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[Lincoln]

The story: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2567034&p=81507877#p81507877
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Please read and discuss my story. I am working on getting it published and I would like some Ideas as in: New characters and plot twists.
There are 2 clans. Sparrow House, which exists of smaller birds and Crow Cave, which houses larger birds. Wrens are spread out between each clan.
I would appreciate Fan-Art and Character ideas.

[Schuyler]

Discussions about your story should only be done on the story thread itself. You can also post and ask for comments here or request that people PM you if you don't want someone else posting in your thread, but making a separate thread is unnecessary and considered spam.