by Vur Horston » Thu Nov 03, 2011 5:06 am
Almost 4000 words!!
One of my characters creep me out.... Here is why:
It is unedited so please dont judge me!
"Son…" Thiat called up to me. He was standing right below me. "Come down and play!"
A shiver ran down my spine and I kept very still and quiet. Someone would return from night fishing and see the destroyed shelter, when the clan found out me and Thiat were missing they would come looking for us.
Thiat tilted his head and studied me. "Don't you want to play a little game of tag?" He asked in a frightening voice. "Ill be it and if I catch you I will kill you." He rambled on. "My three children, one dreaming of leaving and meeting other kinds. My oldest son acting like half his age and the clan thinks he is useless! My only girl, acting like a pretty little doll."
My heart almost stopped. He was mad because his children were "useless" Shame filled me and I lowered my head. My own father hated me because of my dreams.
Thiat looked at me. "Do you like dolls?" He asked me. "I do." He sneered. "I like to smash them to little bits." He kicked at the trunk of the tree I was in and my branch shook.