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I have my first plot twist in the first chapter.
Here it is:
Back in Steelport, Ch. 1 wrote:“Back, Kinzie.” I said, looking back. “He’s not gonna move for a while.” I muttered. “Great.” Kinzie said, as we both got to the car. As Kinzie drove back, I looked at the cooling tower. I had to tell Kinzie… No, I don’t. Don’t tell her, I told my self. Don’t tell her. Don’t tell her. Don’t-
“Kinzie, I want to say that… Matt and I went out again last night!” I shouted, suddenly realizing the trouble I put myself in. The car stopped suddenly. “What the hell, Maddison? After you promised. You. Promised.” Kinzie said, infuriated. I shrunk back in my seat, and looked at her. Kinzie drove us back to HQ, and took me to the penthouse by force.
“Everyone. Maddison has something to say.” Kinzie said, in an angry tone. Everyone stopped what they were doing, and stared at me. My stomach sank like a stone. I looked into the eyes of every Saint there – painfully knowing that I am betraying them all. I gulped hard, and said: “I have been out on a date with Matt Miller yesterday. I stayed the night at his stronghold.”
Everyone was speechless. I felt the fiery hatred burning in their eyes. Every single person down there knew now. I took another big gulp. “Now saying this, I shall leave the Saints. For good. Kinzie, you’re in charge now.” I said, before walking out onto the helipad. I called Matt, and he came in a helicopter.
Basically, my story's first chapter is like a Romeo-and-Juliet-where-nobody-dies type of thing...
