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[WIP] Merfox - Suggestion on tail position? by Isarine

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[WIP] Merfox - Suggestion on tail position?

Postby Isarine » Sun Nov 05, 2017 4:12 pm

I am not sure if this forum is the best place to ask for suggestions/critiques, but as far as I can tell, it isn't possible to switch oekaki forums after posting a picture.

I would like suggestions on the tail position and critiques as well. The tail position just looks wrong in the picture. The length of the tail itself is also up for change.

As for critiques, the leg furthest away looks a bit short, but if there is anything else I missed, I would like to know it!

Or... which tail below looks the best?
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Too bad the size of the oekaki boards can't be changed. I like 4 and 5's position, but I feel it is a bit too short!
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Re: [WIP] Merfox - Suggestion on tail position?

Postby SmileChild » Mon Nov 06, 2017 12:36 am

i personally like 1,2, and 6

for number 1 ilike how theres length in the tail for extra edits in the future, but yet for number 2 the style flows with the tail
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Re: [WIP] Merfox - Suggestion on tail position?

Postby taemin. » Mon Nov 06, 2017 3:13 am

i'm not great at giving advice/criticism/suggesting stuff but if you want my opinion i'm drawn to 1 (personally my favourite tail length out of the 6 i think, they all look great) and 5 :)
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Re: [WIP] Merfox - Suggestion on tail position?

Postby ArtGirl » Mon Nov 06, 2017 6:05 am

I'm definitely drawn to one. It sort of gives of a elegant feel and the length of the tail is kind of unique.
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