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Femail Kreale tribe - CLOSED by randomzness

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Femail Kreale tribe - CLOSED

Postby randomzness » Wed Dec 14, 2011 9:38 pm

WINNER: Zalaika - this was really hard to judge, Zalaika you have a true knack for story writing ^.^a female Kreale tribe member up for adoption ^.^

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The Kreale tribe naming guide

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Name:
Gender:
Personality:
Spirit bond?:
Job within the tribe:
art(optional):
Story:


Rules
- No colouring in editables for art, you may do your own art or order art
- Do not adopt then forget about your wolf
- Please, when naming your Kreale tribesmember either make up a name or use the Kreale naming guide, these wolves have never been in cantact with humans, i dont want to see Japanese, Latin, French, German etc nnames
- Spirit bonding is RARE, you have a higher chance of winning if your wolf is not bonded
- No saying, aw, so and so entered so now i wont win :(, I look at all aspects of an entry and everyone has a chance ^.^
- When putting in the job, please dont put mage alpha or shaman, as these positions are aquired through special circumstances.
- do not claim as your own
- do not copy anothers form
- please do not enter without having at least skim read the Krielun thread
- THERE ARE NO HUMANS IN KRIELUN, THERE NEVER HAS BEEN, AND THERE NEVER WILL BE

ends 30th December
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Re: Femail Kreale tribe

Postby zima. » Wed Dec 14, 2011 11:21 pm

Name:
Kress Ranuul
(Deadly Beauty)

Gender:
Female, Fae, Femme ♀

Personality:
Ranuul is overall a likable girl. She has a kind demeanor, and usually likes to be around other wolves. Sometimes, however, she is ornery and sarcastic. This usually gets her into trouble, so she snaps out of her funks pretty quickly. She doesn’t have a mate, but loves pups and hopes to one day have some. She has some issues with concentrating on one thing, and her mind often trails, but she’s still a good girl and her intent to learn makes up for it. She is constantly moving, and usually bubbly and talkative. She could easily carry on a long conversation without the other wolf even opening their mouth. Most wolves like her, and the ones who don’t are usually annoyed by her, or jealous of her beauty and skills. She is very loyal, even if it means her death to protect those she loves. She hates the Drulian Fighters more than anything.

Likes:
Ranuul loves to take walks, chase anything that moves, and to just talk with her friends. She’d gladly do all three at the same time if she could, and sometimes, she even does. She likes to protect the Tribe, even at the cost of her life.

Dislikes:
Ranuul hates anything creepy. She also hates nosy wolves and cry babies. In her mind they want to find stuff out to use against her, and well, who likes a cry baby?
But there is one thing she hates more than anything: the Drulian Fighters.

Strengths:
Ranuul is good with pups, and would make a good mother someday. She’s also good at hunting, but often scares off prey due to her twitching, or just lets them get away due to day dreaming. She also seems to be good at talking to males, overall she’s a tomboy, and talking to them seems to come easily to her.

Weaknesses:
On the topic of weakness, Ranuul has issues fitting in with other wolves - Talking comes naturally but she often gets herself worried and then becomes tongue-tied. She also isn’t a very good fighter, and gives away her position to the enemy whenever there ’s a sneak attack in session. Ranuul's also constantly beating up on herself, and telling herself that she’s not good enough, this makes her get moody. Her loyalty can sometimes be a problem, as well as her hate for the Drulian Fighters.

Spirit bond?:
No, she has no spirit bond whatsoever, though she dreams of having one. She has always wanted to have a spirit bond, to be someone for once. But she will shed no tears over it.

Job within the tribe:
She is a Hunter, wanting to become a Shaman. She will try to do whatever it takes to become one, as she finds them so interesting.

Story:
"Ranuul!" hissed the fae beside her, gesturing towards the large Kress Antelope. Ranuul crouched, creeping towards it. She motioned foward, and the wolves followed her.
"Stop," she whispered, and the Pack behind her did so. She stalked the animal, a gleam in her eyes.
She heard a branch crack behind her, and the antelope lifted it's head. It's ears swiveled around for a moment, and Ranuul lept.
At the same moment, the antelope began to run. Ranuul gripped onto it, biting it's flank. Her weight brought it down, and the creature struggled on the ground. The hunting party lept foward, holding the animal down as Ranuul gave the killing bite. She shook her head slightly, and the creature gavea great shudder, then lay still.
She looked at it in satisfaction. "Grab the legs, let's carry this back to camp," she said.
The party dragged the great creature back, but Rannul stopped them.
She heard the sound of snarling, then jumped out of the way as another wolf leaped at her.
Suddenly, they were surrounded. She snarled, turning in a circle.
She recognized several of the wolves, and spoke. "Drulian Fighters! What business do you have here?" No one spoke, only curled thier lips at her.
"What say you?" she cried, turning and looking at one straight in the eye. "What say you?" she snarled. Her eyes were burning with anger, and she lept out at the nearest fighter.
The hunting party followed her lead, and a great battle started. She watched as the fighters wounded her firneds, and she was suddenly knocked over.
She looked up into the face of the fighter, and her eyes opened wide.
"Istanal......." she whispered, then everything went black.
------------------------------------------------------------------------
She woke up in a cave, her sides wrapped up in large leaves. She turned around, groaning in pain.
Looking around, Ranuul saw nothing she recognized. The place was dark, and a bit damp, and smelled like the Drulian Fighters.........
She stood up. Where was she? Where were the others?
An old wolf stirred by the fire, and padded up to Ranuul. "Ah, I see you are awake now." she said in a deep, raspy voice.
Ranuul growled. "Where am I? Where are the others?" a thought suddenly dawned on her, and her lips curled. "Did Istanal bring me here?"
The old she-wolf cackled. "My, you are a curious one! You are in the Drulian Territory. I'm the Healer, as you would call it. And Istanal did bring you here, yes he did......" her eyes wandered over to the entrance of the cave, and a large male wolf stolled in. He had a cat-like grace, strange for one so big.
"Rannul," he purred, his tail caressing her face. "How are you, my dear?"
She whipped away from him. "Get away from me!"
"Sweetheart, what'd the matter?" he asked mockingly. "Don't you want to get better?"
She winced, but managed to stay standing. "You are evil! You try to take away my home!" She tried to leap at him, but was too weak. "You killed my friends!" she cried, heartbroken.
"They aren't dead.They are merely........Broken." he gave a deadly smile. "I wanted to kill them when you could watch."
He grapped her by the scruff, dragging her out of the cave. He threw her to the ground, then tied her to a stake.
"Bring out the prisoners!" he growled, and Ranuul watched as her friends were filed, one by one, in front of Istanal. "Watch, my dear, and let go of them."
He smiled, then leaped at Ira, laughing evilly.
Her screams echoed through Ranuul's ears, a memory she would never forget.
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Re: Femail Kreale tribe

