User name: ~Rue~
Finished Character (Link Please):
Here!Male/Female?: Male
Personality: Darker, fierce, a great leader, loyal.
History: Long ago, when there were still unicorns that roamed the land... (I know, cheesy, but keep reading, it gets more bearable, xD) There was two kinds of unicorns in that age, the ones that most people tend to think about (pure white, pretty, had healing powers, ate butterflies and pooped rainbows, etc...) and the Dark Unicorns (dun dun dun......) The dark uni's were dark colored (obviously) had dark powers (destroying being the main one) and loved to fight. They would fight to the death. The winner- became the new leader of the pack, The Loser- was buried in a grave

And here is the story of Ash, one of those competitors...
Short Story: The metal gate swung forward, revealing the dark interior within. It was open to the sky, but there was no light shining above. Of course not. This is the Dark Land. The darkness was actually thousands of unicorns, their dark colors bobbing with movement. A few males were still in the air, flying into the stands. The females had trotted from the outside, as they did not own any wings of their own. Ash's eyes were wide with fear as he stood there, taking in the scene before him. He was going to fight. He might be killed before the morning gray sky came back to the dark black land. He didn't want to be there, of course. He had been picked by an old unicorn who supposedly new 'great powers'. Nearly no one believed him, but everybody had to listen to him. Now here was Ash, about to go into a slaughter house where so many of his kin had once visited, but nearly none had left. He was versus The Great One, or the leader of the pack. Which made the odds even worse for Ash. The Great One was an experienced adult, Ash, a young unicorn with almost no fighting ability. Ash was just looking looking back down the passage for one of his final looks from life, when a long bong filled the air. Ash whirled around, in time to see a great black beast of a unicorn jump off of a high rock. The Great One. "Well," Ash thought, "if I am going to die this way, then let me be brave while doing so." He then jumped into the air, extending his own wings and flying up to The Great One, surely about to meet his own doom. The Great One lunged for him, horn pointed straight at Ash's chest. Ash dodged, barely missing the horn. He lifted his horn, and a blood-red glow emitted around it,. He then lunged himself,. He had almost hit the heart of his leader when the older unicorn blocked him with his horn. The Great One then cocked his head, and Ash's horn slid to the side, leaving him wide open. The unicorn scraped at him, and Ash felt a searing pain on his flank were the unicorn had got him. Using all his might, Ash swung back, eyes closed, blood seeping from his wound, and hoping that he would make contact before the poison from the wound went into his veins.
Ash woke up a few hours later in a stable, his home. He wondered if he was dreaming, so he tried to stand up. A horrible pain shot up through him, and Ash looked to the source. There was bandaging wrapped around his flank, and Ash suddenly understood. That was the wound in the arena. He had beat The Great One. He had survived against all of the odds.
He was The Great One now. And with a renewed energy, Ash walked outside and into his new packs waiting wings.
Other?: I hope you like it! :3 And sorry if this is too dark, I really wanted to do something different than the perfect unicorn. I EDITED Because I misspelled a word, so that is why it said that I edited I said 'Luged' instead of "Lunged', so don't worry, I didn't change my app. (If you worry about that kind of stuff, I just know that I do, lol.)