwolf2982
Name: risti
Gender: female
OTHER: (please add things like personality, likes, history, maybe poems, art, stories, etc!)
Personality: risti is a shy corrupted who takes things very personally and hates to be mocked or insulted in any way. In other words, she wants to be perfect. But, she can't, so instead she turns into a grumpy, sad, and "go away!" type of person, which is mainly to hide her true feelings, and to intimidate people into not saying anything about her. It has worked so far....

LIkes: nothing, besides good comments from people. The only reason she lives, probably.

Dislikes: bad comments. Will explode if you say anything bad about her.

Short stories( goes with her personality):
Risti scowled. There it was again. The whispers. They where every where. Risti tried to block them out, like her feeing ganyia had told her to, but no use. It was working it's way into her mind, filling her every spore....
Risti briskly walked away, and shoved any thought that the whispering was about her into the back of her brain, immediately forgetting about it. Until...

" I hate you! Why do you say that stuff to me!?!?" risti yelled, her anger welling out. " relax, risti. I was just saying a comment." ganyia said, eyes blinking nervously." no need to get technical." risti did relax, on the outside. But on the inside she was steaming, almost to the point of hurting her friend. And in her mind, risti made a plan. A plan to make people stop talking bad about her once and for all....

The next day, as the two corrupted where walking, ganyia noticed that risti was acting different. "what's wrong, risti? Something happen?" ganyia asked carefully, afraid of getting an outburst like the one yesterday. But what she got was much worse. Risti suddenly turned, and with a voice dripping with venom and eyes glowing with malice, risti said " leave. Me. Alone. Stay out of my life. I hate you, always criticizing me. Hear that? I. Hate. You. Now get out, before I make you." ganyia blinked in puzzlement, then fear. What are you talking about? I was jus-" " GET OUT! NOW!" risti yelled, showing her true anger. "GET OUT NOW!!! I DONT WANT TO HURT YOU BUT I WILL!!" ganyia stumbled away, crying. And when risti finally settled down. She realized what happened. Then she smiled. " it works. It really works. Now, to move on to my teachers and classmates...."

Kind of disturbing, yes. But it's good. In a way. I would do art, but I can't even draw an apple on here. And I'm not poetic. I just like writing stories.
Thank you, Monty.

You will be missed.

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Re: Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby King of Crows » Mon Mar 19, 2012 2:27 am

Plenty of lovely stories so far! I'll vote either later today or, most likely, tomorrow ;) Also, just so you guys know:

Scientific Name: None
Name: Corrupted
Height: 60 cm (30 in)
Weight: 35 pounds (16 kg)

They can speak in human languages. Corrupted actually originate from Labs, as they were created in test tubes, then later released and bred naturally.
(As a note, they do not travel in packs or clans, do not establish territories, and spend most days wandering in search of food, mates, etc.)
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Re: Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby daices. » Mon Mar 19, 2012 2:42 am

That is really helpful. It makes things so much easier.
Thank you, Monty.

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Re: Corrupted : #1 : OPEN

Postby wajas » Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:29 am

Username: wajas
Name: Treacy
Gender: female
OTHER:
PERSONALITY
She is a very shy, gentle, and kind little girl. She tends to stay in the background, rather than to confront new people. She can also have a mean stride-so look out! She can be quick on her feet, as well as in the head. She uses almost all of her brain- about 80% of it. She likes companions, but may take her time in finding the right one. As well as being shy, she enjoys going on adventures. She likes to discover new thing- wether they are rocks, food, plants, animals, or just natural scenes of beauty. The stars seems to comfort her, giving her hope, passion, and courage. She can name almost all of the constellations, even the ones we don't tend to see. She has a lot of wisdom, for her age, as she likes to often express it in many different ways. She can be gentle, and have a motherly side. She would often go to the newly parents and help them with their newborns- wether it was singing, playing, caring, or feeding, she would always make them want to have her come back.

STORY
"Treacy, come on, wake up," cooed a gentle, silky voice. Treacy opened one of her eyes, discovering that the voice was from Kaia, the new mother. She got up slowly, discovering the small, feeble newborns lying scattered around them like a bomb had went off, some of them were on eachother, upside down, or just on their stomachs. Treacy chuckled softly to herself, "It looks like a bomb went off," she joked, as Kaia nodded solemly, "Indeed." Treacy followed the black pelt, shimmering in the dawn sunlight. Kaia soon stopped, and sat down beside her husband, Marviel. "We would like to discuss something with you," he said with a silent whisper, his star-like coat moving briskly with each of his muscles tightening and loosening. "Since you have no family," Kaia started, having a hint if sorrow in her voice. Treacy shivered at the word family, it had brought back bad memories.
Her family was a happy one; consisting of a mother, father, and herself. Their family was the highlight of the area, they were always kind, and well-loved. But, it didn't last long, though, because some perdators unexpectedly showed up, and murdered her family before her eyes. Treacy remembered her thought, I have nothing left. They took my mother. They took my father. The tool my hope, my guide, my happiness, and my sorrow. They took part of my life, and crushed it before my eyes. she had cried that night, beside the carpet of her parents blood and corpses. She had longed for the predators to take her, but not them. Shr had always looked up to the stars from that day on, seeing her mother and father smile down to her from the heavens.
"...we would like to include you into ours," continued Marviel. He softened his gaze at Treacy, trying to interpret her look of sorrow. Treacy took a moment to regain attention, before saying, "What? What did you say?" Kaia chuckled softly, "Marviel and I would like to include you into our family." Treacy soon made a joyful laugh, "Really?...Marviel...are you pulling my tail?," she questioned, waiting for him to tell her the truth. He shook his head and smiled, "No, Treacy, I am not," he then looked at his wife, Kaia, knowingly. She gave Marviel an anxious nod. Marviel soon brought fourth one of his big hoofs, brought it around Treacy, and pushed her towards himself and Kaia. "Treacy," he said, "welcome to the family," Kaia finished, before she too, joined in on the hug, featuring Marviel, Kaia, and Treacy.

POEM:
Oh, sunlight,
You brighten my day,
Oh sunlight,
You bring me at bay,
Oh, sunlight,
What do you say?
Oh sunlight,
Tell me to stay.
The moon wanders,
Waiting to stay,
Throughout the day,
Wanting to say,
"I will be here, and not alone,
Out in the cold, with no one so known."
The moon still wanders, throughout the day,
Seeing new people, new life,
Everyone saying 'yay'.
The moon was happy,
Happyier than can be and said,
"I am not alone, but forever together!"
The sun was smiling, shining in glee,
For the moon, who never knew,
The sun was watching him,
Making sure he was loved.
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