TheMightyMeep wrote:@Gwen Trix, same! DX But I do sometimes make my charie go a bit weird because hey... He did kill his father ;D
I hate it when a RP begings to turn into a friggin' 1X1 RP tooDX
Also I have a passionate dislike to people who have bad grammer ;o.o;
I don't know about anyone else, but I need puntuation to read, when you give me a paragraph thats 6 lines long without a comma in it... I just walk away XDSomeone ;D wrote:Molly turned her sad eyes to sage they glowed yellow she bounded off again and went under a tree shading her from the rain she acks like this cause when she was a pup she was abandoned like this left in the rain she grew up by herself she was a normal wolf until she found a glowing rock and turned her like this it was always her worst nightmare to think about it she hid her face in her fur and waited for her storm to stop haunting her with those memories.
Two in one XD
Bigging up their bad past and no freakin' commas >:(
Correction. Three in one. I don't see a period until the end, so this whole thing is basically one giant noob sentence of doom.














