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Help! Need to change lyrics for Chorus!

Postby Beachy. » Tue May 13, 2014 5:50 am

Alright, so I'm in a but of a situation. Our Choir is singing the Maroon 5 In Concert medley, but the problem is one of our songs is Sunday Morning. Whys that a problem you ask? On page 12, measure 88, the lyrics "Steal the covers, share some skin" more on, is a little too obscene for us to sing apparently. We were told to change the lyrics or else we wouldn't be able to do the piece. I have been begging our instructor to let us sing Maroon 5, so please, help me? I'm on mobile now but when I'm on my laptop after school hours I'll post the whole part that needs to be edited. Thank you so much for your time!


Steal some covers share some skin
Clouds are shrouding us in moments unforgettable
You twist to fit the mold that I am in


These are the lyrics we need to change but the middle part can stay the same. Yes I just found out five minutes ago that they need to rhyme, sound appropriate, and needs to be in the same tempo/beat.
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Re: Help! Need to change lyrics for Chorus!

Postby *JACKAL* » Tue May 13, 2014 6:30 am

Steal the covers, snuggle up????

Don't know something that rhymes though, (Depending on if it rhymes in the first place.)

This could possibly go on one of the other lyric threads though. But we'll see.












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Re: Help! Need to change lyrics for Chorus!

Postby tawnypelt3 » Tue May 13, 2014 8:56 am

"Pull the curtains, share some sun."

It's a Sunday morning. *shrug* I do know the song, it's pretty good.
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Re: Help! Need to change lyrics for Chorus!

Postby Beachy. » Wed May 14, 2014 4:40 am

I really do like these suggestions, I talked with my instructor about it too! He likes it, but he said it needs to rhyme which bugs me a lot. I said we could keep the lyrics and people can just assume it's cuddling, but he said not everyone would get it.
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Re: Help! Need to change lyrics for Chorus!

Postby *JACKAL* » Thu May 15, 2014 12:18 am

Pull the curtains, share some sun
Blue skies are shrouding us in moments unforgettable
We'll always be together having fun












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Re: Help! Need to change lyrics for Chorus!

Postby Beachy. » Thu May 15, 2014 8:36 am

*JACKAL* wrote:Pull the curtains, share some sun
Blue skies are shrouding us in moments unforgettable
We'll always be together having fun


Oh my god it's perfect! I showed my instructor and he said it was acceptable! I made sure to tell him that I wasn't the one to come up with it, so don't worry lol Thank you so much!!!
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Re: Help! Need to change lyrics for Chorus!

Postby *JACKAL* » Thu May 15, 2014 6:59 pm

Yep copyright me and tawny, I liked her first line so I went with that and developed it. Thing is I don't know the song and didn't listen to it. So I hope it works.












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