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Lourene wrote:I'm sick and tired of trying to get people to like me.
I'm the girl that nobody cares about. i'm the girl thats just a minor background character.
I'm the girl that everybody calls a gross maggot. i'm the girl that has no friends.
And it'll stay that way.
I dont care. I'll tell them that I like MLP FIM.
I'll tell them i'm friends with the most unpopular girl at school.
I'll tell them the truth. I'll tell them everything.
;__________; Brbcryingforever.






Lourene wrote:I'm sick and tired of trying to get people to like me.
I'm the girl that nobody cares about. i'm the girl thats just a minor background character.
I'm the girl that everybody calls a gross maggot. i'm the girl that has no friends.
And it'll stay that way.
I dont care. I'll tell them that I like MLP FIM.
I'll tell them i'm friends with the most unpopular girl at school.
I'll tell them the truth. I'll tell them everything.
;__________; Brbcryingforever.


Koiyote wrote:Oh god.
A person in class wanted me to critique their writing. So you know, I get it in an email.
It's this short story thingy...and holy omg.
At her age, she's still mixing tenses up. Badly.
As in:
" He reached for the book and opens it."
ANDANDAND mixing up her person. I swear, every other paragraph she switches between 1st and 3rd person.
Not to mention run-ons, comma splices, grammatical errors, misspelled words, and things like it's, its, their, they're, there, too, and to getting mixed up.
HOW DO I RESPOND.
ASDFGHJKL;
I DON'T WANT TO SEEM LIKE WRITING NAZI.


[ Seneca Crane ] wrote:Compliments. I hate getting them. They make me feel worse about myself.
♥ • ♥ • ♥
"Yeah, you may t.h.i.n.k that I'm a zero but, hey, e.v.e.r.y.o.n.e you wanna be probably started off like ME"
| L o s e r |
I'll go where s.e.c.r.e.t.s are sold,
Where roses u n f o l d.
I'll sleep as time goes by.
So hurting here is where I belong dreaming a song
| F r e a k |
I'm not thinkin' 'bout you h.a.t.e.r.s because heyI could be a {S U P E R S T A R} I'll see you when you wash my car
♥ • ♥ • ♥
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Lourene wrote:I'm sick and tired of trying to get people to like me.
I'm the girl that nobody cares about. i'm the girl thats just a minor background character.
I'm the girl that everybody calls a gross maggot. i'm the girl that has no friends.
And it'll stay that way.
I dont care. I'll tell them that I like MLP FIM.
I'll tell them i'm friends with the most unpopular girl at school.
I'll tell them the truth. I'll tell them everything.
;__________; Brbcryingforever.
Mintey8 wrote:Lourene wrote:I'm sick and tired of trying to get people to like me.
I'm the girl that nobody cares about. i'm the girl thats just a minor background character.
I'm the girl that everybody calls a gross maggot. i'm the girl that has no friends.
And it'll stay that way.
I dont care. I'll tell them that I like MLP FIM.
I'll tell them i'm friends with the most unpopular girl at school.
I'll tell them the truth. I'll tell them everything.
;__________; Brbcryingforever.
-hugs-ButThis may be snarky, and idiotic, and rude, and such.
But I'm tired of people using my special wolf mug.
That was a gift to me, and my coffee cup, if I don't drink like 3 cups of coffee in the morning, I can't make it through the day... without falling asleep.
With that,
Dear Brother, keep yourself, and your child away from my mug, if that thing breaks, You are buying me a new one.




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