Postby randomzness » Thu Dec 15, 2011 12:26 pm

thanks for your entry ^.^
just one thing, i your personality you keep mentioning cats?
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Re: Femail Kreale tribe

Postby zima. » Thu Dec 15, 2011 2:39 pm

So sorry!! My iPod hates me........it posts things that aren't right all the time.
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Re: Femail Kreale tribe

Postby randomzness » Thu Dec 15, 2011 3:24 pm

Zalaika wrote:So sorry!! My iPod hates me........it posts things that aren't right all the time.

XD thats fine
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Re: Femail Kreale tribe

Postby zima. » Thu Dec 15, 2011 4:10 pm

Bump.......
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Re: Femail Kreale tribe

Postby pear. » Fri Dec 16, 2011 12:21 am

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Krealun, a comination of gardian and spirit, but if that's not good then Krea.
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Daydreamer, shy but will fight for her tribe. She is very loyal to the Shaman, and respects him very much.She loves to play, and she loves her job. She is the little palo of all her treales.
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No, but wants one desperatly.
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Scout, wants and dreams to be a Mage. She loves her job though.

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Krealun! Get over here! Stop daydreaming! Should I tell the Shaman?" her mother growled. "No! Don't tell him mother! Please, no. What do you need? I'll do it! I promise!" I wimpered. "I need you to do your job. You are late! The alphas need you to go scout for prey." her mother said. "Am I going alone or with Hetsu?" I thought, thinking about my best friend. "Go alone today. You need to prove that tre are worthy to do this job without help." my mother said, "Run along now. Don't be later that you are." she continued. I pranced though the forest, feeling laer'la of the to'nuk. I smelled the air trying to get a whiff of prey smell. "Prey!" I wispered.I followed the smell to the spirit tree. I remembered the imi'ta'nul I made. Never go near the spirit tree.Don't let [i]katsu ones take you there until you have bonded.[/i] I remembered my mother saying this to me as a pup. "I must leave then. But the tribe needs prey. I must be loyal to my tribe. I will leave" a pull in my heart made me want to stay, but I left anyways.

Back at the tribe we ate the prey I found later when I was searching. "Mmmmm..." munched Hetsu. I laughed. "Why are you so loud when you eat?" I giggled. "But it's so good!" he said with a fully stuffed mouth. "Thank you..." I mumbled. "Oh sorry. I forgot you were the one who found it.
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Re: Femail Kreale tribe

Postby War Horse » Fri Dec 16, 2011 1:28 am

Name: WildHeart
Gender: Male
Personality: calm and devoted
Spirit bond?: Krea
Job within the tribe: Fighter
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Story: he was once a loner but he came to live with the pack.
ι'м ¢няιѕтιαη αη∂ вєℓιєνє ιη Gσ∂, נєѕυѕ ¢няιѕт нιѕ ѕση, αη∂ тнє нσℓу ѕριяιт. 96% σƒ тєєηѕ ωση'т ѕтαη∂ υρ ƒσя Gσ∂. ρυт тнιѕ ιη уσυя ѕιg ιƒ уσυ αяє σηє σƒ тнє 4% σƒ тєєηѕ ωнσ ωιℓℓ.
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Re: Femail Kreale tribe

Postby randomzness » Fri Dec 16, 2011 11:42 am

A Warriors Heart wrote:Name: WildHeart
Gender: Male
Personality: calm and devoted
Spirit bond?: Krea
Job within the tribe: Fighter
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Story: he was once a loner but he came to live with the pack.

sorry, but this adoptable is a female, i forgot to write that on the form XD also, i would appreciate it if you chose a name from the naming guide or made up a name as these wolves have never had contact with humans and therefore their languages, including english
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Re: Femail Kreale tribe

Postby War Horse » Fri Dec 16, 2011 12:19 pm

ok, i fix it tomorrow, sorry. :(
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